Vicious Fairy Fetale

[JamieDeeRaw]

Some underestimate the power of my new Fairy Deck, its full of Fairy Beasts and Demons who've fought with them and against them, but now they fight for you,command a total of 60+ and growing Fairy extremists who'll do anything to win, from transformation to denominators, the Fairy Deck will prove supreme, here is a taste of 1 under radar card, don't be decieved there is another that assists her...

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Name: Tiger Lily Jynx

Card Type: Monster /Gimini

Attribute: Wind

Level Stars: 6

Card Rarity: Rare

Circulation: 1st Edition

Type: Beast Warrior

Description: This card is treated as a Normal monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on field, you can Normal summon it to have it be treated as an Effect monster with either effect:
Once per turn: If a monster declares an attack, discard 2 cards from your hand, revert the attack; Once, to 0.
Target 1 card with 2000 or less ATK on your opponents field, decrease this card's DEF by 400, destroy the Target.

ATK: 2250

DEF: 2400

How she came to be: As a last resort to ambush the "Fairy Destroyer" armies, a noble Fairy Warrior accepted the devilish change from Fairy to Beast. Along the process was an accident by a Spellcaster who exceedingly bestowed Curse within the body of the brave Fairy. Now equipped with ancient Curse to turn the tides of any battle she wages, a Fairy named Jynx runs blindly happy into a war for YOU.

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Special thanks to DeviantArt and it's many talents

[NaZgUly]

its little OP OCG needs ALLOT of fixing..and rememeber the ATK cannot be 2260..it must be 2200 or 2300..either way post in Any Other cards..

Overall without OCG 8/10

[-Noel-]

Looks like u still don't used to YGO's balance, u need to know that any draw 2 cards effect must have a reasonable cost or else it will be forever banned (like pot of greed) and like what the above said, ur monster ATK must be 2200 or 2300 or at least 2250.

[JamieDeeRaw]

Fixed

[goddamnit names are a pain]

Type: Beast Warrior

Description: This card is treated as a Normal monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on field, you can Normal summon it to have it be treated as an Effect monster with either effect:
Once per turn: If a monster declares an attack, discard 2 cards from your hand, revert the attack; Once, to 0.
Target 1 card with 2000 or less ATK on your opponents field, decrease this card's DEF by 400, destroy the Target.

ATK: 2250

DEF: 2400
 

Summon = caps(?)

Negate, not revert. (Unless you mean decrease. Once to 0? Not needed unless saying "Decrease to 0" which would also need some re-wording.)

 

Your opponent controls.

Target=no caps.

 

Maybe blow it up if it hits 0? No defect otherwise.

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on field, you can Normal Summon it to have it be treated as an Effect monster with either effect:

• Once per turn, if a monster declares an attack: Discard 2 cards from your hand; reduce any Battle Damage to 0.
• Target 1 card with 2000 or less ATK on your opponents field: Decrease this card's DEF by 400; destroy that target.

 

Anyway, its stats are a bit high for a Level 6 considering it has a destruction/attack blocking-esque effect (though it's a Gemini so requires 2 summons), but either lower its stats a bit or raise Level to compensate for that. The second effect should an OPT one; otherwise you can essentially nuke your opponent's entire field in a single turn (it has 2400 base DEF, so that's 6 shots). Either that, or increase the amount of DEF dropped. 

 

In regards to having weird ATK, technically you should have a number that's divisible by 50 and 100, however it is possible to have cards that have different values (PaniK's cards and S39 are examples of this, BUT their stats are divisible by 10). But the way you have it now is fine.