Guest JoshIcy Posted March 12, 2008 Report Share Posted March 12, 2008 You can find where i wrote the original effect of this card as a way of spite in the following threadhttp://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/showthread.php?tid=31288&pid=481656pid481656 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grayall Posted March 12, 2008 Report Share Posted March 12, 2008 Ypu should crop the picture, the tittle, idiotic figures,and so...Size it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted March 12, 2008 Report Share Posted March 12, 2008 idiotic figures? how so? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grayall Posted March 12, 2008 Report Share Posted March 12, 2008 That way that snake-typicall creature is on the card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted March 12, 2008 Report Share Posted March 12, 2008 ooh... ok lol, next time use more constructive criticism. im not one of those few that actually dont care what people think of my card... i tend to make these because i want to and thus, do care.... but i will not hesitate to fix a card like this... and i am "repairing" the picture now *fixed and has a better name, are you happy now grayall?* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Faded Posted March 12, 2008 Report Share Posted March 12, 2008 I like the picture :D Dont know what to say about the card effect itself yet... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted March 12, 2008 Report Share Posted March 12, 2008 yeah sorry... you might wanna proxy this card and use it in a duel, to find out how this card works.... and again sorry if the effect is stranger than many.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Faded Posted March 12, 2008 Report Share Posted March 12, 2008 I seen that you have posted it in my custom card garage, and you are truly the master of unusual effects and impossible wording. Im having trouble too. Dont even think there are words to describe some of the effect of your card lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted March 12, 2008 Report Share Posted March 12, 2008 ill take that as a compliment... and ill +rep anyone who sees the mistake i made lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Faded Posted March 12, 2008 Report Share Posted March 12, 2008 Well Ill be able to find it if I wasnt in dire need of sleep Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-Max Posted March 12, 2008 Report Share Posted March 12, 2008 Very strange! This looks like it Upgrades Spell Cards to "Quick Play" Status. Also too much going on with the card to be honest. You need to make 1 Maybe 2 Effects on a Card. This looks like its trying to explain too much at once. Just some helpful advice Icy :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted March 12, 2008 Report Share Posted March 12, 2008 Should be "and can only be countered" Otherwise, very good, and a great addition to your other Spell Speed cards! overall - 13.53/13.69 ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LewieGee Posted March 12, 2008 Report Share Posted March 12, 2008 cool card.cool pic.cool effect.9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted March 13, 2008 Report Share Posted March 13, 2008 thanks... and sorry jpsamax... i have to write all of that or else the card may have some loopholes 8/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apocolypse Posted March 13, 2008 Report Share Posted March 13, 2008 Quite unique, I like the pic myself. You would really have to be up on your game to use this card. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted March 13, 2008 Report Share Posted March 13, 2008 up on your game? what do you mean by that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-Max Posted March 13, 2008 Report Share Posted March 13, 2008 Okay, as Requested Icy i'm going to go through your Card Piece by Piece :) "The Spell Speed of this card is treated as a Spell Speed of 4,"In other words It's faster then a Quick Play? Ok i'll just say Quick play. "When this card is activated advance the current chain by 2 instead of 1,"So it makes "Chain Strike" Even more lethal? Not bad! Works well with Cards that Rely on Chains. "This card can only be equipped to a face-down monster," Face Down Monsters can't be Equipped with anything. Can you imagine a World where Monsters could be Defensive Walls with UWS? "The equipped monster is treated as a face-up "Blessed Mimic Token" (Fiend-Type/LIGHT/Level 4/ATK 1900/DEF 1600)."So whatever the Monster is, it is treated as this? Ok.... So you could make a Level 3 Monster suddenly 1900ATK? "The equipped monster may be changed to face-down Attack Position as long as it remains face-down."Another Rule that would break the current YGO Meta. Overall Interesting Ideas but if you even thought of making this Card a Real Card then it just wouldn't work.... Too many Loopholes, Too Much to explain.... I hope you take this well. Peace Out my Friend. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SOUL Posted March 13, 2008 Report Share Posted March 13, 2008 Should be "and can only be countered" Otherwise' date=' very good, and a great addition to your other Spell Speed cards! overall - 13.53/13.69 ^_^[/quote'] I agree with Browarod! ^_^ :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted March 13, 2008 Report Share Posted March 13, 2008 Okay' date=' as Requested Icy i'm going to go through your Card Piece by Piece :) "This card can only be equipped to a face-down monster," Face Down Monsters can't be Equipped with anything. Can you imagine a World where Monsters could be Defensive Walls with UWS? "The equipped monster is treated as a face-up "Blessed Mimic Token" (Fiend-Type/LIGHT/Level 4/ATK 1900/DEF 1600)."So whatever the Monster is, it is treated as this? Ok.... So you could make a Level 3 Monster suddenly 1900ATK? "The equipped monster may be changed to face-down Attack Position as long as it remains face-down."Another Rule that would break the current YGO Meta. Overall Interesting Ideas but if you even thought of making this Card a Real Card then it just wouldn't work.... Too many Loopholes, Too Much to explain.... I hope you take this well. Peace Out my Friend. :)[/quote'] ok thanks maybe i should have written a rule on this, but i must say first, the only way to flip the card face-up is to discard 3 cards... even if it is attacked it cannot be flipped face-up, adding the fact that it can only be done during your main phase 1 makes it more balanced, preventing an attack and then switch to flip getting a better effect. This card is also still an equip card, and as such can only be activated on your turn. it only changes speeds when its properly activated.... As for this card being able to make a level 1-3 monster suddenly have 1900 ATK... thats balanced also because many monsters that are those levels have a better purpose than being a beatstick... this also cripples the elemental hero decks that plan on using this card, because it changes the name included... As for only being able equip to a face-down monster, all the reasons stated above cover most of this. And, it doesnt break the meta-game rules because of every reason stated above... being able to attack while in face-down attack position is just another misc thing that makes it easier to understand what position this new token is in.... now i ask, what loopholes are there? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted March 14, 2008 Report Share Posted March 14, 2008 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beepbeep Posted March 14, 2008 Report Share Posted March 14, 2008 It's - er - odd. Why would you want to play this? The spell speed 4 thing and the skip one spot on the chain effect could be employed to other cards. I like that part.3/5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted March 15, 2008 Report Share Posted March 15, 2008 thanks and its all up to the person.... and bumpsies Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RickiMinaj Posted March 15, 2008 Report Share Posted March 15, 2008 okill give u the mini reviewok Pic: lovely lovely lovely, I like this pic alot so ill give u a 8/10effect: detailed smart and slight OCG so this would deserve a 9/10name: ive heard better but this is not bad at all: it could be a real card name so 8/10this is not bad at allThis card deserves an 8.33333333333333333 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted March 15, 2008 Report Share Posted March 15, 2008 -.- dont all my cards have ocg errors because the text can be a bit buggy? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted March 15, 2008 Report Share Posted March 15, 2008 i like it. it could be a bit more useful, but it is still decent. 7.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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