Fannar of the Glacial Sledge

[Kingdom Xathers]

 

1 Tuner + 1 or more Warrior-Type non-Tuner monsters
When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent: You can place 1 Ice Counter on 1 face-up card on the field. The effect(s) of a card(s) with Ice Counters are negated and cannot be activated, also, if it is a monster, it cannot attack or change its battle position. At the start of the Damage Step, if a monster with Ice Counters is attacked: Destroy that monster.

 

 

[spoiler=First Errata]

 

1 Tuner + 1 or more Warrior-Type non-Tuner monsters
When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent: You can target 1 face-up card on the field; while this card remains face-up on the field, the effect(s) of that target are negated and cannot be activated, also, if the target is a monster, it cannot attack or change its battle position. If a monster targeted by this effect is attacked: Destroy that target (before damage calculation).
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[spoiler=Original Version]

 

1 Tuner + 1 or more Warrior-Type non-Tuner monsters
When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent: You can target 1 card on the field; apply 1 of the following effects, based on that card's position.
*A face-up card targeted by this effect cannot activate its effect(s), also, it cannot change its battle position (if it is a monster).
*A Set card targeted by this effect cannot be flipped face-up. If a face-down Defense Position monster targeted by this effect is attacked, destroy it immediately (before damage calculation, without flipping it face-up).

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OCG issues are pretty obvious.  I'm just unsure of how it should be written.

 

 

Anyways, CnC

[Therrion]

It activates after inflicting damage, yet destroys Set monsters before damage calculation. Wut.

I think the effects should only be applied so long as this card remains on the field, as it sounds a tad too powerful. However, I may be wrong. Nice card regardless, just have to change that wording bit of it.

[Sleepy]

Ugh... 50s.

 

Personal issues aside, this card looks pretty fun.

The moves that escape this card are Continuous effects and the ability of attacking.

It reminds me a bit to Red Dragon Archfiend's effect, but with less of a drawback and more potential targets.

Certainly better in some cases. 

There's also that Red Dragon can pop 5 walls with 1 hit, but it won't hit more than 2 or 3 too often.

 

EDIT:

Yes, i agree with Therrion as well.

After Damage Calculation

and must be face-up to activate and resolve.

Those are fair changes.

[Kingdom Xathers]

Ugh... 50s.

 

Personal issues aside, this card looks pretty fun.

The moves that escape this card are Continuous effects and the ability of attacking.

It reminds me a bit to Red Dragon Archfiend's effect, but with less of a drawback and more potential targets.

Certainly better in some cases. 

There's also that Red Dragon can pop 5 walls with 1 hit, but it won't hit more than 2 or 3 too often.

 

EDIT:

Yes, i agree with Therrion as well.

After Damage Calculation

and must be face-up to activate and resolve.

Those are fair changes.

 

The portion in bold... can't believe I overlooked that.

 

 

 

Anyways, yeah, think I'll edit this a bit.

 

 

 

EDIT: Bleargh... on second thought, I'm just gonna remove the second effect entirely (the one involving Set cards), but incorporate the insta-kill part to the other effect.

[Kingdom Xathers]

AND~~~ Edit posted in starting post.

[Sleepy]

I have to point out that the cards will still keep being affected by this effect forever wether he leaves the field or not.

I'm not sure how much of an impact that'll have in practice, but it's something I wanted to point out about it.

 

I personally think there should be a way to unlock those cards back. Maybe not just unlocking everything when he dies, but something like having a cost payed for them. A cost only payable if this is no longer face-up on the field or something along those lines...

 

Still, I really like the concept behind this card.

[Therrion]

The above is interesting, perhaps a Life Point cost (800-1000)? I'd hate a card advantage loss, but eh, to get a card back is to get one back no matter the cost.

[Kingdom Xathers]

I have to point out that the cards will still keep being affected by this effect forever wether he leaves the field or not.

I'm not sure how much of an impact that'll have in practice, but it's something I wanted to point out about it.

 

I personally think there should be a way to unlock those cards back. Maybe not just unlocking everything when he dies, but something like having a cost payed for them. A cost only payable if this is no longer face-up on the field or something along those lines...

 

Still, I really like the concept behind this card.

 

 

IDK, maybe have it be a random Ice Counter-based card?

 

... urgh, but I wasn't meaning for this to be part of an Archetype... @__@

[Sleepy]

IDK, maybe have it be a random Ice Counter-based card?

 

... urgh, but I wasn't meaning for this to be part of an Archetype... @__@

Yeah, it doesn't necessarily have to be THAT.

I like it when a standalone card can find interesting uses and a place in a deck. Gives the game the air of being a lot more free for experimentation.

[Kingdom Xathers]

Yeah, it doesn't necessarily have to be THAT.

I like it when a standalone card can find interesting uses and a place in a deck. Gives the game the air of being a lot more free for experimentation.

 

 

 

... okay, I'll do it, then.

 

 

BRB!