SumoBanana Posted July 20, 2012 Report Share Posted July 20, 2012 Hello! Today I am making the Official release of my cards! These cards are generated but with no art, so please feel free to leave art for my cards if you wish to see art in them in the future. I will be keeping a constantly updating changelog for you all as well. If you want to see more cards, please like this post. Also please post any criticism and/or ratings. It really helps! [spoiler=Changelog] 1.x Initial release of cards. 1.1 Deleted Black Hole 1.1.2 Completed 'Galactic Creatures' set 1.3 Added graphic for Darkian Soldier 23rd July 2012 End of 'My Cards!' Written[/spoiler] Here we go! [u]Monsters[/u] [img]http://i.imgur.com/Vbrro.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/sOQAa.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/odBgG.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/y6YiM.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/dMIPT.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/u2T1H.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/okCv7.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/UhTZR.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/UhTZR.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/EFbCw.jpg[/img] [u]Traps/Spells[/u] [img]http://i.imgur.com/HZhsT.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/FDS3d.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/Rrt8B.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/DBXqo.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/AlX42.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/YRgrD.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/1joZ9.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/sutXr.jpg[/img] [u]Galactic Creatures[/u] [img]http://i.imgur.com/LMkDx.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/eik9X.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/woIzT.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/Xayko.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/0mBFt.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/lDtQO.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/FuvyA.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/LvMF9.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/IqAqU.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/OR6Or.jpg[/img] Sumo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
宇佐見 蓮子@C94 Posted July 20, 2012 Report Share Posted July 20, 2012 [font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif]Quoting our great mod Crab Helmet:[/font] [font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif][quote][/font] [font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif][color=#5A5A5A][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)]I'm sorry, this is the Written Cards forum. You're obviously looking for the Generated Cards With Blank White Images forum.[/background][/color][/font] [font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif][color=#5A5A5A][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)][/quote][/background][/color][/font] [font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif][color=#5A5A5A][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)]Yeah. Go to the Written Cards forum. The first three forums here are for cards with pictures on them.[/background][/color][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SumoBanana Posted July 20, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2012 I don't understand. I post these in written cards, they get kicked out. I then get told I should post these in any other cards and now your telling me to post these in written cards again? Now, I am posting these on Any Other Cards as this is where I was told to go. Got a problem with what I've been told? Go and talk to the people who told me. ____________________________________________________ Updated to 1.1. Changes: Deleted Black Hole Reason: Too powerful______________________________________________________ Updated to 1.1.2 Changes: Completed 'Galactic Creatures' set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gangster yo4 Posted July 20, 2012 Report Share Posted July 20, 2012 for dark being or darkian soldier try [url="http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs4/i/2004/225/6/9/Dark_Lord.jpg"]http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs4/i/2004/225/6/9/Dark_Lord.jpg[/url]but they seem like good cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gojira/Godzilla Posted July 20, 2012 Report Share Posted July 20, 2012 [quote name='ドレッド★Toyo' timestamp='1342770465' post='5983665'] [font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif][color=#5A5A5A][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)]Yeah. Go to the Written Cards forum. The first three forums here are for cards with pictures on them.[/background][/color][/font] [/quote] [b][color=#000000]These wouldn't go in Written cards.[/color][/b] [b][color=#000000]OT: use real types, learn OCG and the flavour text in your vanillas is very boring.[/color][/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SumoBanana Posted July 20, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2012 OK thanks and btw what is OCG [quote name='gangster yo4' timestamp='1342784047' post='5983698'] for dark being or darkian soldier try [url="http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs4/i/2004/225/6/9/Dark_Lord.jpg"]http://fc00.devianta...9/Dark_Lord.jpg[/url] but they seem like good cards [/quote]Thanks Gangster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AGATHODAIMON BANGTAIL COW Posted July 20, 2012 Report Share Posted July 20, 2012 [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/273595-good-places-to-find-pics-for-your-card-needs/"]Le best card art thread in ze universe.[/url] And my attention span refuses to let me review threads with a lot of cards without risking insanity. Though if it means so much to you, I could try it one small piece at a time, I just can't do the entire thing at once. :/ EDIT: I did eet. Also, OCG is official card grammar, which would be how the cards are worded. These cards aren't worded correctly at all, but I don't want to do the OCG fixes. >.> Water Goblin: This is AoC, so I won't say anything about the type. Though, if you want it to be realistic, it should be a Warrior or a Fiend. The effect is horribly outclassed though. If your opponent has a suitable monster, then you get to use Ookazi or something weaker on your opponent. The best thing this has going for it is that you get to look at your opponent's Deck, but I think I saw other cards in here that do the same thing. Strength Potion: ATK doubling cards are bad for the game, but this thing is incredibly slow at doing it that you can't use it for an OTK unless the monster can attack multiple times. You should only have it double the ATK once though, or else monsters could reach horridly insane ATK points. Ninja Black Belt: In addition to you needing a Tribute to Tribute Summon this horrendously weak monster, it's also DIVINE. Since this is AoC, the DIVINE can be ignored, but DIVINE isn't really realistic. It would need much more ATK/DEF to make it suitable for a Level 5, or just make it Level 1 or something. Light Goblin: The same thing as Water Goblin. :/ Human Ruler: Making it Level 9 gets rid of a lot of support that it would have had from being Level 8. It also is horribly weak, but it's the strongest Normal FIRE monster. Would be nice if its ATK was 2900, or if you don't mind some random people complaining, making it in the low 3000s. I wouldn't mind it being stronger than Blue Eyes. Healing Fairy: Its type is supposed to be Fairy, right? Anyway, this one is interesting because you would net 2000 life points off of her without using other cards to re-Summon her or send her to the Graveyard. Fire Goblin: It adds any FIRE monster from your Deck to your Hand. It doesn't matter when you get to activate this effect, that is broken beyond belief. It needs more limitations. Fire Fairy (twice): So it has a maximum of 1000 ATK... And that's all... You should look at Ultimate Baseball Kid and make this a better version of him. Dark Being: Strangely, it's horribly weak for even a Level 4 monster, why is it Level 6? But the effect is ridiculously overpowered, more so than Fire Goblin, just because this searches any DARK monster from your Deck to your Hand. This will need a ton of restrictions, and some Level/power fixing. "Grab Dark Armed Dragon" is never balanced ever. All Seeing Eye: It's rather decent, but pure insight is rather pointless. Not bad, nonetheless. Alpha Trap: So, send 3 cards from your opponent's Hand to the Graveyard if your opponent uses a monster effect? Sending cards from your opponent's Hand to the Graveyard is a powerful effect, and this send three of them to the Graveyard for something common. This needs a bunch of restrictions too. Beta Trap: A worse version of Sakuretsu Armor, which is a worse version of Dimensional Prison, which isn't ran. This needs a bunch of improvements. Forgotten Power: Needs to be a Normal Spell. The effect is like Monster Reborn, which is rather broken. But this doesn't grab your opponent's monsters, and you can't attack with the monster, so this is less broken. Pretty decent. Human Noble: I don't get it. All I understood is that is boosts something by 500 ATK. That's not much at all, it's really underpowered. Human Peasant: Even worse than Human Noble, and I don't know what this does either, except "boost something by 250." Poisonous Decay: EARTH isn't a Type, 500 burn for something as a requirement is nothing really. King Pyro: So, he has 4200 ATK? That's too much, really. And, plus, if there are other monsters, this could be catastrophically broken. ATK doubling is just horribly broken and you need to know what you're doing to stop ATK doubling from becoming OTK fuel. Pyra: Weakest Level 4 Normal FIRE monster in the game. Raise the ATK to 1900 or 2000. :/ Neos: Really weak for a Level 5, and the effect is situational to the point where it isn't even worthy of being a side-material. Galactic King: What is this I don't even... Your opponent's life points becomes 100, and your opponent loses all face-down cards on their side of the field. This card is a walking OTK and you managed to make a card more broken than Chaos End Dragon - Envoy of the End. You will need to tone down on this effect a LOT. ._. Pit o Pyras: Sakuretsu Armor the Counter Trap, the only thing that makes this worse is that this can't stop direct attacks. But it gets support for being a Counter Trap. Mimic Matters: Um.... A card becomes another card... uh... what? I don't know how, but this card can and will be exploited for broken purposes. I... just don't really know what's supposed to happen. If it is a monster, it becomes another version of that monster? If so, it's an instant Xyz, and that's just really broken. Super Nova: Worse than Hammer Shot because of the life point cost. Better than Hammer shot because it could kill the monster if it is in Defense Position, and you don't kill your own monster on accident. :/ Darkian Massacre: Attribute-specific requirements are random. Otherwise, it's a specific Time Machine. Neither of the two monsters look Defense-oriented, so yeah, Time Machine is much better, and Miracle's Wake even more than that. Darkian Soldier: Uh, so it Special Summons about every DARK monster in existence... Even if it's in Defense Position, this can just... uh yeah, this needs to be toned down on some too. Darkian Wolf: Level 5 Normal monster with only 1100 ATK? That's incredibly weak. Raising its ATK or lowering its Level makes it more playable. If you want to make cards, it really helps if you know what the cards are supposed to support instead of making cards just for the sake of making cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SumoBanana Posted July 23, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2012 Thanks for the criticism! Here's 10 points for being so honest! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SumoBanana Posted July 23, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2012 Added images to several cards and publishing them on written cards with changes made from Character's advice! Editing changelog for the last time in this thread... I will provide a link to the thread before it is locked. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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