Move to Multiple Section

[MarcoTheKiller]

Okay, I'm remaking the 3 RUMs I had earlier, but revised. I will be back with revisions.

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

You have 3 cards in this thread, so should be placed in the Multiple card section. In addition, don't use attachments to post cards here; use the image code from generator.

 

Now then, some CnC

 

Deveilar: The LP-decreasing effect makes this OP (since in pretty much all cases, there will be a monster with over 2000 ATK on the field and likely, you'll target that monster to use this card's effect). Depending on how much LP your opponent has when you play this, it could finish them off.

 

Solarian: Essentially a watered-down version of Barian Force's anime effect (lowers by 100 instead of 300). Only balanced card out of the three shown here.

 

Angeilar: In the same vein as Deveilar's, you can target any monster (including the monster you summoned) and gain its ATK in LP; since there will be one monster on the field this card can activate (assuming opponent hasn't negated your card's summoning)

 

 

Overall, they're interesting but cards 1 and 3 could use a buff to their effects.

[MarcoTheKiller]

[quote name="Sakura Haruno" post="6296784" timestamp="1383160864"]You have 3 cards in this thread, so should be placed in the Multiple card section. In addition, don't use attachments to post cards here; use the image code from generator.   Oh sorry, I'm a bit new to this But about the cards, I'll try to make them better, and repost them on the multiple card section

[Bender B. Rodríguez]

I'll give you a 23/30.

[Zextra]

Yeah, as Sakura pointed out, this should be in Multiple Cards - so this topic will be moved there now. Just something to keep in mind, though - when posting your cards, don't post them as attachments. Instead, generate the card on the cardmaker, then click on the image to get an image code underneath. All you have to do is copy and paste that code to the topic.

I'll give you a 23/30.

Please do not make spammy posts like this; not only does it break the advanced clause, but it also doesn't do a thing to contribute to the opening post.

[Bender B. Rodríguez]

he asked for a rating on the three cards. I added all three into one. Marco, do you appreciate the fact that I gave your cards a score?

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

If you read the CC rules, you also have to give some form of critique/CnC on the cards (what do you suggest that member fix with his cards in terms of effects, etc); just a rating will not cut it.

 

@TC: That said, I do look forward to your revisions later on (although you can just post the updates here, and have Zextra move it for you to the Multiple section). Hopefully, you find a way to make these cards less broken/OP, but still worth using.

[Zextra]

he asked for a rating on the three cards. I added all three into one. Marco, do you appreciate the fact that I gave your cards a score?

I would suggest reading the Advanced Clause section of the rules. It's fine that you're rating his cards as you are, but it's completely pointless to leave nothing but a rating - alongside a rating, you should include your reasoning on why each card deserves the score it did; for example, discuss a card's balance, how it is abusable/outclassed in the game, etc.