BlackRose0202 Posted October 7, 2012 Report Share Posted October 7, 2012 [size=4]This is my 3rd Archetype creation. This revolves around recycling cards and putting them into your hand.[/size] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)][spoiler=Korekuta][/background][/size][/font][/color] [img]http://i1055.photobucket.com/albums/s519/jayjay2293/Korekuta/119791.jpg[/img] [color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3]When this card is Normal Summoned or Special Summoned, you can add 1 level 4 or lower "Korekuta" monster from your Deck to your hand.[/size][/font][/color] [img]http://i1055.photobucket.com/albums/s519/jayjay2293/Korekuta/119802.jpg[/img] [color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3]FLIP: Add 1 "Korekuta" Spell Card from your Graveyard to your hand.[/size][/font][/color] [img]http://i1055.photobucket.com/albums/s519/jayjay2293/Korekuta/119809-1.jpg[/img] [color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3]When this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle and sends it to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon 1 "Korekuta" monster with 1500 or less ATK from your Graveyard.[/size][/font][/color] [img]http://i1055.photobucket.com/albums/s519/jayjay2293/Korekuta/119812.jpg[/img] [color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3]When this card is Normal Summoned or Special Summoned, you can add 1 level 4 or lower "Korekuta" monster from your Graveyard to your hand.[/size][/font][/color] [img]http://i1055.photobucket.com/albums/s519/jayjay2293/Korekuta/119819.jpg[/img] [color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3]Once per turn: You can pay 500 Life Points; add 1 card that includes "Korekuta" in its name from your Deck to your hand.[/size][/font][/color] [img]http://i1055.photobucket.com/albums/s519/jayjay2293/Korekuta/119826.jpg[/img] [color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3]2 Level 4 Warrior-Type monsters[/size][/font][/color] [color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3]Once per turn, you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card to target 3 monsters in your Graveyard; shuffle them into your Deck, then draw 1 card. If all 3 monsters were "Korekuta" monsters, draw 1 card from your Deck.[/size][/font][/color][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)][/spoiler][/background][/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)][spoiler=Korekuta2][/background][/size][/font][/color] [img]http://i1055.photobucket.com/albums/s519/jayjay2293/Korekuta/119837.jpg[/img] [color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3]Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Must be Special Summoned (from your hand) by having 4 or more "Korekuta" monsters with different names in your Graveyard. Once per turn, you can discard 1 card from your hand to inflict 500 damage to your opponent for each "Korekuta" card in your hand.[/size][/font][/color] [img]http://i1055.photobucket.com/albums/s519/jayjay2293/Korekuta/119846-1.jpg[/img] [color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3]Once per turn, you can pay 500 Life Points to Normal Summon 1 "Korekuta" monster in addition to your Normal Summon or Set.[/size][/font][/color] [img]http://i1055.photobucket.com/albums/s519/jayjay2293/Korekuta/119852.jpg[/img] [color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3]When this card destroys a face-down monster by battle and sends it to the Graveyard, add 1 "Korekuta" monster from your Graveyard to your hand. If this card attacks, it is changed to Defense Position at the end of the Battle Phase.[/size][/font][/color] [img]http://i1055.photobucket.com/albums/s519/jayjay2293/Korekuta/119858.jpg[/img] [color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3]2 Level 4 "Korekuta" monsters[/size][/font][/color] [color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3]The controller of this card pays 2000 Life Points during each of his/her End Phases. You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card to negate this cards effect till your next End Phase . If you have at least 1 Xyz Material on this card: You can tribute this card to add up to 2 monsters from your Graveyard to your hand.[/size][/font][/color] [img]http://i1055.photobucket.com/albums/s519/jayjay2293/Korekuta/119868.jpg[/img] [color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3]When this card is Tribute Summoned: Target 1 card on the field; destroy that target, then add 1 level 4 or lower "Korekuta" card from your Graveyard to your hand.[/size][/font][/color] [img]http://i1055.photobucket.com/albums/s519/jayjay2293/Korekuta/119871.jpg[/img] [color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3]2 Level 6 "Korekuta" monsters[/size][/font][/color] [color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3]This card's ATK and DEF are each equal to the number of "Korekuta" monsters in your Graveyard x600. Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card to Special Summon 1 "Korekuta" monster from your Graveyard.[/size][/font][/color][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)][/spoiler][/background][/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)][spoiler=Korekuta3][/background][/size][/font][/color] [img]http://i1055.photobucket.com/albums/s519/jayjay2293/Korekuta/125639.jpg[/img] [color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3]While this card is face-up on the field, you can activate this effect instead of conducting a normal draw during your Draw Phase. Choose 3 "Korekuta" cards from your Graveyard and have your opponent pick 1 of them at random to add to your hand. Place the rest back into your Graveyard.[/size][/font][/color] [img]http://i1055.photobucket.com/albums/s519/jayjay2293/Korekuta/125649.jpg[/img] [color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3]Negate the activation of a Spell Card, Trap Card, or Effect Monster's effect that destroys a "Korekuta" monster(s) on the field, and destroy that card.[/size][/font][/color] [img]http://i1055.photobucket.com/albums/s519/jayjay2293/Korekuta/125661.jpg[/img] [color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3]You can Normal Summon or Set this card without Tributing, but its original ATK will become 2000. You can Tribute 3 "Korekuta" monsters to Tribute Summon this card. If you do: Target all "Korekuta" cards in your Graveyard; shuffle all targets into the Deck, then draw 2 card.[/size][/font][/color] [img]http://i1055.photobucket.com/albums/s519/jayjay2293/Korekuta/125662.jpg[/img] [color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3]This card cannot be destroyed by battle. After resolving a card effect that targets this face-up card, destroy this card. When this card is attacked: Add 1 "Korekuta" Trap Card from your Graveyard to your hand.[/size][/font][/color] [img]http://i1055.photobucket.com/albums/s519/jayjay2293/Korekuta/125668-1.jpg[/img] [color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3]2 Level 8 "Korekuta" monsters[/size][/font][/color] [color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3]Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; Special Summon 1 "Gadriel Token" (Warrior-Type/LIGHT/Level 8/ATK 2000/DEF 0). There can only be 1 face-up "Gadriel Token" on the field. During each of your Standby Phases, add 1 card with "Korekuta" in its name from your Graveyard to your hand for every face-up "Gadriel Token" on the field.[/size][/font][/color][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)][/spoiler][/background][/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)][spoiler=Korekuta4][/background][/size][/font][/color] [img]http://i1055.photobucket.com/albums/s519/jayjay2293/Korekuta/125800.jpg[/img] [color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3]Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Must be Special Summoned (from your hand) by having 4 or more "Korekuta" monsters with different names in your Graveyard, and cannot be Special Summoned by other ways. You can pay 2000 Life Points; select 5 "Korekuta" Cards in your Graveyard. Shuffle those cards into the Deck, then draw 2 cards. As long as this card is on the field, "Mother" cannot be destroyed. You can only control 1 face-up "Cerberus, Mothers Guard".[/size][/font][/color] [img]http://i1055.photobucket.com/albums/s519/jayjay2293/Korekuta/125807.jpg[/img] [color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3]Once per turn: You can send 1 "Korekuta" monster from your Deck to your Graveyard; draw 1 card.[/size][/font][/color] [img]http://i1055.photobucket.com/albums/s519/jayjay2293/Korekuta/125810.jpg[/img] All "Korekuta" monsters gain 200 ATK. Once per turn, when an "Korekuta" monster is destroyed by battle or by a card effect, and is sent to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon 1 "Korekuta" monster from your Deck with a Level equal to or lower than that of the destroyed "Korekuta". [img]http://i1055.photobucket.com/albums/s519/jayjay2293/Korekuta/125821.jpg[/img] [color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3]If you control a face-up "Korekuta" monster other than "Abyss, The Korekuta", you can Special Summon this card from your hand. When this card is Special Summoned by its own effect, add 1 "Korekuta" monster from your Graveyard to your hand.[/size][/font][/color] [img]http://i1055.photobucket.com/albums/s519/jayjay2293/Korekuta/125825.jpg[/img] [color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3]When this card is Normal Summoned successfully: Target 1 Level 4 or lower "Korekuta" monster in your Graveyard; Special Summon it. This card must be face-up on the field to activate and to resolve this effect.[/size][/font][/color] [img]http://i1055.photobucket.com/albums/s519/jayjay2293/Korekuta/125818.jpg[/img] [color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3]5 Warrior-Type "Korekuta" monsters[/size][/font][/color] [color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3]This card can only be Special Summoned from your Extra Deck by sending the above cards in your Deck to the Graveyard. (You do not use "Polymerization".) When this card destroys a monster by battle and sends it to the Graveyard: Inflict damage to your opponent equal to the ATK of the destroyed monster. During the End Phase: Shuffle this card into the Extra Deck.[/size][/font][/color][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)][/spoiler][/background][/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)][spoiler=Korekuta5][/background][/size][/font][/color] [IMG]http://i1055.photobucket.com/albums/s519/jayjay2293/Korekuta/125848.jpg[/IMG] [color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3]This card can only be equipped to a "Korekuta" monster. The equipped monsters' ATK decrease by 1000 when equipped with this card; is not destroyed as a result of battle or by the effect of a card that targets the monster. (Damage calculation is applied normally.)[/size][/font][/color] [IMG]http://i1055.photobucket.com/albums/s519/jayjay2293/Korekuta/125840.jpg[/IMG] [color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3]You can discard 1 "Korekuta" monster to Special Summon this card from your hand. When this card is Summoned, you can select and send 1 Level 3 or lower "Korekuta" monster from your Deck or your side of the field to the Graveyard. Once per turn, you can return 1 monster you control to your hand to Normal Summon 1 "Korekuta" monster, except "Bushido, The Korekuta", in addition to your Normal Summon or Set this turn.[/size][/font][/color] [IMG]http://i1055.photobucket.com/albums/s519/jayjay2293/Korekuta/125835.jpg[/IMG] [color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3]3 Level 5 monsters[/size][/font][/color] [color=#000000][font=Verdana, Geneva, sans-serif][size=3]Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; add the top 3 cards of your Graveyard to the Deck, then, if any "Korekuta" monsters were sent to the Deck by this effect, destroy cards your opponent controls, up to the number of monsters added.[/size][/font][/color][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)][/spoiler][/background][/size][/font][/color] [color=#ff0000][size=5][b]Ok[background=rgb(251, 253, 254)] these are all the cards in this set as of now. Later on in time I might add - on but im not to sure when. I hope that people can comment, rate, and help these cards get better. Please feel free to message me ideas or comments. [/background][/b][/size][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrimeAceJohn Posted October 7, 2012 Report Share Posted October 7, 2012 Hmmm... Very interesting... I really enjoy the idea of recycling and summoning more monsters to rank up to Gideon. The OCG is perfect. The cards are VERY well-balanced. Though with Galendat's effect, it seems pretty worthless at this moment since their are no spell cards but I would LOVE to see more in this set. My rate: 10/10 Im also very interested in where you got the pictures... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sora1499 Posted October 7, 2012 Report Share Posted October 7, 2012 These pics are AMAZING! PLeeeeeaaaase tell us where you got them! Now, my review, or Mihails will have my head: This is one of the best archetypes made by a 2-star I've seen in a while. They're nice and balanced, decent effects, although not quite perfect like johnhabbib implies. Nendamos's effect loses all of its viability because the summoned monster loses its effect, so you can't take advantage of Zeahan's effect. So what do you have with it? A meatshield that'll get run over in today's meta. Not negating the effect speeds up gameplay by searching other Korekutas, OR you could make a 1500- Atk monster for Xyz summons. Which brings me to my next point. This set is great in and of itself, but it wouldn't last 2 seconds against almost any meta deck. So these would be just something fun to play around with. Despite my harsh words, I really like the set! 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
someshortkids Posted October 7, 2012 Report Share Posted October 7, 2012 i agree with all things said in todays meta this deck wouldnt last but it is very balanced it is great i just love it and get rid of losing its effect for nendamos but i cant really say much because everything was already said about this set great balanced love the card design so i rate this 7/10 its a little underpowered Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackRose0202 Posted October 22, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 22, 2012 Ok just updated this adding a couple of new cards. Enjoy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackRose0202 Posted October 22, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 22, 2012 Second update im hoping i can get more people to help. Please give comments and criticism. Also any ideas. And thank you for every ones help so far. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gimmepie Posted October 22, 2012 Report Share Posted October 22, 2012 Considering that there are a few existing (more powerful?) archetypes with similar strategies these probably wouldn't get much play, but I would probably give them a go. They are mostly balanced and have really good design. A few things to note though: 1. Despite having a good attack and being well balanced I don't know if it would be used even in a deck based on this archetype. Acid Golem (for memory that is what it's called) out classes it. 2. Abisu is a fairly decent card but it requires that you show your hand to your opponent which would put you at a disadvantage. I can't think of any ways to improve it without changing it too much though. 3. From what I have seen you can get away with changing Kuta-Counter to negating an effect that target a Korekuta as opposed to just those that would destroy them. That would make it far more effective also. 4. Gadriel needs "Once per turn you can" at the beginning of its last effect (unless I misread). Don't take my criticisms to hard (although do listen to them) I actually really like this set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aix Posted October 22, 2012 Report Share Posted October 22, 2012 I like this Deck because of its good hand advantage, though Madolches (when they get set up) would have a bigger advantage, however most of your cards add from the graveyard to the hand, which is really slow, because you need to fill up the graveyard first. Hand advantage gives overall solidarity, which is nice. There ability to swarm at all is quite small, however, so I would suggest a way of getting "Reinforcements" to your hand. I really like the pics, where'd you get them? Overall 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackRose0202 Posted October 22, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 22, 2012 @[color=#1E4371][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][b][background=rgb(149, 176, 203)][url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/user/490484-gimmepie/"]gimmepie[/url] - Thank you for your help i included some changes in the cards you stated.[/background][/b][/size][/font][/color] [color=#1E4371][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][b][background=rgb(149, 176, 203)]- Abisu - changed to graveyard since you are right it is to hard to do hands when you need to show it. I put graveyard instead to get it powerful enough to do damage but to use its effect you need to weaken it by recycling. [/background][/b][/size][/font][/color] [color=#1E4371][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][b][background=rgb(149, 176, 203)]- Gadriel - Added a once per turn thing but did it without being redundant in the effect txt.[/background][/b][/size][/font][/color] [color=#1E4371][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][b][background=rgb(149, 176, 203)]@Everyone else - More cards will come showing how to put in grave fast I just need more pics and ideas so stayed tuned for more awesomeness. [/background][/b][/size][/font][/color] Now this deck is gonna be a continuous Spell card deck so brace yourself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackRose0202 Posted October 22, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 22, 2012 [b][font="comic sans ms, cursive"][color="#ff0000"]OK GUYS HERE IS THE THIRD UPDATE FOR THE KOREKUTA CARDS. THESE CARDS ARE BY FAR THE BEST I HAVE MADE WHEN IT COMES TO ARCHETYPES AND THE BALANCE OF THE CARDS. THE NEW CARDS I HAVE JUST PUT UP (KOREKUTA 4) ARE TEST CARDS I WANTED OPINIONS ON SO PLEASE DO NOT HOLD BACK. AND YES I DO KNOW THESE ARE NOT SUPER OP LIKE META DECKS NOW A DAYS BUT I LIKE IT CAUSE IT IS FUN TO PLAY WITH LOL. PLEASE COMMENT AND RATE THANK YOU.[/color][/font][/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackRose0202 Posted October 22, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 22, 2012 [font=comic sans ms,cursive][size=4][color=#ff0000]Final Update has been made until people make comments that describe the reasons to change so feel free to comment.[/color][/size][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackRose0202 Posted October 24, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 24, 2012 Bump... No more ppl like it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gimmepie Posted October 24, 2012 Report Share Posted October 24, 2012 I don't really have many criticisms but I'l take a good and proper look soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackRose0202 Posted October 24, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 24, 2012 Thank you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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