Some new Xyz Monsters I've made

[DestinyGame]

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3 Level 4 monsters

Once per turn, you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card: Negate the Summon of a monster and return it to the owner's Deck. While this card has Xyz Material: It cannot be targeted by your opponent's Spell and Trap cards. If this card has no Xyz Material: It cannot attack your opponent directly

 

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2 Level 4 monsters

Once per turn, when the effect of a Spell/Trap or Effect Monster is activated, you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card: Negate the activation and banish that card. 

[Sora1499]

Your images aren't working bro.  I'd post the written versions of your cards.

 

From the looks of it, the first card is extremely broken.  A 3-time solemn warning?  Nooooo thank you.  Then when your opponent is finally done dealing with it, it turns into a direct attacker.  Does that sound fair to you?

 

The second card is also not so cool.  Shi En is at 1 for a reason, and that nigga ain't even generic!  Think of what all those already powerful rank 4 decks would do with a Shi En...  It ain't pretty.

[DestinyGame]

Your images aren't working bro.  I'd post the written versions of your cards.

 

From the looks of it, the first card is extremely broken.  A 3-time solemn warning?  Nooooo thank you.  Then when your opponent is finally done dealing with it, it turns into a direct attacker.  Does that sound fair to you?

 

The second card is also not so cool.  Shi En is at 1 for a reason, and that nigga ain't even generic!  Think of what all those already powerful rank 4 decks would do with a Shi En...  It ain't pretty.

It works pretty well for me, so I don't know what's your problems. 

And while you're at it, read the first card's lore carefully, it cannot attack directly with no xyz materials. Don't compare my cards to stuffs like solemn warning or shien, cuz they don't destroys cards, so they cannot be stopped by cards such as stardust or destruction jammer. Also, the second monster is way more easy to get out than shien, and it works for monsters as well, so it's pretty much fits for any kind of deck. 

[Sora1499]

It works pretty well for me, so I don't know what's your problems. 

Ok, nvm, works for me now.

 

 And while you're at it, read the first card's lore carefully, it cannot attack directly with no xyz materials.

Sorry.  Still a busted card though, since it CAN'T BE TARGETED BY S/Ts AND ACTS AS A FUCKING WARNING.  Now it's even worse than before, jeezus.  "Hey wanna dprison, compulse, or soul taker my stupid-ass warning to get rid of it?  NAW BREH".

 

Don't compare my cards to stuffs like solemn warning or shien, cuz they don't destroys cards, so they cannot be stopped by cards such as stardust or destruction jammer.

1.  I will compare your stuffs to warning and shi en because they are valid comparisons.  Because they are, essentially, a warning and a shi en on generic rank 4 bodies.

2.  The fact that they don't destroy actually makes them EVEN WORSE because now they're even more difficult to stop.

 

 Also, the second monster is way more easy to get out than shien, and it works for monsters as well, so it's pretty much fits for any kind of deck. 

Yes, nigga.  This is the problem.  That any old Rank 4 deck can make a Shi En is a big problem.

 

So overall you've done nothing but prove my points further :T

 

Conclusion:  Nigga you on weed.

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Friendly reminder this is Single Cards, not Multiple Cards. If you are making 2 or more cards, make sure you post them in Multiple Cards.

[DestinyGame]

Ok, nvm, works for me now.

 

Sorry.  Still a busted card though, since it CAN'T BE TARGETED BY S/Ts AND ACTS AS A FUCKING WARNING.  Now it's even worse than before, jeezus.  "Hey wanna dprison, compulse, or soul taker my stupid-ass warning to get rid of it?  NAW BREH".

 

1.  I will compare your stuffs to warning and shi en because they are valid comparisons.  Because they are, essentially, a warning and a shi en on generic rank 4 bodies.

2.  The fact that they don't destroy actually makes them EVEN WORSE because now they're even more difficult to stop.

 

Yes, nigga.  This is the problem.  That any old Rank 4 deck can make a Shi En is a big problem.

 

So overall you've done nothing but prove my points further :T

 

Conclusion:  Nigga you on weed.

So, I assume that you like calling people 'nigga', eh? 

I've been talking very nicely to you from the start, but all I get from you was trash-talking and insulting. What's the matter with ya? Are you a douche-bag or something?

[Sora1499]

So, I assume that you like calling people 'nigga', eh? 

I've been talking very nicely to you from the start, but all I get from you was trash-talking and insulting. What's the matter with ya? Are you a douche-bag or something?

1.  Tis tongue and cheek.

2.  I'm sorry if it came off as insults, it's just that your cards are busted lol.

3.  I didn't trash talk you, the weed thing was a joke gawd.

4.  No I'm actually a pretty nice guy.  Just ask anyone around here.  Except for Desu and Chris, they kinda don't like me.

[Not-so-Radiant Arin]

Sora, stop being a douchebag. It still gives you no right to directly insult the creator of the card for making obviously broken cards.

 

The first card is, indeed, a walking PWWB, but goes back into the Deck and shuffles, meaning you probably won't be seeing it again for a really long time. Of course, it doesn't really affect cards like Dux or any of the E-Drags (if you combo it with Ravine), but, HOWEVER, it does shut down Dark Worlds pretty damn badly. This would be fine if, really, in my opinion, but only if it didn't have the clause to say that it can't be targeted by Spells or Traps. The 3 Level 4s will make sure that you use this card's effect twice, then leave one on so it can still attack, at which points, just becomes a simple 2500 Chaos fodder.

 

The second card is also ridiculous on it's own merits, maybe even more than the first one because it's easier to make. It basically renders any play your opponent makes useless and can turn the game in your favour for two turns, and Banishes it instead of the usual sending to Graveyard where you have a better chance to recover it later. These cards are just too slippery-slope to be considered good design, and can turn the game towards another direction rather than being linear. We still want to promote a sense of player to player interaction, and these cards bust that mechanic.

[Aix]

Though neither Desu nor Chris have any right to call anyone else rude lol

 

It works pretty well for me, so I don't know what's your problems. 

And while you're at it, read the first card's lore carefully, it cannot attack directly with no xyz materials. Don't compare my cards to stuffs like solemn warning or shien, cuz they don't destroys cards, so they cannot be stopped by cards such as stardust or destruction jammer. Also, the second monster is way more easy to get out than shien, and it works for monsters as well, so it's pretty much fits for any kind of deck. 

Wut... wut... wut is this... no, no. No. No! What Sora just said was these cards are like Shien and Solemn Warning which are both broken cards and you went ahead and told him not to compare these cards with those cards because they were more broken than they were. #logic #readingskills

 

Also, seeing as you were using Yugico, you likely put the cards on Private so only you were able to see them, but somehow changed them to Public later.

 

 

[hr]Okay, first of all, negation is an extremely powerful mechanic that can win you the game with ease as well as being a badly designed mechanic in terms of the fact that it easily creates a Slippery Slope, and you've given the most powerful and versatile forms of negation for both of your cards. Evolzar Laggia and Evolzar Dolkka are an example of extremely powerful negation cards that can win games on their own, they are so powerful that entire decks are dedicated to Summoning these two cards. Laggia and Dolkka are remotely balanced (okay, maybe still not balanced) because they have the Summoning requirement of needing Dinosaur-Type monsters and Dinosaur Decks are relatively weak and because they only negate a narrow spectrum of cards, Dolkka can only negate monster effects and Laggia can only negate Spell/Traps or inherent Summons at the cost of both his Xyz Material. Now both your cards utterly outclass Laggia and Dolkka in both versatility and power as your cards get rid of the cards permanently and bypass any sort of destruction protection with the banishing/shuffling and they also have a very wide spectrum of things they can negate while being able to do it multiple times. Raveil also has protection which makes him even more broken. Do you see now?