This card sucks don't run it ever

[AGATHODAIMON BANGTAIL COW]

Mfw when I realized that I can just right-click the picture, save it, and paste it here without going to Tinypic. Now watch as it won't show up for you guys. Maybe. I don't know.
[IMG]http://i46.tinypic.com/f44bpe.png[/IMG]

You cannot add this card from your Deck or Graveyard to your hand, except by drawing. Your opponent cannot target this card for a [url="http://yugico.com/yugioh-cards/search?sst=s"]Spell[/url] Card's [url="http://yugico.com/yugioh-cards/search?st1=Effect"]effect[/url]. This card cannot be destroyed by the [url="http://yugico.com/yugioh-cards/search?st1=Effect"]effect[/url] of a [url="http://yugico.com/yugioh-cards/search?sst=m"]monster[/url] that was Summoned during this turn. When this card destroys a [url="http://yugico.com/yugioh-cards/search?sst=m"]monster[/url] by battle: You can target 1 card on the [url="http://yugico.com/yugioh-cards/search?ssp=Field"]field[/url]; destroy that target. Your opponent can discard 1 card to negate this [url="http://yugico.com/yugioh-cards/search?st1=Effect"]effect[/url]. When this card is attacked: You can discard 1 non-[url="http://yugico.com/yugioh-cards/search?sst=m"]monster[/url] card; destroy the attacking [url="http://yugico.com/yugioh-cards/search?sst=m"]monster[/url].

We need more elephants in this game.

[DeathWielder]

Nope, didn't show up. And, that card seems fairly random to me.

[AGATHODAIMON BANGTAIL COW]

So, after me catching a lot of other members peeking at this thread and saying NOTHING about it, it turns out that people couldn't see it? Oh well, I updated the OP by posting a link from Tinypic, so it should show up for you. And the effects are probably too random. I tried to make them work together somewhat, but it may still just be a pile of random things. :/

[Sander]

See, this is why I don't even bother to try and improve this section anymore. All the effort I've put into this section, all the lectures about card balance; worthless. It's a Level 4 2000 beater Machine, that inflicts piercing damage and nets you field advantage and for what? Just destroying a monster in battle? Let's not forget that it's searchable and it turns into a 4k beater with Limiter Removal.

[Rainagain]

too OP ...
You should lower its stats (i think it should have 1000ATK)/ or maybe, make it hard to summon (cannot normal summon or set...)
The last eff is pretty broken too, you should limit it to once per turn, or change the cost (discard 2 cards), or change the effect (discard 1 card to increase 500 ATK?... maybe...)
But i like the picture... beautiful

[thesynchrohero]

I think the effect should be like this :[size=3] [b]This card cannot be targeted[/b][/size][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)] for a [/background][/size][/font][/color][url="http://yugico.com/yugioh-cards/search?sst=s"]Spell[/url][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)] Card's [/background][/size][/font][/color][url="http://yugico.com/yugioh-cards/search?st1=Effect"]effect[/url][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)]. This card cannot be destroyed by the [/background][/size][/font][/color][url="http://yugico.com/yugioh-cards/search?st1=Effect"]effect[/url][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)] of a [/background][/size][/font][/color][url="http://yugico.com/yugioh-cards/search?sst=m"]monster[/url][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)] that was Summoned during this turn. This [/background][/size][/font][/color][url="http://yugico.com/yugioh-cards/search?sst=m"]monster[/url][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)]inflicts piercing damage. When this card destroys a [/background][/size][/font][/color][url="http://yugico.com/yugioh-cards/search?sst=m"]monster[/url][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)] by battle: You can target 1 card on the [/background][/size][/font][/color][url="http://yugico.com/yugioh-cards/search?ssp=Field"]field[/url][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)]; destroy that target. When this card is attacked: You can discard 1 card; destroy the attacking [/background][/size][/font][/color][url="http://yugico.com/yugioh-cards/search?sst=m"]monster[/url][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][color=#5a5a5a][size=3] [b]after damage calculation[/b].[/size][/color][/font]

[font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][color=#5a5a5a][size=3]Changes in bold, the first change means it is uneffected by limiter removal meaning it cannot become a 4000 attack point beatstick while the second change means that you cannot infinitely stop your opponent from doing anything to you by using royal decree, a card that stops monster effects and this cards effect every time your opponent tries to attack.[/size][/color][/font]

[AGATHODAIMON BANGTAIL COW]

[quote name='Rainagain' timestamp='1358074485' post='6119539']
too OP ...
You should lower its stats (i think it should have 1000ATK)/ or maybe, make it hard to summon (cannot normal summon or set...) [b]Or I can just do both and harsher.[/b]
The last eff is pretty broken too, you should limit it to once per turn, or change the cost (discard 2 cards), or change the effect (discard 1 card to increase 500 ATK?... maybe...)
But i like the picture... beautiful [b]I have a feeling this is just because it's an elephant.[/b]
[/quote]
[quote name='thesynchrohero' timestamp='1358085194' post='6119577']
I think the effect should be like this :[size=3] [b]This card cannot be targeted[/b][/size][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)] for a [/background][/size][/font][/color][url="http://yugico.com/yugioh-cards/search?sst=s"]Spell[/url][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)] Card's [/background][/size][/font][/color][url="http://yugico.com/yugioh-cards/search?st1=Effect"]effect[/url][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)]. This card cannot be destroyed by the [/background][/size][/font][/color][url="http://yugico.com/yugioh-cards/search?st1=Effect"]effect[/url][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)] of a [/background][/size][/font][/color][url="http://yugico.com/yugioh-cards/search?sst=m"]monster[/url][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)] that was Summoned during this turn. This [/background][/size][/font][/color][url="http://yugico.com/yugioh-cards/search?sst=m"]monster[/url][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)]inflicts piercing damage. When this card destroys a [/background][/size][/font][/color][url="http://yugico.com/yugioh-cards/search?sst=m"]monster[/url][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)] by battle: You can target 1 card on the [/background][/size][/font][/color][url="http://yugico.com/yugioh-cards/search?ssp=Field"]field[/url][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)]; destroy that target. When this card is attacked: You can discard 1 card; destroy the attacking [/background][/size][/font][/color][url="http://yugico.com/yugioh-cards/search?sst=m"]monster[/url][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][color=#5a5a5a][size=3] [b]after damage calculation[/b].[/size][/color][/font]

[font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][color=#5a5a5a][size=3]Changes in bold, the first change means it is uneffected by limiter removal meaning it cannot become a 4000 attack point beatstick while the second change means that you cannot infinitely stop your opponent from doing anything to you by using royal decree, a card that stops monster effects and this cards effect every time your opponent tries to attack.[/size][/color][/font]
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Limiter Removal doesn't target. But pity the fool who EVER ends up against one of these equipped with a UWS, because it would definitely become a SOSCARY 1600 Level 5 monster then!


Ok, so what did I do...? Decrease its ATK to 800, made it Level 5, made it unable to be SSed, your opponent can discard to negate the effect that kills a card, the Sakuretsu effect is only 1/turn, and it can't pierce (as if it will kill anything now). Because it is the most broken monster RC has ever seen and needed FIVE fixes to make it unbroken.



Edit: Overreaction done now. Card was improved from the previous state of being not worth being used ever.

[Rainagain]

[quote name='A Background Character' timestamp='1358094781' post='6119650']
Ok, so what did I do...? Decrease its ATK to 800, made it Level 5, made it unable to be SSed, your opponent can discard to negate the effect that kills a card, the Sakuretsu effect is only 1/turn, and it can't pierce (as if it will kill anything now). Because it is the most broken monster RC has ever seen and needed FIVE fixes to make it unbroken.

Edit: Overreaction done now. Card was improved from the previous state of being not worth being used ever.
[/quote]
800is too low, 1500 is fine, and yes, i like the effect that opponent can discard to negate eff that kills card, good thinking

[vbloke]

it showed up and it looks pretty cool to me












The V

[AGATHODAIMON BANGTAIL COW]

[quote name='Rainagain' timestamp='1358166380' post='6120482']
800is too low, 1500 is fine, and yes, i like the effect that opponent can discard to negate eff that kills card, good thinking
[/quote]
1500 makes it unable to be able to kill 90% of what it can potentially attack, plus it makes it easier to grab (Giant Rat), which I don't think you wanted to have happen. I'd rather make it harder to hit the field but still able to kill [i]something[/i] (without near-total reliance on Limited cards) rather than easy to hit the field but really unable to kill things without running power-ups since those are very vulnerable and lowers the consistency of the decks that run them. Oh, and a few minutes after making it have 800, I said I was done overreacting and made it back to 2k (but made it a Level 5 and changed the lore a bit). That way, it can kill Level 4 and lower monsters that didn't get to be part of bigger Summons such as TKRO.

[newhat]

4 effects.

Can't be targeted by Spells,
can't be popped by a monster Summoned this turn,
if it destroys a monster, you can break a card unless your opponent discards,
and you can discard a Spell/Trap to kill its attacker.

First effect blocks Mind Control, Book of Moon, Soul Taker and Forbidden Lance, although Lance would generally be against this card's attack since it's risky to attack into it. Mildly useful.
Second effect is very useful in combination with the fourth since you won't be able to run it over or pop it with Bear or Hyperion.
Third effect puts pressure on the opponent (since they can't generally attack over this due to the fourth effect) although it's winmoar since Mr. Mastodon has no defense against Traps.
Last effect is the dangerous one since your opponent has to guess what's in your hand.

Its DEF ties with Maestroke's ATK, it's weak to Black Corn since that doesn't "destroy", and it forces simplification. If it had 400 more ATK, it would be good. As-is, being Level 5 makes it too slow and Trap-weak to be splashable.

Question: What happens if you hit 2 Armored Elephant with [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Chronomaly_Technology"]Chronomaly Technology[/url]?

[AGATHODAIMON BANGTAIL COW]

Now it can kamikaze into the Monarchs. And I changed it to being a Beast-Type since the idea of this being equipped with Horn sounds hilarious. I don't want to make it have protection against Traps since you can easily shut those off with Decree (and to a lesser extent, Jinzo) and I don't think it really should have protection against all three in some way. But if I change my mind, I'd have to think of another method of protection, and make it something I normally wouldn't do (like with the monster effect immunity).

As for Chrono-Tech, I suppose you just mill one and the other goes back into your Deck.