Union Force - Union monster,Let's Rock

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Slash Tiger's first effect is devastating; that kind of negation on a 1900 Beast-Warrior body would choke the life out of a bunch of cards and work fantastically with Horn of the Phantom Beast.

Silver Wolf is a +1 to Summon on an 1800 body and can search itself. It's also a +1 to equip and synergizes with Slash Tiger, which is fine as you'd need Frontline Base to use it instantly and it doesn't get to banish if it's cheated in with Roll Out!.

Magma Dinosaur is unfair. It doesn't require set-up, it can get rid of important things and it's searchable with Fossil Dig.

Post lore on cards with small text, even if it's readable.

The name you put on the bottom of your cards is cutting up the Yugico mark.

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Site is rather inactive isn't it?
I can't speak for others' behalf, but posting the effects under the cards might help. I spotted one or two minor errors, but duplicating your card's effect with the correction is a bit of a bother without that help.
Also, I personally only look for singles, but let's see.....


I don't like Storm Phoenix. Simply takes away your opponent's options. A recyclable once per turn Mystical Space Typhoon.
Don't judge me wrong, the card is not that broken, and I like the image and all, but I'm judging design here, and having cards just say "destroys/discards/revives/draws" is uhh.. not that exiting.


The Tiger is interesting. Has decent ATK, a cool Ancieng Gear-like effect, and protects monsters from destruction from effects, making Torrential Tribute a quick-play Raigeki. My only, umm no, not complain. Just out of curiousity, did you take the protection idea from that Zexal Weapon monster that protects the equipped monster from being destroyed by effects, and happens to also be a tiger?


Silver Wolf is, as people say "overpowered". You don't make a searcher with Chaos Sorcerer's effect and generic Union protection all in one card.
Your Pegasus already searches, so I'd recommend that effect being taken out of this card. On top of the banishing effect having some sort of cost. It's just too good to be a Chaos Sorcerer with no drawbacks.


I must say, Ocean Serpent is pretty cool. The equipped monster will survive a battle, and one destruction because of it's generic Union effect. Then you unequip it, revive something, and Xyz/Tribute/Fuse/Synchro/Whatever you feel like doing with them.
I'm iffy on the huge DEF it has being a pretty good card as it is already, but that's the type of thing that would best be found out through test.


Magma Dinosaur has a typo. It should probably say "equipped to a monster" instead of "Special Summoned by this effect".
Making a monster untargettable by effects is ok, but the "shuffle into the Deck" effect is bs. If you are gonna do that, at least make this a Tribute Monster like the Monarchs. That effect is too abusive and generic. It does not have the usual "negate destruction" counters against it, it does not provide Graveyard for comeback potential, which as a player, you like because all players like winning, but as a balanced game design, it's horrible.
Soo yeah, Make it Level 5 or something along those lines.... that's my suggestion, and don't make it's stats stronger if you do so.


Oh, looks like we have our answer here. If this card already has a searching effect, you don't need the Wolf having a searching effect too, it's overkill.
I have nothing against the pegasus.


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