Fuskin Posted October 27, 2012 Report Share Posted October 27, 2012 Dude, tell me why would you create a card with a gigantic effect, that would never fit in a real duel??? It's actually unnecessary. I'd say to you go back to the card creator, just find a better image and a effect that could be used. Really man it's too easy to summon it you cant get rid of it, and simply you get no costs for effect acctivations... its just unreal to be taken seriously. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VideoGamesVideoGames Posted October 27, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 27, 2012 [quote name='Fuskin' timestamp='1351322286' post='6054798'] Dude, tell me why would you create a card with a gigantic effect, that would never fit in a real duel??? It's actually unnecessary. I'd say to you go back to the card creator, just find a better image and a effect that could be used. Really man it's too easy to summon it you cant get rid of it, and simply you get no costs for effect acctivations... its just unreal to be taken seriously. [/quote] Because it is a realistic monster card. Black Invisible Dragon's Effect New partial effect below: Trap Cards you control cannot be destroyed by card effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darj Posted October 27, 2012 Report Share Posted October 27, 2012 To tell the truth, this is in the wrong section because it is not a realistic card in the first place: It has way too many effects. Just take a look at the official card with the longest effect: I don't know which is it, but I bet it has 5 of perhaps 6 effects at most. But your cards have like 10+ effects! My suggestion would be to take 1 or 2 those "partial effects" and make 1 card from them. I have not fully read the effects, but I feel that you might be able to split the monster's effects into 3 or 4 monsters with 1-2 effects each, which is more realistic and appealing than a single monster with 10 effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VideoGamesVideoGames Posted October 27, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 27, 2012 [quote name='Frex' timestamp='1351356148' post='6054954'] To tell the truth, this is in the wrong section because it is not a realistic card in the first place: It has way too many effects. Just take a look at the official card with the longest effect: I don't know which is it, but I bet it has 5 of perhaps 6 effects at most. But your cards have like 10+ effects! My suggestion would be to take 1 or 2 those "partial effects" and make 1 card from them. I have not fully read the effects, but I feel that you might be able to split the monster's effects into 3 or 4 monsters with 1-2 effects each, which is more realistic and appealing than a single monster with 10 effects. [/quote] Okay. What about the spell card and the trap card? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darj Posted October 27, 2012 Report Share Posted October 27, 2012 The same goes to the Spell and Trap. For instance, instead of giving them 2 effect choices, each choice could become a card itself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VideoGamesVideoGames Posted October 27, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 27, 2012 [quote name='Frex' timestamp='1351357040' post='6054966'] The same goes to the Spell and Trap. For instance, instead of giving them 2 effect choices, each choice could become a card itself. [/quote] Okay. That means the spell card becomes 2 spell cards and the trap card becomes 2 trap cards. Cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VideoGamesVideoGames Posted October 27, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 27, 2012 Black Invisible Dragon's Effect New partial effect below: If a Trap Card or a Trap Card's Effect(s) selects this card if this card is on the field or in the Graveyard, then that already selected Trap Card or that already selected Trap Card's Effect(s) cannot be negated if this card is on the field or in the Graveyard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aix Posted October 27, 2012 Report Share Posted October 27, 2012 you can't have continuous effects like that happen in the grave, cards that could stop it aren't usually included in Decks and even if it was banished, you could easily summon it again making the effect impossible to stop My suggestion: Stop piling on all these effects Second Suggestion: You should go actually play Yugioh and see how everything works. Go on Dueling Network (just google it and it will be the first one that comes up) and make a deck and duel some people. Prepare to be owned. After dueling at least 50 times, come back and make some cards. On Dueling Network you can put whatever cards you want into a deck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VideoGamesVideoGames Posted October 27, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 27, 2012 [quote name='AixDivadis' timestamp='1351374902' post='6055163'] you can't have continuous effects like that happen in the grave, cards that could stop it aren't usually included in Decks and even if it was banished, you could easily summon it again making the effect impossible to stop My suggestion: Stop piling on all these effects Second Suggestion: You should go actually play Yugioh and see how everything works. Go on Dueling Network (just google it and it will be the first one that comes up) and make a deck and duel some people. Prepare to be owned. After dueling at least 50 times, come back and make some cards. On Dueling Network you can put whatever cards you want into a deck. [/quote] Okay. What is a Dueling Network? What is whatever cards on the Dueling Network? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aix Posted October 27, 2012 Report Share Posted October 27, 2012 Dueling Network is a website that allows you to play Yugioh online. Every single legal Yugioh card ever made has been put on Dueling Network and you can use any card you want to make a Deck on Dueling Network, then you can go duel other people. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VideoGamesVideoGames Posted October 27, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 27, 2012 Thanks for information. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VideoGamesVideoGames Posted October 28, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 28, 2012 Can anybody can review those three cards? Thank you for reviewing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aix Posted October 28, 2012 Report Share Posted October 28, 2012 The font on your cards are still microscopic... why? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VideoGamesVideoGames Posted October 30, 2012 Author Report Share Posted October 30, 2012 Bump. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aix Posted October 30, 2012 Report Share Posted October 30, 2012 stop bumping, we already gave you so much to do bump when the text is no longer microscopic Try what I suggested and actually play yugioh, know what yugioh today is like I doubt the text even renders on the picture, you know its too long when its like that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VideoGamesVideoGames Posted November 1, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 1, 2012 [quote name='AixDivadis' timestamp='1351639928' post='6057557'] stop bumping, we already gave you so much to do bump when the text is no longer microscopic Try what I suggested and actually play yugioh, know what yugioh today is like I doubt the text even renders on the picture, you know its too long when its like that [/quote] I did try to play dueling network. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aix Posted November 1, 2012 Report Share Posted November 1, 2012 Did you realize that the cards you made have no sort of big strategy? They simply power through everything. Each archetype in Yugioh has their own strategy and playing style. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VideoGamesVideoGames Posted November 1, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 1, 2012 Oh ok. My deck is below. http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/291863-tempest-magician-first-turn-kill-new-original-decks-videogamesvideogames-first-and-second-new-original-decks/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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