Zombie Xyz (Updated) (Opinions Wanted)

[Ace487]

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Skeletal King, Boneton (EARTH)

Zombie/Xyz/Effect (R4) ATK/1000 DEF/3000

 

2 Level 4 monsters

 

During the Standby Phase you can activate 1 of these effects:
*Special Summon 1 Skeleton Soldier (Type-Zombie/EARTH/ATK/300/DEF/200/LV1) in face-up Attack Mode (You take no damage from battles involving a "Skeleton Soldier" token while this card is in defense mode)
*Change this monster to Defence Mode.
If this card can not would be destroyed by battle or card effect(s) detach 1 Xyz Material from this card instead as long as you control a token(s) on the field. If this card is destroyed: you can send the top 2 cards from your deck to the grave banish the Xyz Materials from this card to send this card back to the Extra deck.

[Megamaw]

Some of the wording is off, and I'm not sure why there's an effect to change it to defense position, as you can just summon it in defense position.

It seems kind of weird to me that a zombie monster would banish it's materials, since if you were using this in a zombie deck, you'd lose the advantage of having a set-up grave, as opposed to other Xyz monsters.

 

Still, I like the idea of a Zombie Xyz monster that actually has a high defense, as opposed to the norm of zombies where they have very pitiful defense stats.

 

Of course, this is just my opinion. I do like the card, and hope you will continue to improve it as time goes on.

[(GigaDrillBreaker)]

This card is a little bit odd. It is kinda cool in concept but I sadly expect this to become a rank 4 dracossack. The most ridiculous part of it is that you do not have to detach materials to use either of these effects. Not taking battle damage with the tokens is just ridiculous. 4/10

[Ace487]

bump.......( I don't know if I'm aloud to do this; if i'm not please inform me.(if you are staff))