Dragon God Posted March 8, 2008 Report Share Posted March 8, 2008 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squall19 Posted March 8, 2008 Report Share Posted March 8, 2008 some grammar problemsthere are some words missing in the cardtext of "The famous lancemen"5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon God Posted March 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 8, 2008 What do you mean there is word's missing in the card text Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jester_of_Emotion Posted March 8, 2008 Report Share Posted March 8, 2008 When this card is Tribute Summoned, increase the of all Warrior-Type monsters on your side of the field. Increase what? I assume you mean attack, and by how much? That's what Squall meant. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon God Posted March 8, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 8, 2008 ok i didn't notice that there was words missing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apocolypse Posted March 8, 2008 Report Share Posted March 8, 2008 I know I've said this before, "Take your time", it's not how many cards you can get on the site, it's the quality of the posted cards. Go over your cards several times before you post them to fine tune them as much as possible. You're getting better, 6/10 for these. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SOUL Posted March 8, 2008 Report Share Posted March 8, 2008 Blurry pics and Errors. Good try tho. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted March 9, 2008 Report Share Posted March 9, 2008 Stuff's missing. Like everyone said, take your time. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stikstik001 Posted March 9, 2008 Report Share Posted March 9, 2008 good job, you posted images! some OCG errors and some typos.. most notibly on the famous lanceman, it says, when this card is tribute summoned, increase the of all warrior-type monsters on your side of the field. check over your work, but they are rather well made. 6.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeppeli Gyro Supreme Posted March 9, 2008 Report Share Posted March 9, 2008 Swordsman's effect is broken. Mainly because he IS 1 monster, and he increases his own ATK, as well as could not be destroyed unless his type was changed. And you didn't describe enough for the second card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glorious eXcess Posted March 9, 2008 Report Share Posted March 9, 2008 3/10....pretty bad...you need basic OCG and grammar lessons Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Ruby Posted March 9, 2008 Report Share Posted March 9, 2008 lancemens blurry but their still ok 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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