The Twilight Knight Posted July 12, 2012 Report Share Posted July 12, 2012 This is my first normal card. [img]http://i.imgur.com/Kzxn8.jpg[/img] Tell me what you think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garthfunkle Vii Backwards Posted July 12, 2012 Report Share Posted July 12, 2012 bewd but with more def Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AGATHODAIMON BANGTAIL COW Posted July 12, 2012 Report Share Posted July 12, 2012 [quote name='Herman The German' timestamp='1342076675' post='5975171'] bewd but with more def [/quote] No, really? As for the card itself: DARK Dragons exist, but the only interesting thing about this is that it ties with Blue Eyes for ATK, and it's stronger than the other DARK Dragons. The most interesting vanillas/Normal monsters are the [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Mystical_Shine_Ball"]ones[/url] with other [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/The_Agent_of_Creation_-_Venus"]cards[/url] supporting it, [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Hunter_Dragon"]cards[/url] with unique Type/Level/Attribute combinations that it and maybe some random bad cards have, [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Tune_Warrior"]Tuners[/url], or [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Gene-Warped_Warwolf"]cards[/url] with a considerable ATK or DEF. This would strike as the last, but it isn't anything too special. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
宇佐見 蓮子@C94 Posted July 12, 2012 Report Share Posted July 12, 2012 A word of advice: If you want to evolve as a card maker, STAY AWAY FROM NORMAL MONSTERS. That is all. OT: Outclassed by BEWD, at least for me. Why? Because Honest. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Synchronized Posted July 12, 2012 Report Share Posted July 12, 2012 You sir have broken the unwritten rule of Card Making. No Normal Monster is [i]ever[/i] supposed to surpass Blue-Eyes White Dragon in terms of ATK. That being said, it's not even worth running over BEWD because BEWD has much more support and, as previously stated, works with Honest as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Twilight Knight Posted July 12, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 12, 2012 How about if it had 2700 ATK? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Synchronized Posted July 12, 2012 Report Share Posted July 12, 2012 [quote name='Red-Eyes Golden Dragon' timestamp='1342121791' post='5975714'] How about if it had 2700 ATK? [/quote] It wouldn't be breaking the unwritten rule any longer (), but it would still be very uncreative. Why not try and come up with an effect of some kind? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Twilight Knight Posted July 12, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 12, 2012 okay.I added a effect, don't know if you will like it. [img]http://i.imgur.com/xbzOh.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JordanPark24 Posted July 12, 2012 Report Share Posted July 12, 2012 [quote name='Red-Eyes Golden Dragon' timestamp='1342125019' post='5975728'] okay. I added a effect, don't know if you will like it. [img]http://i.imgur.com/xbzOh.jpg[/img] [/quote] It's "tributing" not "sacrificing," all numbers written in a card effect are put as the symbol ("2"), when classifying a monster type, only the first letter of the type is capitalized and there's a hyphen between the "Dragon" and "Type" ("Dragon-Type"). Here's how the effect should read: You can tribute 2 face-up Dragon-Type monsters you control to activate 1 of the following effects:[list] [*]Destroy 1 monster on the field. [*]This card can attack your opponent's Life Points directly this turn. [/list] Overall, it's still pretty meh. Two tributes is way too much to pay for destroying a card on the field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Synchronized Posted July 12, 2012 Report Share Posted July 12, 2012 [quote name='Red-Eyes Golden Dragon' timestamp='1342125019' post='5975728'] okay. I added a effect, don't know if you will like it. [img]http://i.imgur.com/xbzOh.jpg[/img] [/quote] I'd say you're getting there. It's just that, you have to take into consideration when designing a card the factors that make a card playable or not playable. While I'm aware you're just creating this for the sake of creating a card and getting some experience with it, it's a -1 just to bring out, and an additional -1-2 from there, depending on which effect you use. Trying to bring it out is difficult enough, but to actually get much use from it would require even more work and you'd lose a ton of advantage.[quote name='Red-Eyes Golden Dragon' timestamp='1342125019' post='5975728'] okay. I added a effect, don't know if you will like it. [img]http://i.imgur.com/xbzOh.jpg[/img] [/quote] I'd say you're getting there. It's just that, you have to take into consideration when designing a card the factors that make a card playable or not playable. While I'm aware you're just creating this for the sake of creating a card and getting some experience with it, it's a -1 just to bring out, and an additional -1-2 from there, depending on which effect you use. Trying to bring it out is difficult enough, but to actually get much use from it would require even more work and you'd lose a ton of advantage. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Twilight Knight Posted July 12, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 12, 2012 Okay, thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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