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This topic should be moved to AoC or RC - multiple cards, because these cards are not very realistic nor balanced, except maybe Legendary Dark Mage.

The effects all of the cards are broken, as well as badly designed, except, maybe, for Legendary Dark Mage, as well as their OCG. Let me break it down.

 

 

-Dark Mages effect says: "This card cannot be special summoned or set. This card can only be summoned by" Well, if you`re trying to say it can only be Summoned using Fusion Summon, you may want to edit that part of a text, because a Fusion Summon is a kind of Special Summon, so by using the wrong OCG above, you`re preventing it from being able to be Summoned at all in the first place. It`s a shame, too, since it`s the most balanced thing in this set.

 

-Clockwork Magician is probably one of the worst. It`s effect is just broken as well as prevents much player-to-player interaction.

 

-Kazuma`s flip-three-coins effect is kind of interesting, but the effects themselves, are just not well-designed. First off, it just says "get 1 out of 3" "get 2 out of 3" What am I supposed to get 1/2/3 out of 3 of? Maybe if you put "get 1/2/3 out of 3 heads" or "get 1/2/3 out of 3 tails" it would be clearer. Plus, it dosen`t say anything about what happens if you don't get 0 out of 3 heads/tails. I can understand this if you`re trying to save text space, though. But the effect themselves (and by that I mean the 2/3 out of 3 ones) are bad for the game. Especially the 3/3 one, which is pretty much Raigeki combined with Harpie`s Feather Duster.

 

-I don`t know what to say about Blue-Eyes White Magician Girl`s effect, nor about Daughter of Dark Magician.

 

-Midnight Mage Ninja`s effect is broken because it lets you search your deck for a spell with no cost and little effort, and can be used to get cards like Foolish Burial and other powerful or limited spells.

 

-Mask of the Magician`s effect is OP`d, but not broken, because of the effect that makes the monster immune to traps. It could be a bit better, though.

 

-Master of All Magic is just as bad as Clockwork Magician`s. It`s basically a continuous Harpie`s Feather Duster.

 

-Shait`s effect is a more broken version of Midnight Mage`s, because you can use it`s effect with any kind of Summon, and it also lets you SS a monster (even though it`s one specific monster and it`s Dark Magician Girl).

 

So overall, these cards should be posted in Any Other Cards instead. If you`re new at making cards, Any Other Cards (aka. AoC)`s the subforum to go to if you want to post them. I do like the pictures on the cards though, except Mask of the Magician and Clockwork Magician.

 

I`m not trying to be mean. I`m just trying to give you my feedback on the cards, and I`m sorry if you are offended.

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This topic should be moved to AoC or RC - multiple cards, because these cards are not very realistic nor balanced, except maybe Legendary Dark Mage.

The effects all of the cards are broken, as well as badly designed, except, maybe, for Legendary Dark Mage, as well as their OCG. Let me break it down.

 

 

-Dark Mages effect says: "This card cannot be special summoned or set. This card can only be summoned by" Well, if you`re trying to say it can only be Summoned using Fusion Summon, you may want to edit that part of a text, because a Fusion Summon is a kind of Special Summon, so by using the wrong OCG above, you`re preventing it from being able to be Summoned at all in the first place. It`s a shame, too, since it`s the most balanced thing in this set.

 

-Clockwork Magician is probably one of the worst. It`s effect is just broken as well as prevents much player-to-player interaction.

 

-Kazuma`s flip-three-coins effect is kind of interesting, but the effects themselves, are just not well-designed. First off, it just says "get 1 out of 3" "get 2 out of 3" What am I supposed to get 1/2/3 out of 3 of? Maybe if you put "get 1/2/3 out of 3 heads" or "get 1/2/3 out of 3 tails" it would be clearer. Plus, it dosen`t say anything about what happens if you don't get 0 out of 3 heads/tails. I can understand this if you`re trying to save text space, though. But the effect themselves (and by that I mean the 2/3 out of 3 ones) are bad for the game. Especially the 3/3 one, which is pretty much Raigeki combined with Harpie`s Feather Duster.

 

-I don`t know what to say about Blue-Eyes White Magician Girl`s effect, nor about Daughter of Dark Magician.

 

-Midnight Mage Ninja`s effect is broken because it lets you search your deck for a spell with no cost and little effort, and can be used to get cards like Foolish Burial and other powerful or limited spells.

 

-Mask of the Magician`s effect is OP`d, but not broken, because of the effect that makes the monster immune to traps. It could be a bit better, though.

 

-Master of All Magic is just as bad as Clockwork Magician`s. It`s basically a continuous Harpie`s Feather Duster.

 

-Shait`s effect is a more broken version of Midnight Mage`s, because you can use it`s effect with any kind of Summon, and it also lets you SS a monster (even though it`s one specific monster and it`s Dark Magician Girl).

 

So overall, these cards should be posted in Any Other Cards instead. If you`re new at making cards, Any Other Cards (aka. AoC)`s the subforum to go to if you want to post them. I do like the pictures on the cards though, except Mask of the Magician and Clockwork Magician.

 

I`m not trying to be mean. I`m just trying to give you my feedback on the cards, and I`m sorry if you are offended.

 

Thank you for Necrobumping a year old thread >_>

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