savior star girl [4kids would call it majestic star girl]

[I Hate Snatch Steal]

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[i]You can special summon this card (from your hand or graveyard) by discarding 2 cards of different types. Each of these effects can be used once per turn: *Target 1 effect monster your opponent controls or in your opponent's graveyard; this card gains that target's effects this turn. Once per turn, if those effects require detaching 1 or 2 xyz materials as a cost, you can discard 1 card to activate them instead. Also, negate that target's effects this turn if its on the field or shuffle that target into the deck if its in the graveyard. * When a card or effect is activated that destroys a card(s) you control: you can tribute this card to target up to 2 cards your opponent controls; negate the activation of that effect and if you do, destroy those targets, if any.[/i]

[Zazubat]

Could you like, by any chance, write the effect cause I don't want to hurt my eyes.

[I Hate Snatch Steal]

[quote name='Zaziuma' timestamp='1358276114' post='6121751']
Could you like, by any chance, write the effect cause I don't want to hurt my eyes.
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done

[Zazubat]

Right then, OP summon I would say, by types I think you mean Card Types right? If so then yes, if monster types, then kind of yes, though not as much I would say. The 3000 ATK for that summon is just not for me, and it's effect is crazy powerful. I would suggest making it only able to SS itself that way, so you wouldn't just be able to CotH it after you used it's second effect. I would also suggest to make it say "you can only use 1 of these effects of "Savior Star Girl" per turn". Typicly card that gain other cards effects keep them to make them not reuse them, but since it only keeps it for one turn, you can use it on other cards as well. The negate/shuffle seems pretty OP for such an easy summon. I don't get a part in the second effect. You say that you target them, but end "if any" which is somewhat cheating since if you don't have correct targets during resolution, you can't even use that effect, so you're making it more powerful this way. Needs balancing, you make it a Synchro/Xyz Monster instead or give it a SS only or something alike. Either that or tone it down to 2400ish.