Camels, camels everywhere. Beware of the sandstorm.

[Sleepy]

I figured I'd put my camel drawing to good use.

 

 

Can attack your opponent directly. If it inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent: You can target 1 face-up monster; switch it's ATK and DEF. If a monster's attack or effect makes this card leave the field: Change that monster to face-down Defense Position, and it cannot change it's position.

[Zazubat]

If you do? Do what? You have to be more specific. I think you mean direct attack, but you can never be too sure. I would change that wording. Anyway, it's interesting, it isn't very competitive though, it's kinda slow, and while 2000 direct can be fun, it is too slow to use it that effectively. The second effect is a bit more useful and is pretty well designed, making your opponent need to think if they want to get rid of it, or if they want to stay face-up, so I like that.

 

OCG seems fine here, simply change the first part to say "When this card attacks directly by its own effect" instead.

[Sleepy]

If you do? Do what? You have to be more specific. I think you mean direct attack, but you can never be too sure. I would change that wording. Anyway, it's interesting, it isn't very competitive though, it's kinda slow, and while 2000 direct can be fun, it is too slow to use it that effectively. The second effect is a bit more useful and is pretty well designed, making your opponent need to think if they want to get rid of it, or if they want to stay face-up, so I like that.

 

OCG seems fine here, simply change the first part to say "When this card attacks directly by its own effect" instead.

Edited that bit. Thanks.

 

*Clears sweat from forehead*

Good to hear. My first judge was my brother, and he told me it seemed to be on the overpowered side as a 2k direct attacker that can weaken opponent's monsters and will pretty much cost 1 monster to get rid of. Glad to hear an opposing opinion to that.

 

I felt like trolling Judgement Dragon and DAD with each of this card's effects xP

[Therrion]

It is a good card considering it does require atleast 1 monster to get rid of (or a Trap) due to the last effect. The first effect is lulzy to give itself 2000atk to further beat in for damage, but it is slow in that case. Using it to heavily reduce your opponent's massive beaters is funny, but as Zazu said, isn't competitive overall.

Nice, creative card. Very balanced, to oppose what your brother said. (Though, it would be annoying)

[Zazubat]

Was this changed, or was it always like this? It seems that it can change ANY monster's stats. If that was changed, I kinda like that, if not, then I must just have missed that the first time around.

[Sleepy]

Was this changed, or was it always like this? It seems that it can change ANY monster's stats. If that was changed, I kinda like that, if not, then I must just have missed that the first time around.

 

The effect has always been the same. I just reworded the part you said was confusing.

What would be broken about that effect though?

You turn DAD and Monarchs into 1000 ATK, as opposed to instantly destroying them as other effects could.

Or it becomes 2000 after making 400 damage. Which either way is not amazingly strong.

Draccosack and Big Eye still would have uber high stats, Incarnates would just have it temporary.

 

It does have more liberties than you initially thought, but it still remains on the casual level.

[Megamaw]

I love the art, and overall I just love the card. It's not super-powerful, but it's definitely usable. As a beast with high DEF, I can see this having some use in Ojamas, though being level 3 would be a drawback in that deck, since you can't overlay him for Gachi.

 

There's not many ways to SS or search this as far as I'm aware, so you'd usually be normal summoning it-- that's a drawback in itself.

 

If this was actually a released card, it would definitely be one of my favorites, and I'd certainly try to make a deck around it.

 

I only see one little thing that appears odd to me. Usually, when a battle position cannot be changed, it has the subtext 'except by card effect'. Was that intentional?

[Sleepy]

I love the art, and overall I just love the card. It's not super-powerful, but it's definitely usable. As a beast with high DEF, I can see this having some use in Ojamas, though being level 3 would be a drawback in that deck, since you can't overlay him for Gachi.

 

There's not many ways to SS or search this as far as I'm aware, so you'd usually be normal summoning it-- that's a drawback in itself.

 

If this was actually a released card, it would definitely be one of my favorites, and I'd certainly try to make a deck around it.

 

I only see one little thing that appears odd to me. Usually, when a battle position cannot be changed, it has the subtext 'except by card effect'. Was that intentional?

Umm it wasn't intentional. I don't always see it, and I know it depends on when a card was printed. You are supposed to always be able to arbitrarily change positions when it is by effect ;D

 

Thanks a lot. I'm glad you liked it.