thebats Posted July 16, 2013 Report Share Posted July 16, 2013 Hope you like it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
liavcol Posted July 16, 2013 Report Share Posted July 16, 2013 Well, I am sorry to tell you that, but this card isn't realistic for 4 reasons: 1. you have made it DIVINE attribute, which is ok as this is an existing attribute but it's not likely to be on a Level 2 normal monster, so I suggest that you'll change it to another attribute. 2. It's name is "Alpha to omega". Normally, you put a capital letter at the start of each word in the name (except for some words like "to" and some more) unless you have a special reason for writting it like this, and I don't think it ever happend in the OCG/TCG. Change it to "Alpha to Omega" 3. The art is lacking in background and personally, I don't think that an image of letters fits a monster card well.... I think you should change the pic to a monster that resembles in some way your card name and won't be too fancy because it is only a Level 2 normal monster. 4. It's type is "Mystic" and as much as I know, made up types are not considered as realistic... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phantom Roxas Posted July 16, 2013 Report Share Posted July 16, 2013 You're new here, so I'm going to be easy on you, but liavcol pretty much summed things up, and there's also the fact that this card is just a terrible card. Oh, and you didn't even get the right symbol for Alpha. LOCKED. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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