Captain Murphy ☆ Posted March 27, 2013 Report Share Posted March 27, 2013 I don't really know, seems kinda OP to me I was going to take the ATK down some. Also there are some OCG errors I think. EDIT: I actually updated the pic, lowered the ATK, and I'm sure there are some OCG errors in the last part of the effect so here is what it looks like now Lore: During your Standby Phase: Banish 1 monster from your graveyard or take 1500 damage. You cannot Special Summon any monsters. When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent by a direct attack: Your opponent takes 200 damage for every banished card you have. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MagnetBomb Posted March 27, 2013 Report Share Posted March 27, 2013 Just a little op'ed.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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PrimeAceJohn Posted March 27, 2013 Report Share Posted March 27, 2013 Definitely needs some fixes. First of all, it's a level 6 2800 beater. If you are going to make a 28 beater, you should make it level 7 or higher so it takes 2 tributes to summon. On top of that, its gains even more ATK. EASY OTK. Fixes: Keep it a level 6 and make it's ATK something low like 2000. The drawbacks aren't that bad so keep those. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted March 27, 2013 Report Share Posted March 27, 2013 Just a little op'ed.... Definitely needs some fixes. First of all, it's a level 6 2800 beater. If you are going to make a 28 beater, you should make it level 7 or higher so it takes 2 tributes to summon. On top of that, its gains even more ATK. EASY OTK. Fixes: Keep it a level 6 and make it's ATK something low like 2000. The drawbacks aren't that bad so keep those. You guys know that reviews like this are what make people hate this section, right? Because neither of these offer any realistic value. Also, please, tell me how you're going to OTK with a monster that maxes out at 5700, provided you run 40 monsters including this, in and of itself, without significant graveyard set up or external sources that are most likely awful. And that first one just lacks ANY worthwhile content. Card's not even that good. It's a bit much, design wise, but it's not "OPd" in any way. It reminds me of Acid Golem, which I'm sure was an influence, and it's neat. No, it's not the best thing in the world, much like Jawsman, but it's certainly not the worst design ever. I'd lower the ATK to 2600 simply because it's still gonna get pretty big there, and a base 2600/2700 (if tribute summoned) isn't that bad. It;s like a worse Colossal Fighter because it relies on being drawn as opposed to being toolboxed for a tuner and nontuner. Overall, it's not the greatest design. Lowering it to 2600 or not will not affect playability, just make it a bit less herpderp big beater, which isn't even that bad design like this. Also, this is technically a member card, so... gonna move to AoC for benefit of the doubt. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Captain Murphy ☆ Posted March 27, 2013 Author Report Share Posted March 27, 2013 Thanks for the criticism (all of you) and I was initially going to lower the ATK before I uploaded the card but I'll make the revisions soon. This card is pretty basic hence the fact I was really absent-minded at the time I was making this. But like I said, thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PrimeAceJohn Posted March 27, 2013 Report Share Posted March 27, 2013 You guys know that reviews like this are what make people hate this section, right? Because neither of these offer any realistic value. Also, please, tell me how you're going to OTK with a monster that maxes out at 5700, provided you run 40 monsters including this, in and of itself, without significant graveyard set up or external sources that are most likely awful. And that first one just lacks ANY worthwhile content. Card's not even that good. It's a bit much, design wise, but it's not "OPd" in any way. It reminds me of Acid Golem, which I'm sure was an influence, and it's neat. No, it's not the best thing in the world, much like Jawsman, but it's certainly not the worst design ever. I'd lower the ATK to 2600 simply because it's still gonna get pretty big there, and a base 2600/2700 (if tribute summoned) isn't that bad. It;s like a worse Colossal Fighter because it relies on being drawn as opposed to being toolboxed for a tuner and nontuner. Overall, it's not the greatest design. Lowering it to 2600 or not will not affect playability, just make it a bit less herpderp big beater, which isn't even that bad design like this. Also, this is technically a member card, so... gonna move to AoC for benefit of the doubt. Oh wait... I thought it said it gains 500 ATK for each in the grave... My bad... Really, I'm sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Captain Murphy ☆ Posted March 28, 2013 Author Report Share Posted March 28, 2013 Oh wait... I thought it said it gains 500 ATK for each in the grave... My bad... Really, I'm sorry. Yeah... anyway, I updated the card if you had wanted to ya know, review it or something Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Captain Murphy ☆ Posted March 29, 2013 Author Report Share Posted March 29, 2013 Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Captain Murphy ☆ Posted April 1, 2013 Author Report Share Posted April 1, 2013 Bump and getting no love Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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