Dark Magician Girl Accell(Complete 3 Way Special:with lore)

[JamieDeeRaw]

Post includes as issued:Dark Magician Girl Accell + Magician Girl's Rebirth (which I spelled differently on purpose on label of Spell Card) + Dark Magician Girl Accell Limited Edition holo, enjoy.

First: name: Dark Magician Girl Accell

Card Type: Ritual / Effect

Attribute: Dark

Level Stars: 8

Circulation: 1st Edition

Type: Spellcaster

Core Abilities: You can Ritual Summon this card with "Magician Girl's Rebirth". During either player's turn, when your opponent activates a Spell Card: You can send 1 monster from your hand to the Graveyard, negate the activation, and if
you do, destroy it. This card gains 300 ATK for each "Dark Magician" and "Magician of Black Chaos" in either player's Graveyard.

ATK: 2800

DEF: 2400

CARD:




Second: name: Magician Girl's Rebirth

Card Type: Spell Card

Trap/Magic Type: Ritual

Circulation: Special Edition

Core Abilities: This card is used to Ritual Summon "Dark Magician Girl Accell". You must also Tribute monsters from your hand or field whose total Levels equal 7. When "Dark Magician Girl Accell" is Ritual Summoned by this card's effect: You can banish this card from your Graveyard to activate 1 of these effects.
* Target 1 of the monsters in your Graveyard that was Tributed for the Ritual Summon, return that target to your hand.
* Target 1 face-down card your opponent controls ; destroy it.



CARD:


LAST: HAS SAME STATS AS "FIRST" LORE:
CARD:

Poster: http://www.plastikitty.com/wp-content/uploads/IMG_0380.jpg

[Dark Strawberry]

So it's basically a one sided Spell Canceller only harder to Summon. I honestly don't mean to hurt your feelings but while it's not broken, it's still poorly designed. Don't get me wrong, I do like the idea you have here but you'd be better of making it an Xyz monster. Rituals, while cool, are just so....meh in today's game.

[JamieDeeRaw]

I enjoyed that opinion ^_^

[I Hate Snatch Steal]

I'm not sure why you have a carriage return between "if" and "you do". That aside, stats and effect look solid for a generic ritual monster, since you'd need monsters in hand to make use of its best effect. Giving an incentive to use the ritual spell by adding a second effect is nice. Though the previous poster is right that generic rituals don't see much use currently. I'd say rituals in general need support for making ritual summoning more efficient and then cards like these would shine. Also, did you draw either of those images yourself? If so, good job!

 

On a side note, do you know how to check your private messages? After you looked at my destiny breakers I sent you some cards you can use in your deck, but according to the interface you hadn't read the message yet. (To check messages, click on the envelope next to your name at the top of the page).

[JamieDeeRaw]

I read them on my gmail... Thanks for them by the way ^_^, very useful stuff, I never miss a deal: which was, and I quote: "free", oh and I think I added you as a friend, if not I need too.