UrbanStruggle Posted February 8, 2013 Report Share Posted February 8, 2013 The name of the Xyz monster has 1 or more reffences so let's see if you can find them :) BTW this one has 3 reffences in its name! A new xyz monster with a sort cool effect -_- Main Object of the card, you ask? BURN S^!* as battling your opponent is only a band-aid! This xyz is more than a band-aid, it's gasoline you will soon see that! Name Edrolraw the Golden Ariknotron Type of Monster Effect Type of Card Xyz Monster Rank 4 Materials needed 2 level 4 monsters Att Fire Monster Type Machine ATK 2000 DEF 2300 Effect Once per turn, during either player's turn, while this card has an Xyz Material(s) attached to it: You can target up to 2 Level 4 or lower monsters from any Graveyard; attach target(s) to this card and detach 1 other Xyz Material on it. While this card has an Xyz Material(s) on it, if it would be targeted for an attack, or leave the field: You can target 1 other card on the field; banish this card and that target. If you do, Special Summon this card during your next Standby Phase, and place 1 Mechazawa Counter on it for each Xyz Material it had when banished. When it leaves the field: Inflict 300 damage to your opponent for each Mechazawa Counter on it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DopeShizzy Posted February 8, 2013 Report Share Posted February 8, 2013 kinda clunky wording but awesome card man, the pic is funny, a tiny bit op but if u can make ur own cards why the eff not make it op? lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UrbanStruggle Posted February 11, 2013 Author Report Share Posted February 11, 2013 bump . . . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UrbanStruggle Posted February 13, 2013 Author Report Share Posted February 13, 2013 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hydra Iron Man Posted February 13, 2013 Report Share Posted February 13, 2013 Oy vhey. Listen, you need to get realistic pics. LOVE effect, need it shorter.5.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UrbanStruggle Posted February 14, 2013 Author Report Share Posted February 14, 2013 Oy vhey. Listen, you need to get realistic pics. LOVE effect, need it shorter.5.5/10 Oy vhey so . . . where is your gaint robot pic by the way? How can I shorten the effect but keep it the same? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UrbanStruggle Posted February 17, 2013 Author Report Share Posted February 17, 2013 I lower the DEF down to let's say 2300 big ones instead of 2500 maybe it would be O.K.! Burn reduce to 300 instead of 500. You can only attach Xyz Materials during your turn now instead of either player's turn! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drcrisis Posted February 17, 2013 Report Share Posted February 17, 2013 So many effects in one card... way too many. This takes head-aches to a new level trying to read.. I'm not joking. Its never defined WHAT this card takes as XYZ materials, 2 level 4s? 3 level 4s? 1/10, you tried. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UrbanStruggle Posted February 17, 2013 Author Report Share Posted February 17, 2013 So many effects in one card... way too many. This takes head-aches to a new level trying to read.. I'm not joking. Its never defined WHAT this card takes as XYZ materials, 2 level 4s? 3 level 4s? 1/10, you tried. Materials needed 2 level 4 monsters Like for real ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted February 18, 2013 Report Share Posted February 18, 2013 You either have trouble editing the card, or just downright refused my suggestions at Writen Cards... and I don't even mean the balance, but the awkward wording. You can see it's a bit hard to digest and requires going over it a few times. but talking about the card, it could as easily be 2 to 3 different cards from all the stuff it does. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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