flyboyissac1 Posted July 22, 2012 Report Share Posted July 22, 2012 i take no credit for the image this is a random card i made tell me if sumthin wrong with it O_O. but why are the words so small? i need help with that for the future [img]http://i.imgur.com/n5Lcj.jpg[/img] [spoiler='Effect']This card cannot be special summoned, this card can only be tribute summoned by removing 3 monsters from the side of your field. When this card is tribute summoned you can active 1 of the following effects: *pay 2000 life points to destroy all monster on your opponent side of the field and remove them from play. *Remove from play this card for 3 turns to special summon 2 monster with 1500 Atk and less from the graveyard. *Remove from play the top 10 card from your deck each monster removed your opponent lose 500 life points.[/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AGATHODAIMON BANGTAIL COW Posted July 22, 2012 Report Share Posted July 22, 2012 The words shrunk because you have a lot of lines in the lore. It happens a lot with long effects. 1st effect: Beast King Barbaros does this better with the no cost and total one-sided field nuke, even if they don't get banished. 2nd effect: This is confusing. He banishes himself for three turns, and when do the two monsters appear? Once he's banished, or when he comes back? If the former, then it could be nice for reviving some random stuff that you lost earlier, if the latter, then this is waaaay too slow for its own good. 3rd effect: Decent for a Deck that would also benefit from some awkward Macro Lightsworn build. It thins the Deck a lot and its burn can hurt, unlike most burn cards in the game. The card is pretty decent, but it might work out better as a 2-Tribute monster with 3000 ATK. Tribute Summoning with 3 Tributes is a really slow move, and the only Decks that can afford to Tribute 3 monsters are usually Frogs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xbon Posted July 22, 2012 Report Share Posted July 22, 2012 You have too many lines; reduce the number of lines. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
flyboyissac1 Posted July 23, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 23, 2012 [quote name='A Background Character' timestamp='1342997709' post='5985880'] The words shrunk because you have a lot of lines in the lore. It happens a lot with long effects. 1st effect: Beast King Barbaros does this better with the no cost and total one-sided field nuke, even if they don't get banished. 2nd effect: This is confusing. He banishes himself for three turns, and when do the two monsters appear? Once he's banished, or when he comes back? If the former, then it could be nice for reviving some random stuff that you lost earlier, if the latter, then this is waaaay too slow for its own good. 3rd effect: Decent for a Deck that would also benefit from some awkward Macro Lightsworn build. It thins the Deck a lot and its burn can hurt, unlike most burn cards in the game. The card is pretty decent, but it might work out better as a 2-Tribute monster with 3000 ATK. Tribute Summoning with 3 Tributes is a really slow move, and the only Decks that can afford to Tribute 3 monsters are usually Frogs. [/quote] thanks i will try harder with good effects ill put alot of thought into the next 1[quote name='xbon' timestamp='1343001328' post='5985920'] You have too many lines; reduce the number of lines. [/quote] oka because it seems i had another card with with more line i think and it dint go small like that thanks anyways Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
newhat Posted July 23, 2012 Report Share Posted July 23, 2012 I sincerely hope this is a parody. The card's OK, but certainly not good. The effects seem arbitrary. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thar Posted July 23, 2012 Report Share Posted July 23, 2012 >another noisy picture from an existing Magic: the Gathering card. ...you need to find better image sources. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gojira/Godzilla Posted July 23, 2012 Report Share Posted July 23, 2012 [color=#000000][b]This is better than most of your previous cards, but the image is poor quality,[/b][/color] [quote name='Thar Ablaze' timestamp='1343015706' post='5986112'] ...you need to find better image sources. [/quote] [color=#000000][b]^This[/b][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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