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[I Hate Snatch Steal]

Imitation is a form of flattery right?

 

 

You can special summoned this card (from your hand), by discarding 2 cards. Negate the effects of all face-up xyz monsters you control. Once per turn: you can detach any number of Xyz Materials from monsters on the field, and this card gains 1 punisher counter from each. This card gains 500 ATK and DEF for each punisher counter on it. Once per turn: you can remove 1 punisher counter from this card to target 1 card on the field; destroy it. If this card would be destroyed, remove 1 punisher counter from it instead.

 

 

2 level 3 monsters
You cannot special summon any other xyz monsters during the turn you  special summon this card. If you control no monsters: you can banish 2 Level 3 monsters from your Graveyard to target up to 1 monster in your graveyard; Special Summon this card from your Graveyard  and if you do, attach that target (if any) to this card as xyz material. If this card was summoned this way, shuffle it into the extra deck when it leaves the field. Once per turn: you can detach 1 xyz material from this card to taget 1 face-up card; destroy that target. While this card has xyz mateiral when it battles a monster, after damage calculation: you can return that battled monster to the hand.

[kossur10]

how do you make the xyz monsters?

[I Hate Snatch Steal]

how do you make the xyz monsters?

 

http://magicseteditor.sourceforge.net/

[I Hate Snatch Steal]

bump, for some reviews this time hopefully

[Gredious AKA. Solomon409]

Here's my two-cents:

Xyz Punisher:
-Small terminology and grammar errors (ex."you can special summoned")

-Seems a bit too powerful, yet easy to summon. Two discards isn't much.The fact you can remove ANY number of materials seems like too much. PLUS it gains a attack boost, and a shield against cards that would destroy it means that this card is far too powerful. Although it was meant to be a counter against XYZs, I can see this becoming a mega-beatstick.

 

I would suggest making it SLIGHTLY harder to summon, and changing the part of removing any number of materials to removing all the materials from ONE Xyz ONCE per turn.

 

Tempest Sphere Maiden:

-The effect is pretty nice, with a minor complaint of it feeling too easy to summon. a combo of two "Tour Guide from the Underworld"s already summons this badass out. Plus unless your fighting a banishing deck, this card can perpetually be constantly summoned and revived. 

 

I would say either nerf her a bit to match the summoning requirements, or raised the requirements slightly.