My First XYZ Monster

[~RoBoTiClOvEr~]

Ok, don't be too harsh here. This is my first XYZ monster, and I recently understood the Yugioh term of an "XYZ Monster". I allow criticism, but at a limit.
[spoiler: Tacbaros Icy Hot Dragon]

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1 Level 6 WATER Dragon-Type monster + 1 Level 6 FIRE Dragon-Type monster 

This monster cannot declare an attack the turn it is Summoned. Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; your opponent takes damage equal to the half the detached monster's DEF. Up to twice per turn, while this card is in Attack Position: You can target 1 monster in your Deck; attach it as an Xyz Material monster to this card. When there are no Xyz Materials on this card: Destroy it.

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[SecondWar]

Attach ... from where? field, hand, graveyard, banished zone ...?
Another: It would be best to restrict the effect of the "Attach" to "Up to twice per turn"?

[~RoBoTiClOvEr~]

Oooh, thanks for the information. Editing now.

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

Just like I told a couple new members about Xyz Summoning, the requirements need to say (number) Rank 6 monsters. In case, that would be two. (Normally, Xyz don't require two separate Attributes for summoning).

 

1 Level 6 WATER Dragon-Type monster + 1 Level 6 FIRE Dragon-Type monster (This would be suited for a Fusion Monster)

This monster cannot declare an attack the turn it is Summoned. Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; your opponent takes damage equal to the detached monster's DEF. Up to twice per turn, while this card is in Attack Position: You can target 1 monster in your Deck; attach it as an Xyz Material monster to this card. When there are no Xyz Materials on this card: Destroy it.

 

Anyway, there should be some form of cost for its attachment effect, since you are essentially searching your Deck for whatever monster you want. In addition, put a stat cap on the monster (considering you can hypothetically deal up to 2800-3k damage with its detach effect alone) and that has no restriction on searching.

 

Though the no Xyz Material = destruction effect does balance it out to some degree; you need to tone down the effects a bit. But it's a good attempt at your first Xyz.

[~RoBoTiClOvEr~]

Just like I told a couple new members about Xyz Summoning, the requirements need to say (number) Rank 6 monsters. In case, that would be two. (Normally, Xyz don't require two separate Attributes for summoning).

 

1 Level 6 WATER Dragon-Type monster + 1 Level 6 FIRE Dragon-Type monster (This would be suited for a Fusion Monster)

This monster cannot declare an attack the turn it is Summoned. Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; your opponent takes damage equal to half the detached monster's DEF. Up to twice per turn, while this card is in Attack Position: You can target 1 monster in your Deck; attach it as an Xyz Material monster to this card. When there are no Xyz Materials on this card: Destroy it.

 

Anyway, there should be some form of cost for its attachment effect, since you are essentially searching your Deck for whatever monster you want. In addition, put a stat cap on the monster (considering you can hypothetically deal up to 2800-3k damage with its detach effect alone) and that has no restriction on searching.

 

Though the no Xyz Material = destruction effect does balance it out to some degree; you need to tone down the effects a bit. But it's a good attempt at your first Xyz.

Thanks for the comment. :) Much appreciated, since I'm a newbie when it comes to XYZ creatures. xD I'll edit it. :3 Thing is though, to make it more balanced: I wanted it to be half the DEF to make it more balanced.

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

Erase the parentheses near the Summoning materials (that was a side note)

[~RoBoTiClOvEr~]

Erase the parentheses near the Summoning materials (that was a side note)

Ok I will.