Flaxen Battle, new spellcaster archtype

[I Hate Snatch Steal]

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The clause 'sent from the hand to the graveyard by "Flaxen Battle Mage"' [typed from memory!] is that way because discarding for flaxen battle mage is a cost.

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I think that they are decent (I beat a dandywarrior deck with them anyway, but this was WAY after dandywarrior's heyday) what about you?

[Zazubat]

Mage, too strong for a monster you can SS from your hand when you have no monsters, can also SS any flaxen monster, may want to limit it to level 4 or lower, plus you can destroy easily. Add some kind of cost, or tone it down a little. Picture is awful, I have no idea what you did to it, but stop it. Also, you might want to add a lore here, it's too hard to read.

Girl, at first it seemed okay, but then you gave it an ATK boost, which bumps mage up to 3000, which is way too much for that card, so please remove that effect and it's a pretty good card, besides image again, it's just no.

Black Lightning, too strong, since your archetype is about keeping a lot of dudes on the field, this is just too strong. Maybe make it Tribute these targets... I like the requirement at the end though.

Extra Summon, not a good card, it's way OP, you SS any monster from your Extra negating the requirements as I can see, it's not a good spell.

Overall, it's just not very good, it seems like it's cards you wanted, not cards that would work in the real game, so there's that, sorry buddy.

[Mr. guy]

Oh god those images

they make my eyes bleed.