Some Slender Man Cards

[Darth Revan of the Sith]

With my future set not being released until Sept. 15, I have decided to pass the time with some Slender Man cards. With some generic effects to add some pizazz.
[IMG]http://i.imgur.com/LIMDo.png[/IMG]
[IMG]http://i.imgur.com/nMnW6.png[/IMG]

[Thar]

I think the flip effect should be "Banish attacking monster" since he only chooses whoever sees him.
The other one is meh. Not impressed with the idea, considering the guy has nothing to be really "enraged" at.

[The Twilight Knight]

Enraged Slenderman is way OP for one. And then there's the fact that Enraged Slenderman is way too easy to get on the field. But other than that, I like the design.

[Lord English]

They are okay, but the OCG is slightly off.
Slender Man:
'FLIP: Select one card on your opponent's side of the field and remove it from play.'
Enraged Slender Man:
'This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 1 "Slender Man" from your side of the field. If this card engages in battle with a LVL 2 or less monster, remove the opposing monster from play.'

I believe that would be the correct OCG for both cards. Slender Man in my opinion is good, but Enraged Slender Man is a bit overpowered having that effect as well as such a high attack defense. I'd lower the ATK to about 2400-2600 an the DEF to maybe 2000-2400.
Other than that, they are pretty good.

You really are obsessed with the Slender Man, aren't you?

[NiteVerse]

The day when Slender Man became a signature card.

[trevorw3i]

I was obsessed with Slender Man WAY before he even became a big thing. That said, I'd have to agree with 'Lord English'.

[Darth Revan of the Sith]

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I was obsessed with Slender Man WAY before he even became a big thing. That said, I'd have to agree with 'Lord English'.
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Oh aren't you special.

[trevorw3i]

[quote name='Izaya Orihara' timestamp='1347128809' post='6021569']
Oh aren't you special.
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Thanks for noticing

[K1dr3@p3r]

How do you make the outline of the cards black like that, that's pretty cool though.

[HulkTySSJ2]

Not bad, but the OCG could use work. Also, the 2nd card is OPed. Try to find another way to lower its power. The 1st pic is very overused, but I like the 2nd. Overall, good, but still needs work. 7/10.
Check out my cards too when you get the chance.

[DrunkenSage69]

The OCG on the cards need some work. Here are some possible fixes (changes are in bold):
[quote][b]Slender Man[/b]
FLIP: [b]Target 1[/b] card your opponent controls and banish it.[/quote]
This card is OPed so I would suggest the following:[list=1]
[*]Reduce its stats (if you want it to stay a FLIP effect).
[*]Have a more specific target for banishing (most likely monster).
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[quote][b]Enraged Slender Man[/b]
Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Can only be Special Summoned by tributing 1 "Slender Man" monster on your side of the field. If this card [b]battles with a Level 2 or lower monster: banish that monster.[/b][/quote]
I don't see this card as OPed because Slender Man would probably be dead after it flips face up (since battle damage still occurs and most monster that attack now are 1800+). I would however suggesst these changes:[list=1]
[*]Slightly reduce stats (probably 200-500 each).
[*]More reduction in stats=higher level of banishing.
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Like the cards though, great pictures I might make some myself sometime soon .

[Mugendramon]

[spoiler=If you want these to keep their current outline but become better]
[quote name='Slenderman']
FLIP: Target 1 card your opponent controls; banish that target.[/quote]

This is acceptable. Ryko is more searchable, and Snowman has more practical uses outside of its effect. A cute target for Wonder Want once you've used his effect.

[quote name='Enraged Slenderman']Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Must be first Special Summoned (from the hand) by Tributing 1 "Slender Man" you control. If this card battles a Level 2 or lower monster: target the opponent's monster; banish that target.[/quote]

Now this is rather lackluster. He has a cool set of stats, and you can drop him by just Normal Summoning Slendy, but that is still a -1. He's completely unsearchable. And the instances where you'd profit from his effect won't be too frequent. My suggestion would be to lower his ATK and allow the banishing of Xyz and/or Synchro monsters, instead of "Level X" monsters.
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[spoiler=If you want them to sound like Slenderman]
[quote name="Slenderman"]This card cannot be destroyed by battle. You take no damage from battles involving this card. If this card declares an attack: destroy the monster your opponent controls with the lowest ATK.

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[quote name="Enraged Slenderman"]Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Must be first Special Summoned (from the hand or Deck) when a "Slenderman" you control is destroyed by a card effect. This card is unaffected by the type of effect (Spell, Trap or Monster) that destroyed "Slenderman". This card cannot be destroyed by battle. Face-up monsters your opponent controls cannot activate their effects if they are in the same battle position as this card.

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[DrunkenSage69]

^^^
I like the effect you made for both. However, I would also add the original Slenderman's effect to the enraged one as well so it still has some sense in its origins. Other than that, I like the changes you stated for making them more Slenderman-like.