thanonyx Posted October 9, 2013 Report Share Posted October 9, 2013 [spoiler=text]2 Level 5 monsters You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card: Equip this card to 1 face-up Warrior-type monster you control. A monster equipped with this card gains 2400 ATK and is treated as a Zombie-Type Xyz monster and all Xyz Materials attached to this card are attached to the Monster this card is equipped to and it's Level becomes it's Rank. Once per turn you can detach 1 Xyz Material from the monster this card is equipped to; it can attack twice this turn.[/spoiler] This is the first card I have made since returning to YCM so my understanding of the new text and grammar format may be a little rickety so if I made any errors please tell me where and how it's supposed to look. Also, keeps your eyes open for any new cards I will be making in the future because I'm on a card making spree! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted October 9, 2013 Report Share Posted October 9, 2013 So it's a Zombie, that turns Warriors into Zombies, and has a Rank that's more prominent among Dragons. Ummm I've got no consistent combos in my head for this one. I can see how Warriors would love this card, but not how they'd pull it off as well. There's Colossal Fighter in Dragon Ruler Decks now that I think of it. It'd be close to a 6000 ATK monster that can attack twice per turn. That's more than just a push, it's downright trying to OTK there. There's a problem right there. The concept itself is good, but implemented in a Rank where it'll be incompatible for most of it's potential user targets, and when it does find a way to be used, it's broken. I'd suggest this idea was a Rank 4 or Rank 5 monster, and instead of "gains 2800 ATK" something like "becomes 2400 ATK" would be more balanced. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thanonyx Posted October 9, 2013 Author Report Share Posted October 9, 2013 So it's a Zombie, that turns Warriors into Zombies, and has a Rank that's more prominent among Dragons. Ummm I've got no consistent combos in my head for this one. I can see how Warriors would love this card, but not how they'd pull it off as well. There's Colossal Fighter in Dragon Ruler Decks now that I think of it. It'd be close to a 6000 ATK monster that can attack twice per turn. That's more than just a push, it's downright trying to OTK there. There's a problem right there. The concept itself is good, but implemented in a Rank where it'll be incompatible for most of it's potential user targets, and when it does find a way to be used, it's broken. I'd suggest this idea was a Rank 4 or Rank 5 monster, and instead of "gains 2800 ATK" something like "becomes 2400 ATK" would be more balanced. I took your advice and now it's rank 5 and it ATK buff is 2400. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
goddamnit names are a pain Posted October 9, 2013 Report Share Posted October 9, 2013 Play this with Utopia Ray Victory! Run this guy instead of ZW Leo Arms in a ZW Deck. This guy is pretty awesome, and some cool art as well. Nice job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
death00 Posted October 17, 2013 Report Share Posted October 17, 2013 really cool, i really have no other comments, the whole card is awesome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
newhat Posted October 18, 2013 Report Share Posted October 18, 2013 Shark Fortress does slightly less damage as this does in any situation, but without needing a Warrior on the field, and it can target itself. On top of which Shark Fortress has passive Pull. This makes the equipped monster crushingly powerful, over 4000 ATK easily, but unless you're doing Ranks 5 and 4 in the same turn, what Warrior are you pulling out in a Deck that makes Rank 5 monsters? A Noble Knight? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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