master of waves (my first topic)

[card creator 123]

 

this is my first card i publish, please be good.

[Sleepy]

It gains 300 ATK for each Aqua-Type monster in your Graveyard. Once per turn: You can target 1 Spell Card you control and 1 Spell or Trap Card your opponent controls; destroy targets.

 

hmm.... I don't really know. It's interesting. What I'd make it do, is allow you to destroy either Spell or Trap Cards from your side, too. It'd be a kind of Scrap Dragon that could even have it's own Deck around it with cards like Dark Coffin. Overall the concept looks fun. The image is.. uhh.. I'll be honest, it's not a good one at all, but anyways... Welcome to the forum, and it overall looks nice.

 

Real issues:

2500 DEF is too much. I would give it no more than 2000, but since it actually gains ATK and can become a potentially big monster, no more than 1800. Having a card be a big offensive tool, a big wall, and a removal effect doesn't sound too good.

 

One last thing, when you write the name and Type of the card, I know ALL letters seem like they are capital letters in the card itself, but when you are writing it, just capitalize the start of the Type and of each word in the name, and those capitalized letters will look bigger (like the IRL cards do). 

 

EDIT:
Oh, and didn't notice xD
Dat level. Make it possibly 3 or 4. Too high will make it too heavy for many decks. Because it's a WATER monster, you could probably get away with Level 5, too, but I still think 3 or 4 is better.

 

cheers~

[card creator 123]

well,thanks for the advice, i will try to follow it.  and the image was made in paint,funny and difficult,really difficult.

It gains 300 ATK for each Aqua-Type monster in your Graveyard. Once per turn: You can target 1 Spell Card you control and 1 Spell or Trap Card your opponent controls; destroy targets.

 

hmm.... I don't really know. It's interesting. What I'd make it do, is allow you to destroy either Spell or Trap Cards from your side, too. It'd be a kind of Scrap Dragon that could even have it's own Deck around it with cards like Dark Coffin. Overall the concept looks fun. The image is.. uhh.. I'll be honest, it's not a good one at all, but anyways... Welcome to the forum, and it overall looks nice.

 

Real issues:

2500 DEF is too much. I would give it no more than 2000, but since it actually gains ATK and can become a potentially big monster, no more than 1800. Having a card be a big offensive tool, a big wall, and a removal effect doesn't sound too good.

 

One last thing, when you write the name and Type of the card, I know ALL letters seem like they are capital letters in the card itself, but when you are writing it, just capitalize the start of the Type and of each word in the name, and those capitalized letters will look bigger (like the IRL cards do). 

 

EDIT:
Oh, and didn't notice xD
Dat level. Make it possibly 3 or 4. Too high will make it too heavy for many decks. Because it's a WATER monster, you could probably get away with Level 5, too, but I still think 3 or 4 is better.

 

cheers~

well,thanks for the advice, i will try to follow it.  and the image was made in paint,funny and difficult,really difficult.