Scrooge Posted July 6, 2012 Report Share Posted July 6, 2012 [img]http://i.imgur.com/CmCZp.jpg[/img] [b]Lore: [/b]During each End Phase, add 1 "Reality" Counter to each card on the field, including this card; in order for a monster to attack or a card effect to be activated 3 "Reality" Counters must be removed from it. During each Standby Phase, you may Special Summon 1 monster from the Graveyard by removing an amount of "Reality" Counters equal to the monster's Level. This card's effect cannot be negated. Once again, I am experementing. What are your thoughts? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MK-ultra Posted July 6, 2012 Report Share Posted July 6, 2012 not bad just feels like its missing something maybe a special summon from hand eff? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scrooge Posted July 6, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 6, 2012 That is a good idea. I shall consider it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted July 6, 2012 Report Share Posted July 6, 2012 You need to rework the counter effect, as how are you going activate Spell Cards from your hand, or activate face-down since you can't place counters onto face-down cards? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alpakha Posted July 6, 2012 Report Share Posted July 6, 2012 So it distributes counters, good, but how is it going to distribute if it needs to remove 3 counters first. First turn you summon it, you try to distribute counters but can't since you need to remove 3 counters first o.0. It just messes itself up and becomes heavy beater that can't attack or let any hing else on the field do anything. Also, that picture is from Digimon, i forgot name but i remember seeing it when i used to watch that show. I'm not a pro (as seen from my rank ) but this is just not a great card. Sorry but 0/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scrooge Posted July 6, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 6, 2012 Then I shall tweak it. EDIT: [img]http://i.imgur.com/GATCK.jpg[/img] [b]Lore:[/b] During each End Phase, add 1 "Reality" Counter to each card on the field, including this card. During each Standby Phase, you may Special Summon 1 monster from the Graveyard by removing "Reality" Counters equal to that moster's level. For a monster to attack (including this card) or a card effect to be activated (except this card), 3 "Reality" Counters must be removed from it. Spell cards cannot be activated from the hand. Face-down cards are turned face-up, but cannot be activated untill they have 3 "Reality" Counters on them. @ MK-ultra I added: [b]During each Standby Phase, you may Special Summon 1 monster from the Graveyard by removing "Reality" Counters equal to that moster's level.[/b] @Zanda Panda I added: [b]Spell cards cannot be activated from the hand. Face-down cards are turned face-up, but cannot be activated untill they have 3 "Reality" Counters on them. [/b] [i]For example, if my opponent has a face-down Trap card, it is turned face-up, but is not activated. As long as this card 3 counters on it, my opponent can activate it, as he normally would.[/i] @Kvn I added: [b]For a monster to attack (including this card) or a card effect to be activated (except this card), 3 "Reality" Counters must be removed from it.[/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alpakha Posted July 6, 2012 Report Share Posted July 6, 2012 A LOT better; now I like it, but i still have some problems (I'm picky ). I think the atk is still too high, you have the remove counter eff but i still think it should be between 3000-3400 (3800 dangerously close to 4000). Also, as mentioned earlier, the pic is from Digimon (don't know why it bothers me so much I found some pics that might match the name (all from Sword-Summoner from photobucket.com). I didn't want to be that guy who yells at others to work but does nothing , anyways here you go. Change the pic and stats then 10/10 but right now 7/10 [img]http://i1091.photobucket.com/albums/i393/Sword-Summoner/beastleadervasago.png[/img][img]http://i1091.photobucket.com/albums/i393/Sword-Summoner/giganticgolem.png[/img][img]http://i1091.photobucket.com/albums/i393/Sword-Summoner/djinn.png[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scrooge Posted July 6, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 6, 2012 I thank you dearly for the pictures, however, I shall not use them! It was this very digimon that inspired the card and thus, I really don't want to change it, although you do have a point. The right, upwards picture (Large creature pulling a chain with a metal eye socket tied to it) would match though. As for the attack, I feel that you once again, you have a point. I will change it, but first, I wish for a few more comments! Thank you for the comment! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
宇佐見 蓮子@C94 Posted July 6, 2012 Report Share Posted July 6, 2012 I think the only problem I have is the 3800 ATK. I love the effect since it makes for great stalls and could force your opponent to changing their strategies, but the ATK... It's just a bit too high for me. At 3800, this card tramples over basically ANYTHING your opponent has to offer. Maybe make a Normal Summon only? To stop combos such as Foolish Burial + Monster Reborn being thrown everywhere for a free 3800 Beater and 3 turns of peace and quiet. And the picture is literally, a very bad quality picture of Cherubimon trying to break out of the card, which fits it's name, considering Cherubimon's abilities. But at least get a better picture than that! Overall: [b][color=#ff0000]5/10 [/color][/b][color=#000000]Borderline Broken, great effect but could do with more balancing. If you fix the picture and ATK issues, I'll give it an [/color][color=#0000ff][b]8/10 [/b][/color] [color="#000000"]Edit: Since you're persistent on using Cherubimon for the picture, I went to DA and found something that might help you: [/color][url="http://browse.deviantart.com/?order=9&q=Cherubimon&offset=24#/d1fq083"]http://browse.deviantart.com/?order=9&q=Cherubimon&offset=24#/d1fq083[/url] (My internet is derping like crazy and wont let me open Tinypic or Photobucket for some reason.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alpakha Posted July 6, 2012 Report Share Posted July 6, 2012 No problem, happy to help. I understand why you would want to use that pic, and I hope others come. With the changes to stats made, I give 10/10 ^^ Edit: i found THIS, from Mewsagi on deviantart.com, it needs editted though [img]http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2010/109/7/3/_Virus__by_Mewsagi.png[/img] p.s. if i look desperate to help or out do others, i usually do. I have this nagging feeling that says "If you did not do at least 90& well, DO IT AGAIN", maybe it's the Asian in me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scrooge Posted July 6, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 6, 2012 Dear dread, that is exactly the picture I had settled on using! Thus: [img]http://i.imgur.com/qUn2u.jpg[/img] I also reduced the attack. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
宇佐見 蓮子@C94 Posted July 6, 2012 Report Share Posted July 6, 2012 Always feels good to help out a fellow YCMember! By the way, that earns my first ever 8/10. (That's not saying much, considering I've only reviewed cards for the last 2 weeks or so.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alpakha Posted July 6, 2012 Report Share Posted July 6, 2012 I editted my post above, just wanted to let you know .....who's seeking attention?...not me.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scrooge Posted July 6, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 6, 2012 @ Dread That sounds great! And thanks! By the way, what combos do you think this card could lead into? @KV That picture is absolutely stunning! I think I should use this one instead! How did you find it, however? EDIT: There [img]http://i.imgur.com/z7uHD.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alpakha Posted July 6, 2012 Report Share Posted July 6, 2012 I have to be honest, I saw Dread's pic, got competitive (as usual) and went on a search spree. Luckily it didn't last long as i ran into that pic ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Scrooge Posted July 6, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 6, 2012 I see....! I did some editing, too. [img]http://i.imgur.com/qHGyI.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alpakha Posted July 6, 2012 Report Share Posted July 6, 2012 Awesome ^^, I like how you made it look like his hand is coming out of the card. Anywyas, my work is done... probably Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thomasmarteen Posted July 7, 2012 Report Share Posted July 7, 2012 You need to rework the counter effect, as how are you going activate Spell Cards from your hand, or activate face-down since you can't place counters onto face-down cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alpakha Posted July 7, 2012 Report Share Posted July 7, 2012 Thomas, did u even read the edited effect? o.0 It says face-down cards are fliped up but effects are not activated. Know ur info before you complain Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
宇佐見 蓮子@C94 Posted July 7, 2012 Report Share Posted July 7, 2012 [quote name='Kvn523' timestamp='1341659293' post='5969313'] Thomas, did u even read the edited effect? o.0 It says face-down cards are fliped up but effects are not activated. Know ur info before you complain [/quote] He just copied someone else's post and post it as his own. He's been doing the same thing to my threads as well. I know, he's an annoying ass hell spammer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alpakha Posted July 7, 2012 Report Share Posted July 7, 2012 Thx for clearing that up Dread, did anyone report him yet? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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