AGATHODAIMON BANGTAIL COW Posted October 2, 2012 Report Share Posted October 2, 2012 Many of you are complaining about not getting reviews. While the biggest cause of this [i]is[/i] the fact that half of everyone on the internet is too lazy to get off of their own chair (an ability I'm proud to have), a secondary reason for this is that you are making goddamn archetypes. Now, I know that I usually don't reply to people's topics no matter how many cards are in it, but I feel much better replying to a simple thread with only one or two cards. Next, for those of you who like to post groups of cards at a time and pray to your Miley Cyrus poster that someone will post something [i]decent[/i], learn how to sort your cards. There's this archetype in the works that I may never ever show you, but let's just say that I am. Now, let's also say that my first card is Whirlwinder Fragmyk. It's a weak monster, Level 2 with only 1100 ATK. However, it's the searcher for the archetype. When it's Tributed, I can fetch any Level 4 or lower Whirlwinder monster from my Deck (aside from another Fragmyk, of course). Now, for those who do not see the problem, when you see Fragmyk, you have to look further on to see what the targets are. Therefore, Fragmyk should go after all of the other Whirlwinder monsters that you can search with him. Last, when you have a card, try to keep it simple. If you have a card with 3, maybe 4 effects, then it is essentially more than one card. Now, this may be ignored a bit with the card I'm about to post, but they go together a bit. [img]http://i.imgur.com/RbD1P.jpg[/img] [spoiler='Dat Rock Monster']You can Special Summon this card (from your hand) by banishing 4 Rock-Type monsters (from your Graveyard). When this card is Summoned: All monsters on your opponent's side of the field are changed to face-up Defense Position. This card can attack all monsters your opponent controls once each. This card inflicts piercing damage.[/spoiler] I personally think that I made it where it isn't too fast for the whole Raigeki+Piercing thing. Also, this picture is from JazinKay. I had a better one from El Bartonka, but Zanda went temporarily zany and made those pictures go poof. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MaliceACard Posted October 2, 2012 Report Share Posted October 2, 2012 I like it, very intemedating card. However I don't understand the piercing damage thing, I've never seen or heared of that on a yugioh card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not-so-Radiant Arin Posted October 2, 2012 Report Share Posted October 2, 2012 [quote name='MaliceACard' timestamp='1349192762' post='6036407'] I like it, very intemedating card. However I don't understand the piercing damage thing, I've never seen or heared of that on a yugioh card. [/quote] It's the new card text for "When this card attacks a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than this card's ATK, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MaliceACard Posted October 2, 2012 Report Share Posted October 2, 2012 [quote name='みゆきサン' timestamp='1349193083' post='6036414'] It's the new card text for "When this card attacks a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than this card's ATK, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent". [/quote] Now it makes sesne, thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AGATHODAIMON BANGTAIL COW Posted October 3, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 3, 2012 [quote name='MaliceACard' timestamp='1349192762' post='6036407'] I like it, very intemedating card. However I don't understand the piercing damage thing, I've never seen or heared of that on a yugioh card. [/quote] [size=1]That means it's too powerful doesn't it...[/size] Does it get out too fast for the whole Ultimate Tyranno ze Enraged Battle Ox thing? More than 4 seems like too much, but Rocks can get in the Grave pretty quickly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MaliceACard Posted October 4, 2012 Report Share Posted October 4, 2012 [quote name='A Background Character' timestamp='1349307437' post='6037348'] [size=1]That means it's too powerful doesn't it...[/size] Does it get out too fast for the whole Ultimate Tyranno ze Enraged Battle Ox thing? More than 4 seems like too much, but Rocks can get in the Grave pretty quickly. [/quote] Banish 4 Rock monsters seems like a pretty good trade, now that I think about it maybe you should change the effect to "when this card is summoned this way" instead of "when this card is summoned". I am not sure what you mean when you say "ultimate tyranno ze enraged battle ox thing". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AGATHODAIMON BANGTAIL COW Posted October 4, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 4, 2012 It probably could be alright with it being Summoned by other means like Reborn or Tribute Summoning. And Ultimate Tyranno can attack each monster once, while Enraged Battle Ox inflicts piercing damage. This does both. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AGATHODAIMON BANGTAIL COW Posted October 5, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 5, 2012 I'm wanting more people to state their opinions on the effort this card needs for its self-SS ability. And to a lesser extent, if I should take up on making the Earthquake-like effect only work if it SSes itself, rather than being Summoned by anything. /Bumpupposttoast. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AGATHODAIMON BANGTAIL COW Posted October 7, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 7, 2012 I'm tempting fate and the trust of the government by bumping this once again. This card is really intriguing to me, and I actually made it while back, but I made some finishing touches only recently. To be honest, it's one of my favorite cards I made. /Half-arsed emotional speech. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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