cool guy13 Posted May 27, 2013 Report Share Posted May 27, 2013 Plz comment! im a newbie![attachment=37762:Psychoraptor.jpg] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jacobguptill.. Posted May 27, 2013 Report Share Posted May 27, 2013 instead of normally put Normal Its a decent card though its attack isnt to high, but thats the bad thing if it attacks directly its just 400 damage Make it around 1000-1400 attack Im no pro so get more opinions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cool guy13 Posted May 27, 2013 Author Report Share Posted May 27, 2013 thanx, i tried to make this card balanced so that it would be realistic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jacobguptill.. Posted May 27, 2013 Report Share Posted May 27, 2013 thanx, i tried to make this card balanced so that it would be realistic It has good structure and potential but its attack is slightly to low Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
宇佐見 蓮子@C94 Posted May 27, 2013 Report Share Posted May 27, 2013 It has good structure and potential but its attack is slightly to low No it isn't. The card is worse than other direct attackers such as Dewdark of the Ice Barrier for the sole reason of it having more ATK. Your card just lacks any redeeming qualities that would make it worth running over the previously mentioned Dewdark. It's better to give it a second effect to make it better, because direct attacking for 400 is such a bland and weak effect nobody in their right mind would run. Hell, even Gear Golem the Moving Fortress is better than this. You really, really need another effect to make it better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cool guy13 Posted May 28, 2013 Author Report Share Posted May 28, 2013 k ill update it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jacobguptill.. Posted May 28, 2013 Report Share Posted May 28, 2013 Maybe a effect like that of flame sprite or drill barnacle Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
OpticalGalaxyStar Posted May 28, 2013 Report Share Posted May 28, 2013 Interesting concept...However, it does have a few bugs that do need addressing. First of all, Psychoraptor's ATK seems a little bit low for being a LVL 4 Effect monster. I would suggest either A) Increasing Psychoraptor's ATK to...I dunno...1200-1600 seems reasonable. B) Decreasing Psychoraptor's LVL to 3 Also, I think the effect may need revising. Instead of subtracting 400 LP each time it attacks your opponent directly (and making it weaker, ATK wise), you could make it so that you subtract LP instead. 700 LP seems reasonable in my opinion. Another thing: The card's effect's OCG isn't quite as good as it could be, if it was a real card. (I'm sure that's what you're trying to do. :D) Here is an OCG revision that I came up with: If this monster is Normal Summoned: you can attack your opponent directly, and if you do: Subtract 400 ATK from this card each time you attack your opponent directly. Other than that, I got nothing! Keep up the good work! :) (This was my first card review! I hope I did OK! :D) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blake Posted May 28, 2013 Report Share Posted May 28, 2013 You must post the effect of your card separately. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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