gangster yo4 Posted August 2, 2012 Report Share Posted August 2, 2012 [img]http://i.imgur.com/5XILq.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doc. Posted August 2, 2012 Report Share Posted August 2, 2012 ......................... What the hell is a "core made" monster? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gangster yo4 Posted August 2, 2012 Author Report Share Posted August 2, 2012 like core made sand man or core made castellan didnt you know about those? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
宇佐見 蓮子@C94 Posted August 2, 2012 Report Share Posted August 2, 2012 [quote name='Doc.' timestamp='1343903002' post='5995216'] ......................... What the hell is a "core made" monster? [/quote] Probably a card/type in TC's set. One does not simply review this card without knowing what a "Core Made" monster is. EDIT: [b]ASSUMING [/b]Core Made is Koa'ki Meiru, I think this thing is rather OP'd. It's a 5000 Beater with an easy summoning condition. Plus, this would make more sense if it was an Effect Monster. [spoiler=Effect+OCG+Overall Fix] Light/Dragon/[b]Effect[/b] [b]Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Can only be Special Summoned by tributing 1 Dragon-type monster with 2000 ATK or more and a "Koa'ki Meiru" monster. [/b][b]When this card is Summoned, you can tribute 1 Face-Down card you control; this card's ATK and DEF becomes 5000 until the End Phase.[/b] [b][/spoiler][/b] Still seems OP'd in my opinion, but I don't want to hurt your [i]magnificent [/i]creation too much. Also, your OCG is horribly confusing so I can't actually understand what your original effect is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doc. Posted August 2, 2012 Report Share Posted August 2, 2012 [quote name='gangster yo4' timestamp='1343903070' post='5995218'] like core made sand man or core made castellan didnt you know about those? [/quote] They are not actually in the set, neither are they in the card game. Core Made is not an actual type and if they are, enlighten me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sunn O))) Posted August 2, 2012 Report Share Posted August 2, 2012 [quote name='gangster yo4' timestamp='1343903070' post='5995218'] like core made sand man or core made castellan didnt you know about those? [/quote] Core Made Sand Man reminds me Koa'ki Meiru Sandman. Maybe he's talking about Koa'ki Meiru monsters Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~British Soul~ Posted August 2, 2012 Report Share Posted August 2, 2012 could you post the effect below the card, it makes it easier for people to read OT: after reading its effect, it would make more sense as a regular effect monster Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doc. Posted August 2, 2012 Report Share Posted August 2, 2012 [quote name='Bad name is bad' timestamp='1343903871' post='5995225'] Core Made Sand Man reminds me Koa'ki Meiru Sandman. Maybe he's talking about Koa'ki Meiru monsters [/quote] Koa'ki Meiru monster's suck anyways. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Althemia Posted August 2, 2012 Report Share Posted August 2, 2012 [quote name='Doc.' timestamp='1343904185' post='5995227'] Koa'ki Meiru monster's suck anyways. [/quote] Get out of the section. Half of them are actually amazing. Don't post unless you know what you're talking about. This is probably overpowered though. Considering how you're running Koa'ki Meiru, you could probably just keep sacrificing the core without any real drawbacks and then swing with a 5k beater every turn. Especially considering how it's a Fusion Monster and thus it can be brought out at any time. Might I make the suggestion of just making it a normal Effect Monster? It might see some play, but nothing big and it wouldn't be as strong. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gangster yo4 Posted August 2, 2012 Author Report Share Posted August 2, 2012 i just thought it would be easier because i only have 2 core mades in my deckthis is one of them [img]http://images.wikia.com/yugioh/images/b/b5/Koa%27kiMeiruSandmanTSHD-EN-C-1E.png[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gangster yo4 Posted August 3, 2012 Author Report Share Posted August 3, 2012 I think theres a few more like this i dont know how many Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Des ＨＥＲＯ Posted August 3, 2012 Report Share Posted August 3, 2012 [quote name='gangster yo4' timestamp='1343972570' post='5996071'] I think theres a few more like this i dont know how many [/quote] There is a[b] lot[/b] more Koa'ki Meiru monsters than that, I think just about 20 Koa'ki Meiru monsters and about 10 Koa'ki Meiru Spells/Traps. Quit the “Core Made” stuff and take this seriously and do more research before making a “Support”. Considering Koa'ki Meiru monsters are high ATK Beatsticks, you can easily Summon this card. [s]Actually it is impossible to Summon because there is no “Core Made” Archetype currently existing and there is no material requirements for this card[/s]. So you also should make it more clearer on it's requirements (as Realistic and possible considering this is the RC) and balance it (Because a easily Summoned Level 11 monster that can easily get to 5000 ATK/ 5000 DEF without any weakness is even broken by Level 11 standards). If you actually read the effects of any Koa'ki Meiru monsters, you would know they have a similar effect that you must send a Iron Core of Koa'ki Meiru from your hand to the Graveyard to keep them going (Except Boulder and Hydro Barrier that are clearly the support monsters for utilizing ICoK) and causes a bit of a lockdown on yourself because you have to skip your Draw Phase... Do include that if you want to keep the card anywhere near balanced, because would you really want to use it IRL and other people to use it IRL?. While commenting on the effect, I have to admit the OCG is awful but if you be more clear, that will be easily sorted out by actually comparing it to a actual card. What kind of Summoning is it? Tribute Summon, Special Summon, Fusion Summon (If that you should certainly scrap that part and just list the Fusion Materials like any other Fusion Monster I hope you've seen. If Tribute Summon or Special Summon you should make it a Effect Monster). Refer it to the proper Archetype you are using it as a support for (Koa'ki Meiru not Core Made). Concerning the picture, it is the only thing near decent. But I would recommend your monster being a Dark Attribute or Wind Attribute (Considering Koa'ki Meiru Dragon and Koa'ki Meiru Maximus are Wind Attribute monsters), because Light doesn't suit its picture... Anyway, I could go on for hours about how you could improve it but I guess everyone has their starting point. Good luck with that and I hope you follow everyone's advice (Especially on making it either a Effect Monster or give it some Fusion Material Requirements to make it Realistic) and improve from it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gangster yo4 Posted August 4, 2012 Author Report Share Posted August 4, 2012 thnx im definitly gonna change it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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