New Archetype Based Off On Star Wars!

[JokingVictim]

So far I made these. I plan to make more so I can officially complete the set but tell me what you think of all these so far. Please leave any comments, suggestions, etc. Either way, tell me what ya think.

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Effect: When this card is Normal Summoned, You can add 1 " Single Lightsaber" card from your Deck to your hand. This card can only be equipped with 1 "Single Lightsaber" spell card at a time and nothing else. Once per turn, you can change this card from face-up Attack Position to face-up Defense Position.[/background][/size][/font][/color]

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Effect: When this card is Normal Summoned or Special Summoned (from your hand or Deck), you can add 1 "Single Lightsaber" card from your Deck to your hand. You can only equip this card with 2 "Single Lightsaber" Spell cards at a time and nothing else. If this card attacks while it is equipped with a "Single Lightsaber" Spell card, it gains 500 ATK during the Damage Step only.[/background][/size][/font][/color]

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Effect: When this card is Normal Summoned or Special Summoned (from your hand or Deck), you can add 1 "Single Lightsaber" card from your Deck to your hand. You can only equip this card with 2 "Single Lightsaber" Spell cards at a time and nothing else. Once per turn, if this is equipped with a "Single Lightsaber" Spell card, you can return it to the owner's Deck and Special Summon 1 level 3 or lower "Jedi" monster card (except "Jedi Sentinel") from your Deck. Then shuffle your Deck.[/background][/size][/font][/color]

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Effect: When this card is Normal Summoned or Special Summoned (from your hand or Deck), you can add 1 "Single Lightsaber" card from your Deck to your hand. You can only equip this card with 1 "Single Lightsaber" Spell card at a time and nothing else. Once per turn, if this is equipped with a "Single Lightsaber" Spell card, you can return it to the owner's Deck and add 1 "Force" Spell card from your Deck to your hand.[/background][/size][/font][/color]

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Effect: When this card is Normal Summoned or Special Summoned (from your hand or Deck), You can add 1 "Lightsaber" card from your Deck to your hand. This card can only be equipped with 1 "Double-Bladed Lightsaber" or 2 "Single Lightsaber" cards at a time and nothing else. Once per turn, you select and activate 1 of the following effects:
1. Add 1 "Force" Spell or Trap card from your deck to your hand.
2. You can change 1 face-up monster on the field from Attack Position to Defense Position.[/background][/size][/font][/color]

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Effect: This card can be Special Summoned from your hand if you have at least 1 face-up "Jedi Knight" and 1 other face-up "Jedi" monster card on the field. If this card is Special Summoned this way, you can Special Summon 1 "Jedi Padawan" from your hand or Deck. When this card is Normal Summoned or Special Summoned (from your hand or Deck), you can add either 1 "Lightsaber" card or 1 "Force" Spell or Trap card from your Deck to your hand. If this card is destroyed by battle or card effect, banish this card. If that is the case, as long as this card remains banished, it can increase 1000 ATK to 1 face-up "Jedi" monster on your side of the field.[/background][/size][/font][/color]

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When this card is Normal Summoned or Special Summoned (from your hand or Deck), You can add 1 "Single Lightsaber - Red" card from your Deck to your hand. This card can only be equipped with 1 "Single Lightsaber - Red" Spell card at a time and nothing else. This card loses 500 ATK for each monster on your side of the field unless you have 1 face-up "Dark Jedi Lord" on your side of the field.[/background][/size][/font][/color]

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Effect: When this card is Normal Summoned or Special Summoned (from your hand or Deck), You can add 1 "Single Lightsaber - Red" card from your Deck to your hand. This card can only be equipped with 1 "Lightsaber - Red" Spell card at a time and nothing else. This card loses 500 ATK for each monster on your side of the field unless you have 1 face-up "Dark Jedi Lord" on your side of the field. Once per turn, if this card is equipped with a "Lightsaber - Red" Spell card and you have a "Jedi" monster on your side of the field, you can send them both to your Graveyard to Special Summon 1 "Dark Jedi Acolyte" from your hand or Deck.[/background][/size][/font][/color]

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Effect: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned if you have at least 1 face-up "Dark Jedi Apprentice" and 1 face-up "Dark Jedi Acolyte" on your side of the field. When this card is Special Summoned (From your hand or Deck), you can add 1 "Lightsaber" Spell card and 1 "Force" Spell or Trap card from your Deck to your hand. If this card would be destroyed by battle or card effect, you can negate it by banishing 1 face-up "Dark Jedi" monster on your side of the field.[/background][/size][/font][/color]

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This card can only be equipped to a monster with "Jedi" in it's name. The monster equipped with this card gains 1000 ATK and 500 DEF. When the monster equipped with this card is destroyed by battle or card effect, you can return this card to the owner's hand. If this card is in your graveyard, you can return it to the owner's hand by banishing 1 "Jedi" monster from your graveyard.[/background][/size][/font][/color]

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This card can only be equipped to a monster with "Jedi" in it's name. The monster equipped with this card gains 500 ATK and 1000 DEF. When the monster equipped with this card is destroyed by battle or card effect, you can return this card to the owner's hand. If this card is in your graveyard, you can return it to the owner's hand by banishing 1 "Jedi" monster from your graveyard.[/background][/size][/font][/color]

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This card can only be equipped to a monster with "Jedi" in it's name. When this card is successfully equipped to a monster, you can add 1 "Force" Spell or Trap card from your Deck to your hand.[/background][/size][/font][/color]

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This card can only be equipped to a monster with "Dark Jedi" in it's name. The monster equipped with this card gains 1500 ATK. If this card is destroyed by a card effect, you can return it to your hand by banishing 1 face-up "Dark Jedi" monster on your side of the field.[/background][/size][/font][/color]

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You can only activate this card if you have at least 1 face-up "Jedi" monster on your side of the field. Target and select 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field and return it to the original owner's hand. You can only activate 1 "Force Push" Spell card once per turn.[/background][/size][/font][/color]

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You can only activate this card if you have at least 1 face-up "Jedi Master" or "Dark Jedi Lord" on your side of the field. Target and select 1 face-up monster on your opponent's side of the field and take control of it. You can only activate 1 "Force Mind Trick" Spell card once per turn.[/background][/size][/font][/color]

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You can only activate this card if you have at least 1 face-up "Jedi" monster on your side of the field (except for "Jedi Padawan"). Target 1 card on the field and destroy it. You can only activate 1 "Force Lightning" Spell card once per turn.[/background][/size][/font][/color]

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You can only activate this card if you have at least 1 face-up "Jedi" monster on your side of the field (except for "Jedi Padawan"). If a face-up monster on your side of the field is targeted for an attack or by a card effect, you can negate it by sending the targeted monster to the Graveyard. During your Standby Phase, you can Special Summon the monster from your Graveyard.[/background][/size][/font][/color]

[Heimdall The Watcher]

I have to say first of all, kudos for making Star Wars cards!

For the most part they seem pretty balanced and I like the way you included the Guardian/Sentinel/Consular, and their effects.

Just curious though, why did you choose to use "Dark Jedi" as opposed to "Sith"?

Also, on Dark Jedi Lord, you have (from your Hand or Deck), and I don't think you need the parentheses, unless its some new OCG I'm not familiar with...?

One last thought; since the Mind Trick isn't really permanent, what if you made it an Equip Spell, and it only lasts as long as its on the field?

Either way, looking forward to more!

[Xi-3]

Some of the pictures seem squashed, and some backgrounds seem quite plain. It certainly would not harm their look to jazz 'em up a bit if you can, even if only to colour the backgrounds.

I wonder on the many restrictions on "Jedi Padawan." They seem especially unfitting when you consider that Ahsoka Tano and Obi-Wan (under Qui-Gon) were considered fit enough for battle to go out onto the field with their Masters. The term for the youngest rank of Jedi seems to be "Younglings," although that seems more like a generalized term for children as well. But back to the restrictions, you do not seem to include as many of them to "Sith Acolyte."

While these seem to be generic cards instead of reflecting actual characters, I wonder that you do not include at least one basic Force skill in each "Jedi" monster cards.

The restrictions I pointed to with "Jedi Padawan" work in reverse with your "Force Lightning" card, which should only be used by "Sith" or "Dark Jedi." Among the Jedi only Luke Skywalker, as Grand Master, seems able to wield a version of Force Lightning. It's green, and seems to have a different effect (you can check the Powers and Abilities section of his Wookiepedia page to know what I mean).

Overall this is a good start. I look forward to seeing more Jedi and Sith, and perhaps some specific characters. I have some, in both my Star Wars Legacy sets.

[epicmemesbro]

Cool. Reminds me of my set I did a while back. The pictures could be better tho.

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

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