Jirachibi Posted November 4, 2012 Report Share Posted November 4, 2012 [img]http://i.imgur.com/Ffji6.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/peX9E.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/N0wWV.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/tRMGC.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/iM3bI.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/fxBaj.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/UIr6x.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/yc7KN.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/333Y2.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/GKu8z.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/rR9Lp.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/NdGGH.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/PU0Nw.jpg[/img] Any suggestions? PS. Tell me if i got the color combinations right (Ex. Red + Yellow = Orange) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AGATHODAIMON BANGTAIL COW Posted November 4, 2012 Report Share Posted November 4, 2012 Blue: With the dislike of E-Hero Stratos growing, this effect, while thankfully is just NS instead of any Summon, is a bit iffy, and I honestly try to keep from making a card have this effect. The only real problem this has though is that it can search itself. While that may not look too problematic, Ultimate Offering says "hello two Rank 4s." Clear: The only thing this has over the other Fusion Subs like Versago is that this can be searched more easily. You could give it a bit of ATK/DEF. Green: Even with the ATK leech, I don't like how this and Red makes Bluo turn into 5600 damage. Outside of being a hand-spell, this is nothing interesting. 2000 is at the range where you could make it Level 4 if you really wanted to, or you could boost the ATK into the mid-2000s. Lil: It's mandatory, so I'm not too sure if it doesn't activate when it's killed in battle like Mother Grizzly. You could change it to "When this card is destroyed (by battle or by card effect)" or something to let it SS off of being killed in battle. It's not much, but it would help. Another thing would be to make it into a color so it can be a Fusion Material Monster for a Fusion monster you may make in the future. I'm not sure which though. White: 100 is a really insignificant boost. You could make it gain 200 or 300 for each. Yellow: As the archetype stands, it can't really fill out the requirements to get this card to SS itself in a single turn very consistently, and the monsters do not have good measures to protect themselves, turning this into an effect you're likely to only pull off if you're already winning. Red: It helps your effect monsters run over a few things, which is nice. However, I really don't like how it turns Bluo into a 3800 double-attacker. Sure, Axe of Despair can do the same thing, but this card actually fits in the Deck better than Axe. Bluo: Basically, it's a Dragon version of Cyber Twin Dragon. As monsters with more than 2800 ATK are somewhat uncommon, the second effect isn't too necessary. But, if you change it to protect it from effects, you have a 2800 double-attacker that has built-in protection... Darkfrost: Red and White? It sounds more like a Black + Blue card, but seeing as Black is a Fusion Monster as well, making Black a Fusion Material Monster for this would be weird and make this much more unplayable. As for the card itself, the power-decreasing effect is pretty decent for an archetype based on ATK modifying, and making your monsters immune to S/T targeting may look broken (it isn't), but it (and dumping Red) is what makes this card good. Orange: Aside from dumping Red, this card isn't as good as Bluo or Darkfrost since Defense Position monsters aren't going to appear too often. Still, it is decent in its own accord, and can cause for plays that cause huge amounts of damage. Pink: The ATK boost is what White should be, which is helpful in stopping this from being ran over so easily. Aside from being Fusion Material Monsters and beaters, your effect monsters really could just stay in the Grave. Still, the effect can help make for more Fusion Monsters. Purple: Like Pink, the field advantage is really just for finishing the game. The second effect should be a once-per-turn effect though. However, since its Fusion Materials are Red and Blue, this card looks capable of inflicting quick early damage. Just NS Blue, search Red, and Poly into a 3800 monster. Black: Basically a pseudo-Quasar for the entire archetype since the extra attack effect doesn't say once-per-turn. Really, you make this, use Red on it, and it's a 4k beater that stamps all over your opponent's monsters, then gets a direct attack, while preventing Mirror Force or D-Prison. I want to say make the extra attack effect a once-per-turn effect, but then it might not be worth using three monsters. Still, limiting it a bit would be nice. You could make an archetype-specific Polymerization for these cards. It should be better than Poly, but not just another Dragon's Mirror. And I really don't think it should send from the Deck, or else you get an instant Black with Reds all over your Graveyard... :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Love of Ghibli Posted November 4, 2012 Report Share Posted November 4, 2012 In my opinion Blue, Lil, and Yellow are pretty much the only good ones. Thought that's just because they happen to be archetype based clones therefore they really already exist in successful fashions. The rest aren't bad its just that I pity any set that is reliant on polymerization since it is a basic -2 to yourself. Maybe there could be some kind of Dragoon fusion that makes up for it being a minus to the hand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jirachibi Posted November 4, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 4, 2012 [img]http://i.imgur.com/UsB0s.jpg[/img] EDITED - I made it so he cannot search for himself. [img]http://i.imgur.com/jdxpS.jpg[/img] EDITED - I Gave him more ATK and DEF [img]http://i.imgur.com/fdloX.jpg[/img] EDITED - I gave it 300 more ATK [img]http://i.imgur.com/zvsE3.jpg[/img] EDITED - i made it not mandatory. [img]http://i.imgur.com/U9lyg.jpg[/img] EDITED - Made it gain 300 instead of 100 [img]http://i.imgur.com/nkodt.jpg[/img] EDITED - I made it easier to special summon and changed the card from polymerization to Dragoosuion. [img]http://i.imgur.com/UIr6x.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/VWhPh.jpg[/img] EDITED - I added 200 more ATK [img]http://i.imgur.com/333Y2.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/9yZNA.jpg[/img] EDITED - I wanted to add SOMETHING to its effect, so i decided to give it the effect it has now. [img]http://i.imgur.com/64QHC.jpg[/img] EDITED - I made the ATK boost 400 instead. [img]http://i.imgur.com/yyNIb.jpg[/img] EDITED - I made its effect only Once Per Turn [img]http://i.imgur.com/MO0a4.jpg[/img] EDITED - I made it so it cannot attack directly if it already attacked a monster New Cards - [img]http://i.imgur.com/W8X2c.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/xzDhs.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/5WlfV.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/W3uA6.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/CQPr9.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/gIans.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/aNN3c.jpg[/img] Is that better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aix Posted November 4, 2012 Report Share Posted November 4, 2012 Lemme go through the main deck monsters one by one: Dragoon Blue: There's no need for him to be restricted like that because first of all Ultimate Offering is limited and second of all Gadgets would do the same thing. Dragoon Clear: There's already cards like this, but can be used for any fusion. King of the Swamp also allows you to search polymerization Dragoon Green: Pretty much pointless, make him do something else. Dragoon Lil: It's fine... I guess. Dragoon White: Pointless. Dragoon Yellow: No point cuz you're not Synchro or Xyz Summoning. Dragoon Red: Somewhat useful... not really. Make it do something different. I would suggest something like "When this card leaves the Graveyard...". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
igorlellis0 Posted November 4, 2012 Report Share Posted November 4, 2012 As a dragon-type user, I really liked the set you created. The design is pretty good, and with the corrections you made the effects are also nice. All the cards are balanced, but I think dragon black should be able to attack directly even if he is attacking twice, as his ATK points are not too high. and he seens to be the strongest monster from the set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jirachibi Posted November 4, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 4, 2012 I guess i'll just increase Black's ATK to 3500 instead of 3000. If i DO add the effect of that it can attack, if you use Red's eff you will have a 4000 / 4500 ATK monster that can attack everything and attack directly at the same time, which is a Little broken IMO. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jirachibi Posted November 8, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 8, 2012 Some More Cards: [img]http://i.imgur.com/Oa1U6.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/BT3xz.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/vuMjf.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/3SXL2.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/YbEJi.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/43jQI.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/HoiRe.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/aqPVx.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/imfnF.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jirachibi Posted November 9, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 9, 2012 Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Jirachibi Posted November 25, 2012 Author Report Share Posted November 25, 2012 Bump 4 P.S. i DID make more Dragoon cards but i cannot post them at the moment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seaasaur Posted November 25, 2012 Report Share Posted November 25, 2012 These are really cool cards i really like how you use a lot of fusions so you made a card to do it for you my favorites are neo pink and lil because they are cool, reed has a good effect as well and bluo is a cool name i think dragoon rainbow should have more attack since you need 4 monsters to summon him but dragoon neo seems pointless to me. Finnaly i think there should be a clear and lil fusion called dragoon crystal Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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