Hydra Iron Man Posted June 24, 2012 Report Share Posted June 24, 2012 [img]http://i.imgur.com/E32E5.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/shi4n.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/BV8Ap.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/GpHPX.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/j6f09.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/e6Qjm.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/3xdkp.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamesgent111 Posted June 26, 2012 Report Share Posted June 26, 2012 Overused images. Sorry. >: 8/10 Just the images as slightly unimaginative effects; at leats give the different colours different effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GenericCola Posted June 30, 2012 Report Share Posted June 30, 2012 well, I was excited for like... 10 seconds. after that, I noticed that the first bunch had the EXACT same effect (which you obviously didn't think through, by the way). Not only is this lazy, it makes for a terrible archetype. The Queen is meh... why even bother when you can just use the little guys? The king is incredibly OP, and is the only reason to even consider running the Queen (to meet his summon req.) When you summon him, he most likely has at least 3 paintmen in grave, putting him at 5200. Unfortunately, he's damn-near impossible to summon. The archetype also lacks any summoning power, meaning they'll straggle on the field alone. The ability to be indestructible is also way too powerful for monsters with stats like these, especially considering that in order to get their effect, there needs to be another paintman, meaning you don't have ONE indestructible monster, you have TWO on the field, and with decent stats, at that. The fact that ALL the paintmen have this effect only means that it'll be THAT much easier to abuse this effect in pairs.if you get three on the field, you can leave 2 in DEF position and attack with the 3rd free of worry. If you get mirror forced or d-prisoned, you still have 2 walls to sit behind. Broken, broken, broken. Just don't overextend and you can't lose. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DrunkenSage69 Posted July 1, 2012 Report Share Posted July 1, 2012 [quote name='Jamesgent111' timestamp='1340729048' post='5962704'] Overused images. Sorry. >: 8/10 Just the images as slightly unimaginative effects; at leats give the different colours different effects. [/quote] [quote name='GenericCola' timestamp='1341059824' post='5964285'] well, I was excited for like... 10 seconds. after that, I noticed that the first bunch had the EXACT same effect (which you obviously didn't think through, by the way). Not only is this lazy, it makes for a terrible archetype. The Queen is meh... why even bother when you can just use the little guys? The king is incredibly OP, and is the only reason to even consider running the Queen (to meet his summon req.) When you summon him, he most likely has at least 3 paintmen in grave, putting him at 5200. Unfortunately, he's damn-near impossible to summon. The archetype also lacks any summoning power, meaning they'll straggle on the field alone. The ability to be indestructible is also way too powerful for monsters with stats like these, especially considering that in order to get their effect, there needs to be another paintman, meaning you don't have ONE indestructible monster, you have TWO on the field, and with decent stats, at that. The fact that ALL the paintmen have this effect only means that it'll be THAT much easier to abuse this effect in pairs.if you get three on the field, you can leave 2 in DEF position and attack with the 3rd free of worry. If you get mirror forced or d-prisoned, you still have 2 walls to sit behind. Broken, broken, broken. Just don't overextend and you can't lose. [/quote] I agree with both of them. The idea behind them is alright but the originality was thrown out the window after I read the same effect twice in a row. If you rethink this set through, it can be much better. King is Oped and Queen is practically useless. Also, work on OCG (card grammar). Overall: 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hydra Iron Man Posted July 13, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 13, 2012 PLEASE NO MEAN COMMENTS Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
newhat Posted July 13, 2012 Report Share Posted July 13, 2012 It's OK to have monsters with the same effect if it serves some higher purpose. But if you have 2 Paintment with different names, the only point in getting a third one is to protect Queen, and the only purpose in protecting Queen is to get out King. King is very strong, but approximately balanced because you have to Normal Summon Queen to get him. You CAN lose even with multiple Paintmen out; they are not Watthoppers and they are not immune to Dark Hole and so forth. Overall, you could have used some different effects to make this interesting. [quote name='Hydra Iron Man' timestamp='1342193103' post='5976522'] PLEASE NO MEAN COMMENTS [/quote] [font=times new roman,times,serif]you pile of clumpy quail sweets [/font][font=times new roman,times,serif]go ride a bike made of drinks[/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phœnīcius Infīnius VII Posted July 13, 2012 Report Share Posted July 13, 2012 You need to edit some OCG but I'm not correcting you without lore haha, but anyways I do like. Simple yet effective ya know? The graphics on the cards are really cool. Good job here man. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
homerunbom12 Posted July 19, 2012 Report Share Posted July 19, 2012 Alright i suppose, but too repetitive Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alpakha Posted July 20, 2012 Report Share Posted July 20, 2012 Srry but i'm gonna be pretty much an ass... prepare urself 1. Effects uncreative and have a balance problem (some are too weak while others just Oped). 2. Pics are blurry and the original Pictures are very good quality 3. Card names are the names of the pictures u found o.0, why u no pick new name 5. Ocg bad i realiz ur new, but PLZ work on these cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrimeAceJohn Posted July 21, 2012 Report Share Posted July 21, 2012 Sick! Where'd you get the pix?! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hydra Iron Man Posted July 21, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 21, 2012 WHY DO YOU GUYS INSULT ME? WHY NOT TYPE UP "AGE OF THE DARK RIDERS" ONE MORE MEAN COMMENT AND IM REPORTING YOU. SORYY IF I DO BUT ITS FOR YOUR OWN GOOD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted July 21, 2012 Report Share Posted July 21, 2012 [quote name='Hydra Iron Man' timestamp='1342907831' post='5984841'] WHY DO YOU GUYS INSULT ME? WHY NOT TYPE UP "AGE OF THE DARK RIDERS" ONE MORE MEAN COMMENT AND IM REPORTING YOU. SORYY IF I DO BUT ITS FOR YOUR OWN GOOD [/quote] Don't post cards, nay, don't do anything and expect not to get your work criticized. Deal with it. And seriously, nobody insulted you. :I [quote name='Kvn523' timestamp='1342766909' post='5983622'] 1. Effects uncreative and have a balance problem (some are too weak while others just Oped). [/quote] None of these cards are overpowered, the f*** are you talking about? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aerion Brightflame Posted July 21, 2012 Report Share Posted July 21, 2012 You could do something similar to the origional six samurai, where all of they have a shared effect, and a unique effect. That way, all the cards would get some use, instead of just the beatstick ones. After all, the 2k beater would see most use. You've got the start of some good cards here, and they could be awesome with a bit of work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alpakha Posted July 22, 2012 Report Share Posted July 22, 2012 [quote name='Zanda Panda' timestamp='1342908081' post='5984844'] Don't post cards, nay, don't do anything and expect not to get your work criticized. Deal with it. And seriously, nobody insulted you. :I None of these cards are overpowered, the f*** are you talking about? [/quote] King o.0......................................... I realize it's slow to bring out, but it's atk will be at a minimum 5400 when it is summned. Its atk should be at 3300-3500 Also red is a 2000 beater with no big drawbacks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miror B Posted July 22, 2012 Report Share Posted July 22, 2012 [quote name='Hydra Iron Man' timestamp='1342907831' post='5984841'] WHY DO YOU GUYS INSULT ME? WHY NOT TYPE UP "AGE OF THE DARK RIDERS" ONE MORE MEAN COMMENT AND IM REPORTING YOU. SORYY IF I DO BUT ITS FOR YOUR OWN GOOD [/quote] I was gonna comment, but this kind of stuff tells me not to even bother. Either you're way too sensitive or you're a troll. Saying a card is bad and why it's bad isn't mean, it's constructive. If all you're going to do is complain about people being "mean" then you shouldn't bother posting cards in the first place, because whether you're good or bad at cardmaking you will make mistakes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gojira/Godzilla Posted July 22, 2012 Report Share Posted July 22, 2012 [quote name='Hydra Iron Man' timestamp='1342907831' post='5984841'] WHY DO YOU GUYS INSULT ME? WHY NOT TYPE UP "AGE OF THE DARK RIDERS" ONE MORE MEAN COMMENT AND IM REPORTING YOU. SORYY IF I DO BUT ITS FOR YOUR OWN GOOD [/quote] [img]http://cdn.memegenerator.net/instances/400x/23801595.jpg[/img] [color=#000000][b]OT: Repetitive effects, poor quality pictures.[/b][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Althemia Posted July 22, 2012 Report Share Posted July 22, 2012 GUYS STOP BULLYING HIM IT'S NOT HIS FAULT HE CAN'T MAKE GOOD CARDS But seriously. Get back on topic or else I'll just lock this and warn everyone who continues to post off-topic. Also, OP. Stop being so whiny. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BoomSlang Posted July 26, 2012 Report Share Posted July 26, 2012 2/10 :[ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
top2502 Posted July 31, 2012 Report Share Posted July 31, 2012 omg antom your being rude to everyone come on well i like all the cards there a 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NoSanityOfficial Posted July 31, 2012 Report Share Posted July 31, 2012 These arent that bad and definitely dont deserve a 3/10. However the monsters look alike and the queen isnt too useful. The king really isnt OP to me considering what you have to do to get it, and if your opponent lets you do that much without him stopping you, thats his fault 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
uan101 Posted August 13, 2012 Report Share Posted August 13, 2012 Wait...you're nearly unbeatable in battle because of the effect of the cards. And the Paintman King is very powerful, I mean, in a bad way. Cards that have the same effect like your King, usually start with their ATK on 0 and with high DEF. Plus, if you're OC is a fierce, strong, serious, calm, quiet, (and other "serious guy" stuff), the cards should look [b]tough[/b]. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jbsg14 Posted August 13, 2012 Report Share Posted August 13, 2012 excuse me i know that it's off-subject but i don't know how to put my cards image could somebody help me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheThieves Posted August 13, 2012 Report Share Posted August 13, 2012 You post on here to get criticised and if you don't like it well........ To bad that's life.... Anyways about the cards... The effects should be fixed to either search out other paint men to speed up the deck. Needs support spells traps and extra deck... This archtype would get run over by almost anything that can blow up a few monsters repeatedly *COUGH* *COUGH* INZEKTORS / DARKWORLDS *COUGH* *COUGH* sorry something is stuck in my throat I guess.... Not a big fan on the many coloured paintmen kinda unimaginative... ITS A CHILDRENS CARD GAME IT NEEDS IMAGINATION AND ****LARGER**** MORE REVEALING BREASTS like come on it comes from Japan (the card game itself) for god sake land of hentai doujinshi and etc. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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