宇佐見 蓮子@C94 Posted April 27, 2013 Report Share Posted April 27, 2013 Yeah. Even naming your topic "ultimate divne god" didn't seem to work ffs. Teach me how to get a lot of replies please, since I really don't want to retort to "XXX KRISTEN STEWART ON JENIFFER LAWRENCE HOT XXX". [spoiler=#Rank4Xyz] 2 level 4 Monsters When this card is Xyz Summoned successfully: you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; Send 1 card on the field to the Graveyard. Once per turn: you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card to target 1 face-up Monster on the field; this turn, the targeted card cannot be removed from the field.[/spoiler] As for the card, it's basically my attempt at a Monarch Xyz card thing. It's probably such and such with a side of you-know-what. Also, like This Thread, if you're going to complain about the picture, I will get a cue stick and smack it on your head quite a considerable amount of times. P.S: I just picked up Blazblue for the Vita and it's bloody fantastic. It's like UNL with good graphics instead of a 16 bit mess. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sora1499 Posted April 27, 2013 Report Share Posted April 27, 2013 2300 seems a tweak too much for a powerful Xyz like this. It is the only generic rank 4 to date that has a +1 pop effect, so it might end up being "game-breaking". I'd lower the ATK to 22 and add a "You can only control 1 of this card" clause. The second effect seems like icing on the power cake, hence why lowering the ATK to 22 is even more important, so that it doesn't function as a pseudo-invinci boss. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
宇佐見 蓮子@C94 Posted April 27, 2013 Author Report Share Posted April 27, 2013 An ATK fix it is then. I was originally going to make it non-generic but then it just ended up too frustrating so I gave up. Also, I made the last bit a bit more lenient so that it isn't complete invincibility. I think it's more broken though, because it just safeguards your card for Synchro/Tribute/Xyz shenanigans. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anozariel Posted April 27, 2013 Report Share Posted April 27, 2013 Wow this card looks so cool! Further more i think this Monarch style is also <3. Somehow i feel dissatisfied myself with the active effect, but to be honest i do not heve any better idea, so 9/10. I am waiting the other cards of your set! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L0SS Posted April 27, 2013 Report Share Posted April 27, 2013 Monarchs are a good school of design; the bread-and-butter of Yugioh, if you will. Summon for an effect. With an Xyz, you can afford to be a little more interesting, as you have shown. The effect upon summon is balanced and simple; and the second effect is interesting and beneficial in numerous ways, whilst not being too aggressive to unbalance the card. The ATK and DEF also seem fine. A solid card that is generic enough to be rewarding. You should make a Rank 7 Xyz to be used with Monarchs next: That I'd like to see. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
宇佐見 蓮子@C94 Posted April 27, 2013 Author Report Share Posted April 27, 2013 Monarchs are a good school of design; the bread-and-butter of Yugioh, if you will. Summon for an effect. With an Xyz, you can afford to be a little more interesting, as you have shown. The effect upon summon is balanced and simple; and the second effect is interesting and beneficial in numerous ways, whilst not being too aggressive to unbalance the card. The ATK and DEF also seem fine. A solid card that is generic enough to be rewarding. You should make a Rank 7 Xyz to be used with Monarchs next: That I'd like to see. Level 7 Xyz Monarch? That sounds like something I want to try.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
宇佐見 蓮子@C94 Posted April 28, 2013 Author Report Share Posted April 28, 2013 Ok... So I apparently missed out on a raging newbie. w/e, bump. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L0SS Posted April 29, 2013 Report Share Posted April 29, 2013 Level 7 Xyz Monarch? That sounds like something I want to try.... I meant 6.... I definitely meant 6. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
宇佐見 蓮子@C94 Posted April 29, 2013 Author Report Share Posted April 29, 2013 Nah. Level 6 is too cliche and someone beat me to it. Level 7 it will be, then. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Shin~ Posted April 30, 2013 Report Share Posted April 30, 2013 IMO a generic rank 4 should just get rid of a card, even if it is only on summon. They are just too accessible. Also, I think that you should not have control over when cards you control are sent to the grave, limit it to the opponent's cards. The other effect is neat, mass destruction proof monsters always are. But my problem here is save attacks, maybe you can find a way to eliminate that. This ended up sounding much like sora's comment. XD IDK it might be a good thing....I doubt it.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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