ÆƵ– Posted September 23, 2013 Report Share Posted September 23, 2013 [spoiler='Lore'] 2 Level 5 Machine-Type monsters Once per turn: you can detach 1 Xyz material from this card and target 1 spell/trap card and 1 monster card on the field; destroy the selected cards. If this card has no Xyz material: destroy this card and 1 monster you control. [/spoiler] [spoiler='prototype #1'] [spoiler='Lore'] 3 Level 5 Machine-Type monsters Once per turn: you can detach 1 Xyz material from this card and target 1 spell/trap card and 1 monster card on the field; destroy the selected cards. If this card has no Xyz material: destroy this card and 1 monster you control. [/spoiler] [/spoiler]Edit: fixed the effect so that it is slightly less negative. Edit #2: tweaked it to be a little more balanced. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the_engineer Posted September 23, 2013 Report Share Posted September 23, 2013 The effect engaged when no XYZ material seems a bit too negative, why not make it slightly less dangerous? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ÆƵ– Posted September 24, 2013 Author Report Share Posted September 24, 2013 itty bitty bumpity bump. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not-so-Radiant Arin Posted September 24, 2013 Report Share Posted September 24, 2013 How does one realistically and consistently make this card besides by using all 3 of your CyDras? Besides from the highly unrealistic and specific amount of materials needed, it's pretty much a walking OTK that allows you to pop any 2 cards your opponent controls and can then attack for 2950 unhindered. I don't know what the original effect was to make it "more negative", but from this effect, it's a bit terrible considering that it's hard to make in the first place and you're giving up a 2950 vanilla that can run over so many cards in today's meta. Perhaps just a "cannot attack your opponent directly" would be a better option? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ÆƵ– Posted September 25, 2013 Author Report Share Posted September 25, 2013 [quote name="Arin the Radiant" post="6277067" timestamp="1380063623"]How does one realistically and consistently make this card besides by using all 3 of your CyDras? Besides from the highly unrealistic and specific amount of materials needed, it's pretty much a walking OTK that allows you to pop any 2 cards your opponent controls and can then attack for 2950 unhindered. I don't know what the original effect was to make it "more negative", but from this effect, it's a bit terrible considering that it's hard to make in the first place and you're giving up a 2950 vanilla that can run over so many cards in today's meta. Perhaps just a "cannot attack your opponent directly" would be a better option?[/quote] The 'more negative' effect is that when you run out of material, the owners top row was cleared. And I can see what you are saying about the difficulty of getting it out. Maybe I can make it require only 2 materials? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ÆƵ– Posted September 25, 2013 Author Report Share Posted September 25, 2013 another itty bitty bumpity bump. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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