Bull3tM0nk3y Posted September 17, 2013 Report Share Posted September 17, 2013 Spell - Quick Play This card only be activated when "Kuriboh" is discarded from your hand to your Graveyard by it's effect. Select 1 monster with "HERO" in it's name form your Graveyard, and Special Summon a token with the same name, ATK and DEF (Fiend-Type/DARK/Level 1/ATK ?/DEF ?). The Summoned Token cannot attack. The token is destroyed by the End Phase of your next turn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pepperyena Posted September 17, 2013 Report Share Posted September 17, 2013 Well, right from the get-go, there's a problem. This card literally can't work. Normal Spell Cards are Spell Speed 1, and can't be activated in response to anything. I suggest making it a Trap, or a Quick-Play Spell Card. Both of those would work. Now, let's take a look at the effect... It's like Yugi and Jaden combined decks. I have to say, your effect sounds like it came straight from an official card - be it from the anime or not. I searched around for a similar card, but haven't found anything thus far. Despite how extremely specific the effect is, I like it - it could certainly work. But there's another problem... What level is the token? And why are there so many OCG errors?~ This card only be activated when "Kuriboh" is discarded from your hand to your Graveyard by its effect: Target 1 "HERO" monster in your Graveyard; Special Summon a token on your side of the field with the same name, ATK, DEF, and Level as the targeted monster.. The Summoned Token cannot attack, and is destroyed during the End Phase of your next turn. All in all, not bad... But not great. Something about the 'official' feel of this card is charming, yet also a bit weird. Still, you had a good idea! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bull3tM0nk3y Posted September 17, 2013 Author Report Share Posted September 17, 2013 Thanks mate, fixed the OCG, changed the card type and added what the token is like. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted September 17, 2013 Report Share Posted September 17, 2013 The flavor of the card is pretty good. Though I'd say I would like it more as a Counter Trap for when a "Kuriboh" monster activates it's effect. That way it'd work with Winged Kuriboh and justify Jaden using it. Why a Counter Trap? Because Kuribohs do Damage Calculation shenagigans and probably not anything can activate at that time. Or who knows, there must be another way. I like this card a lot. I must tell you that the card has a glitch or something. It says " instead of having the " symbol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bull3tM0nk3y Posted September 17, 2013 Author Report Share Posted September 17, 2013 Okay, done. But i can't upload it. The text on the card is being cut off. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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