3 Cards at Random; Enjoy everyone ^_^

[JamieDeeRaw]

Hi everyone, yes its me... again for another experience in the world of learning arts and the "Shadow Game" XD, jk.. but you will learn something maybe. Here are 3 Random Cards I just made,like now,and as I go along, tell me what you think, opinions on everything from art to a small effect detail is A-ok, just please contact to the rules of concent and reply -Thanks

NAME: Water Goddess of Victory

CARD TYPE: Monster /Effect

ATTRIBUTE: Water

LEVEL STARS: 7

CARD RARITY: Secret Rare

CIRCULATION: Limited Edition

TYPE: Aqua

DISCRIPTION: If 2 or more Water-Type monsters are destroyed on your field while this card is in DEF position, switch this card into ATK position and destroy 1 face-up ATK card on opponents field.

ATK: 2400

DEF: 2100

CARD:


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Name: Alieana Siren Princess

Card Type: Monster/Gimini

Attribute: Light

Level Stars: 5

Card Rarity: Common

Type: Winged Beast

Discription: This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it be treated as an Effect monster with this effect:
•This card can attack twice after 2 Battle Phases

ATK: 1200

DEF: 2000

CARD:


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Name: Immortal Vampire Mistress

Card Type: Monster/Effect

Attribute: Dark

Level Stars: 9

Card Rarity: Ultra Rare

Circulation: Limited Edition

Type: Fiend

Discription: Once destroyed, this effect activates: This card is now treated as a Trap Card with this effect: Equip this card to 1 monster on your opponents field. As long as this card is equipped to the Target, DEF is reduced by 1000 until the card equipped reaches 0. Once 0 , equipped cards are sent to each Graveyard.

ATK: 3200

DEF: 1000

Card:



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Done ^_^

[-Noel-]

first and second card are so-so UP cards, if u control 3 WATER monsters, didnt i supposed to Attack that monster before the other monsters? the second card stat is less than average of Gemini with that type of effect, also if i didnt misunderstanding, that monster need to stay on the field for 4 turns or more to perform a double attack? so using that card effect is as easy as summoning Zushin :)

 

and the last one, sigh, that card's last effect is the most ridiculous text i have ever seen. how possible to "banished to the Graveyard"? and that stat, you should have a Summoning Condition or at least a Drawback for it to make it a 2 tribute 4000 ATK monster (yea, u should have know now that Lv.7 or higher monsters, even lv.12 if can normal sumoned, are required only 2 monsters for Tribute Summon or Set)

 

but im glad that all of ur monsters r not same as the last card, so it's mean u keep learning the card balances (i hope) and since that's very different from your former-self when u just entered the site, so good job :)

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

Card 1: Situational (unless your opponent uses something like RDA or other mass destruction to trigger it). Stats are decent for a Level 7; though given that you need to be in Defense Position for this to even occur and considering how powerful monsters are nowadays, this will most likely get run over before it does much

 

Card 2: Lower than average stats for a Level 5; delayed double attack effect and even if it does get it off; at 1200 ATK, won't be able to utilize it much unless you use a fair amount of Equip Cards or external support.

 

Card 3: So an Archfiend of Gilfer-esque card that lowers DEF by 1000 every turn. Given how monsters are nowadays, it'll kill them in 2-3 turns. As for stats, they're decent for a Level 9, given what this is doing.

 

 

Aside from that, you still need to fix OCG but an improvement from your earlier days