L0SS Posted April 27, 2013 Report Share Posted April 27, 2013 2 or more (max. 5) Level 4 monsters You can detach 1 Xyz material from this card to Target 1 monster on the field; until the End Phase, it loses 600 ATK. It's basically a Forbidden Lance personified(?) in the form of an Xyz monster. The scope for several materials makes it useful and interesting. I was also contemplating making it a quick effect, like Dyson Sphere. I refrained from having a OPT clause, as I felt that would defeat the point. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted April 27, 2013 Report Share Posted April 27, 2013 Well, not actually the same as Forbidden Lance, since: -It doesn't provide effect protection. -It's not really a quick effect. It sounds fun for tactical weakening of monsters, and I like how you can use it multiple times per turn. Though, it'd be funnier if the decrease lasted until next turn's End Phase at the very least..... or be permanent. Maybe that would break it in some way, but I can't really see it right now. Overall nice card. It has around the Level of power I like seeing. I find it interesting that cards need that (max 5) bit in there. It's like Konami is planning to make a sort of Super Poly for Xyzs or something. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L0SS Posted April 27, 2013 Author Report Share Posted April 27, 2013 Well, not actually the same as Forbidden Lance, since: -It doesn't provide effect protection. -It's not really a quick effect. It sounds fun for tactical weakening of monsters, and I like how you can use it multiple times per turn. Though, it'd be funnier if the decrease lasted until next turn's End Phase at the very least..... or be permanent. Maybe that would break it in some way, but I can't really see it right now. Overall nice card. It has around the Level of power I like seeing. I find it interesting that cards need that (max 5) bit in there. It's like Konami is planning to make a sort of Super Poly for Xyzs or something. Thanks, good points. I originally kept the effect permanent, but it felt like too much. Changing it to the opponent's End Phase might be a nice way of working it so as not to be broken. As for the (max. 5) thing, I've never really given it much thought. Now you mention it, it is rather strange; as there isn't really a way of attaching more than 5 materials, at least not in the initial summon. A Super Poly sounds dreadful. I pray that there is another, perfectly logical reason that isn't that. But knowing Konami... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L0SS Posted April 28, 2013 Author Report Share Posted April 28, 2013 Bump for a little more feedback before I call it a day. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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