chriosphere Posted October 22, 2013 Report Share Posted October 22, 2013 Hey guys, Chriosphere here. Here's a preview of my first ever card. I have edited it a bit. Give me some feedback on it. Enjoy :^) [attachment=39537:Warrior of Limbo.jpg] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flash Flyer - Sakura Posted October 22, 2013 Report Share Posted October 22, 2013 I should mention right now that this card's last effect essentially contradicts its 2nd effect, since it needs to be sent to the Graveyard to activate (whereas it banishes itself instead of going there) Anyway, the summoning requirements for this card are OK, but the LP cost isn't worth this card's effects 2nd effect: While banishing a monster/negating an effect isn't too bad, it's underwhelming to say the least. Yeah, it'll do something against Dragon Rulers or other related stuff, but that's about it. 3rd effect: Only works if your opponent has a clear field, but it's good protection against Mirror Force/Torrential or something, PROVIDED your opponent has no monsters; it's essentially useless in most other cases As for your OCG, you need a lot of work (In the future, post the lore underneath card so it's easier for members to correct OCG + make suggestions for improvement. Use this for future submissions: http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/PSCT) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chriosphere Posted October 22, 2013 Author Report Share Posted October 22, 2013 Sorry, I'll fix that. Thanks for the feedback. Hopefully it will help me improve. :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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