Exodium The Wicked fiend of Seth

[lagriethedark]

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[Airride]

If it's a ritual, where is the Ritual spell that it corresponds to? For the sake of the review, I'm going to assume it has one, since otherwise it is unsummonable without,  say, advanced ritual art or similar.

Also, please work on your grammar and spelling. It's just...horrible.

Now, onto the card itself...Tributing 5 DARK monsters is too ridiculous. I understand it's "Powerful" (I put that in quotes because it's not that great) but sheesh. At least you can use ritual raven and the Djinns...As for the on-summon effect, it kills itself too, so you're basically -6'ing (-1 for the ritual spell, -5 for the 5 darks) yourself for a dark hole. That is horrible. The trap destruction effect makes no sense  especially since most of the traps that would kill it would Banish it,  return it to the hand, respond to the ritual spell, or wouldn't be able to be reflected anyway. Basically the only thing it would activate on would be mirror force, but it kills itself before that can even be used, so...yeah.

 

Overall, this is a horrendous card that would never EVER be played in any decks EVER right now. It needs SERIOUS fixing up before it would even be decent in a casual environment. Plus, it is related to exodia, so that automatically makes it overdone and ridiculous.

 

1/10 wouldn't read again.

[cr47t]

I`m not sure what to say about this card. Airride is right, you HAVE to have a Ritual Spell card to summon a Ritual Monster. Your OCG needs fixing, and when it "destroys all monsters on the field", it INCLUDES this monster. So the text needs changes. @Airride: Just because it`s related to Exodia dosen`t make it broken by default, however I also think this card needs a lot of improvements.

 

My card rating: 1.1/10

 

OCG fix: You must Tribute 5 DARK monsters on the field or in your hand to Summon this card. When this card is Summoned: Destroy all other monsters on the field. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard by the effect of a Trap Card, you can use the same effect on a monster your opponent controls.