My First Card!

[.Rooster]

http://www.yugiohcardmaker.net/ycmaker/createcard.php?name=Polaris&cardtype=Fusion&subtype=effect&attribute=Light&level=8&rarity=Ultimate+Rare&picture=http%3A%2F%2Fimages.yugiohcardmaker.net%2F721863%2F718944549.png&circulation=1st+Edition+&set1=2B4X&set2=56KQ&inset=on&type=Machine&carddescription=1+LIGHT+monster+%2B+1+DARK+monster%0D%0ACannot+be+destroyed+by+battle.+Is+also+a+Dark%0D%0Aattribute+monster+while+face+up+on+the+field.+If+this+card+destroys+a+monster+in+Defence+Position%2C+inflict+piercing+battle+damage+to+your+opponent.+&atk=2800&def=2000&creator=&year=2013&serial=36127196

 

 

I wonder why this card was moved.

[-Noel-]

The Star-Type isn't exist, so u should repost this in Any Other Cards section

[.Rooster]

The Star-Type isn't exist, so u should repost this in Any Other Cards section

I edited it to a more appropriate type!

[-Noel-]

u should know 1 more thing that piercing damage is deal only when u attacking but "if this card destroy" clause is considering at the end of the Damage Step, after you successfully attack, so u should make it to "when this card attack a Defense Position monster" clause however I'm not so good at OCG so u should w8 for other member to fix it for you

[Digijosh]

This card is also DARK. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. If this card attacks a Defense Position monster, inflict piercing battle damage to your opponent.

[Scary Face]

This card is also DARK. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. If this card attacks a Defense Position monster, inflict piercing battle damage to your opponent.

still miss a little things "This card is also DARK-Attribute." and I suggest that it should gains DARK only on the field, so it should be "While face-up on the field, this card is also DARK-Attribute."

[.Rooster]

still miss a little things "This card is also DARK-Attribute." and I suggest that it should gains DARK only on the field, so it should be "While face-up on the field, this card is also DARK-Attribute."

thanks, but it is my first card.

[goonie]

Cannot be destroyed by battle. While face-up on the field, this card is also DARK-Attribute. If this card attacks a Defense Position monster, inflict piercing battle damage to your opponent.

 
Other than that, there are a ton of good images out there, I'm pretty sure you could have found a better one to represent the balance between Light and Dark. It has a very underwhelming effect and ATK for its Level. Level 8 with 2100, even with its 'cannot be destroyed by battle' save, is still a bit too weak in my opinion. Even if the Level were to change, I think you should buff its stats because wasting a Light and Dark on this will almost never pay off.

[Flash Flyer - Sakura]

This card's Attribute is also treated as DARK. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. If this card attacks a Defense Position monster, inflict piercing damage to your opponent.

 

(Fixing the earlier OCG correction)

 

With that said, even though this card has a "cannot be destroyed by battle" effect, given that it has a low ATK for a Level 8 and the DEF of most things, you won't be able to deal much damage (if any). The materials are generic enough that Chaos Decks could run this, assuming you boost this card's stats to something that's typical of a Level 8 and give it another effect besides piercing. As of it being treated as DARK Attribute, there are probably a few cards that could take advantage of it, but nothing comes to mind as of now (aside from using it to fulfill Attribute-specific requirements for Synchro/Xyz Material, but that's gimmicky)

 

Hopefully you know that card removal effects will still get rid of this.

 

On another note, YCM looks down at members posting their cards using attachments. Instead, use the image code from the generator (it's much easier)