jet bladers, new(ish) swarm archtype

[I Hate Snatch Steal]

So I had this idea a while ago, then I finally managed to find good art for it by screen capping star wars jedi knight 3 (it was better then the alternative, simulated gaia online avatars), and now I am finally posting these cards here. Note that the cards were made before generation force era card grammer was in effect

[size=5]read: These are not starwars characters! I merely used equipment setups from a starwars game to make the apperances.[/size]


[size=5][size=3][size=4]I'm not sure if they are any good or not, take a look and tell me what you think:[/size][/size][/size]

[size=5][size=3][size=4][img]http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m247/somen00b/custom%20yu-gi-oh%20cards/jet%20blader/jetblader-blueinitiate2.png[/img][/size][/size][/size]

[size=5][size=3][size=4][img]http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m247/somen00b/custom%20yu-gi-oh%20cards/jet%20blader/jetblader-crimsonbrawler.png[/img][/size][/size][/size]

[size=5][size=3][size=4][img]http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m247/somen00b/custom%20yu-gi-oh%20cards/jet%20blader/jetblader-elite.png[/img][/size][/size][/size]

[size=5][size=3][size=4][img]http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m247/somen00b/custom%20yu-gi-oh%20cards/jet%20blader/jetblader-lightningfighter2.png[/img][/size][/size][/size]

[size=5][size=3][size=4][img]http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m247/somen00b/custom%20yu-gi-oh%20cards/jet%20blader/jetblader-magitechsupporter2.png[/img][/size][/size][/size]

[size=5][size=3][size=4][img]http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m247/somen00b/custom%20yu-gi-oh%20cards/jet%20blader/jetblader-redinitiate2.png[/img][/size][/size][/size]

[size=5][size=3][size=4][img]http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m247/somen00b/custom%20yu-gi-oh%20cards/jet%20blader/jetblader-stealthassailant.png[/img][/size][/size][/size]

[size=5][size=3][size=4][img]http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m247/somen00b/custom%20yu-gi-oh%20cards/jet%20blader/jetbladersdropship.png[/img][/size][/size][/size]

[size=5][size=3][size=4][img]http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m247/somen00b/custom%20yu-gi-oh%20cards/jet%20blader/jetbomber.png[/img][/size][/size][/size]

[size=5][size=3][size=4][img]http://i106.photobucket.com/albums/m247/somen00b/custom%20yu-gi-oh%20cards/jet%20blader/jetcouriers.png[/img][/size][/size][/size]

[size=5][size=3][size=4]^ yes I know its the anime verison of blackboost, that was the idea.[/size][/size][/size]

[Zazubat]

Okay, lets start with the first, and end with the last.

Blue: First off, Level 4 or lower thank you, getting a 2500 monster for a Normal? Are you crazy. I also don't get what you mean by the secondary effect, maybe rewrite it. I think you mean that you need to Tribute monsters, though I am still somewhat confused.

Crimson: Way too powerful, make it once per turn. Other effect is okay, not too powerful, though honestly, the first effect is enough to make me want to keep 3 of these guys around.

Elite: I cannot read anything at all, and if I would try, my eyes would pop out.

Lightning: Easier way to write this card: If you control a face-up "Jet Blader" monster, except "Jet Blader - Lightning Fighter": You can Special Summon this card from your hand.
The draw effect, I actually now see your reason for having Crimson, and maybe make it so it can only be used once per turn, otherwise you will be drawing a lot. Also, 2100 is a bit much for it's effect, and maybe make it a Level 5 so it can't be an easy Xyz Material.

Magitech: You don't write 1) and 2), you write it with bullets instead. Look at BLS to see what I mean. Also, just say Once per turn, no need for the extra text. Also, something I need to say, for the love of god, capitalize your Special Summons and Levels, it's getting on my nerves that people don't do this. Anyways, the effect, make it so it can't target the discarded card, or make it target a card before you discard, otherwise you can. The Spell/Trap pop is pretty OP since it's basicly a MST once per turn, plus it can just regen a Jet Blade. Maybe make it so only 1 Magitech can exist, or make it can't SS itself if you control a Magitech.

Red: So it's a better red, why even have Blue then? I mean 200 atk isn't that much, I would rather want to run a bunch of Reds in my deck instead of Blues.

Stealth: Okay, no downsides, plus it's a Mirror Force protector plus a MST, maybe if it had lower ATK it would be exceptable, but right now, it's a no go for me.

Drop Ship: You effect makes no sense. First you say that you can add 1 card, but if it's a Level 4 or lower, instead you can add a level 4 or lower. What?! Your secondary effect is also written weirdly. Rather say this: Once: This face-up card you control cannot be destroyed. I also think you should make it a field, otherwise you can just keep on the adding with 3 of these cards.

Jey Bomber: Pop/MST plus negate in one card without a cost? Okay, but if you ask me, add one.

Jet Couriers: Hmm that Pot of Greed, how I love you, really now, you ever thought this was not powerful? I would make it so you had to destroy 2, but even then since this arche swarms like crazy, I would see no point. Simply said, try to change this to something else.

Overall: Needs a lot of fixes, OCG and balance mostly. It's really freaking OP at the moment.