[Child Helena] No fancy title this time.

[Not-so-Radiant Arin]

So, my past few cards have been, needless to say, not very good design, or not very good in general. But I'm here now hoping to make that up with something that "indirectly" supports Agents.

 

 

[spoiler='Ooh! A butterfly...such a lovely little thing.']3 Level 2 Monsters. All LIGHT monsters you control gain 500 ATK and DEF. All DARK monsters on the field lose 500 ATK and DEF. Once per turn: You can Detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; Your opponent Reveals the top card of their Deck. If it is a Monster card, or Spell/Trap Card, and your opponent has at least 3 of the same corresponding card on their field: Return all cards your opponent controls to the hand. The Revealed card is sent to the top of the Deck. Those cards (including the Revealed card) cannot be played until your opponent's End Phase. This card cannot be destroyed by your opponent's card effects while it has an Xyz Material.[/spoiler]

 

Longest effect ever. Holy crap.

 

Anyways, the inspiration was this. Because obviously no one thinks about a card that can do that.

 

Also, it's a better Gachi.

[Darj]

I think it's fine. The effect is powerful, but requires a lot of prediction to pull it off even if you are running cards that reveal the top cards in your opponent's deck, or just plain luck. Then, if the effect is not succesful, Helena still remains as a decent wall.

The last effect bugs me because it is not clear to what the word "those" refers to. I think the proper description would be:

"All cards affected by this card's effects (including the revealed card) cannot be played until your opponent's End Phase".

 

A couple of fixes:

"...If it is a Monster card, or Spell/Trap Card, and your opponent has at least 3 cards of that same type (Monster, Spell, or Trap) on their field: Return all cards your opponent controls to the hand. The Revealed card is returned to the top of the Deck..."

 

I based on the description of Vampire Lord for the first fix.

[Therrion]

And it would only hit monster half the time, and your opponent would have to over extend as much as to have 3 monsters on the field already (or you have to run Trio/Grinder, either or). It's not over powered, in fact it is really underpowered. Makes for a decent wall for 2300 DEF, though, and a nice punish to FIre Fists if they extend their Fire Formations too far.

[Not-so-Radiant Arin]

I updated with the OCG fix. Dear God, that is one of the longest effects I think I've ever made.