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If you control no monsters except this card, you can activate the following effect: *If this card would be destroyed by battle or card effects, you can discard 1 card from your hand instead, then reveal the top 3 cards of your Deck: Special Summon any Level 3 or lower LIGHT monsters in face-up Attack Position; If you do, you can roll a six-sided die, this card's Level becomes equal to the result until the End Phase. You can only activate this effect of "Champion of the Sun" once per Duel.



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bump

 

Don't mean to mini mod (or what ever it is called these days), but I believe the rule is that you can only bump a thread after 24 hours have passed. Not many people are on so a review may take time to eventually come.

 

However I am not generally a good reviewer, I just don't have the right mindset. I can fix the OCG however (or try to the best of my ability) and try to make it a little more balanced.

 
If you control no monsters except this card, you can activate the following effect:
If this card would be destroyed by battle or card effects, you can discard 1 card from your hand instead, then reveal the top 3 cards of your Deck: Special Summon any Level 3 or lower LIGHT monsters in face-up Attack Position; If you do, you can roll a six-sided die, this card's Level becomes equal to the result until the End Phase. You can only activate this effect of "Champion of the Sun" once per Duel.
 
99% sure it's correct however I'm sure someone will come along and correct me.
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Don't mean to mini mod (or what ever it is called these days), but I believe the rule is that you can only bump a thread after 24 hours have passed. Not many people are on so a review may take time to eventually come.

 

However I am not generally a good reviewer, I just don't have the right mindset. I can fix the OCG however (or try to the best of my ability) and try to make it a little more balanced.

 
If you control no monsters except this card, you can activate the following effect:
If this card would be destroyed by battle or card effects, you can discard 1 card from your hand instead, then reveal the top 3 cards of your Deck: Special Summon any Level 3 or lower LIGHT monsters in face-up Attack Position; If you do, you can roll a six-sided die, this card's Level becomes equal to the result until the End Phase. You can only activate this effect of "Champion of the Sun" once per Duel.
 
99% sure it's correct however I'm sure someone will come along and correct me.

 

 

Thanks,, but I think yours is correct,, no need to wait someone else :P

 

 

I am glad this card can only use the effect once per Duel even so this still seems OP with the dice effect but then again this could drop dead if were unlucky. A nice card but overall. :)

Thank you :3

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i would reword as follows:

If this card would be destroyed by battle or card effects, if this is the only monster you control: You can discard 1 card from your hand and excavate the top 3 cards of your Deck; this card is not destroyed this time and Special Summon any excavated level 3 or lower LIGHT monsters in face-up Attack Position, and if youdo, you can roll a six-sided die, then this card's Level becomes equal to the die's result until the End Phase. Return the remaining excavated cards to the Deck. You can only activate this effect of "Champion of the Sun" once per Duel.

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i would reword as follows:

If this card would be destroyed by battle or card effects, if this is the only monster you control: You can discard 1 card from your hand and excavate the top 3 cards of your Deck; this card is not destroyed this time and Special Summon any excavated level 3 or lower LIGHT monsters in face-up Attack Position, and if youdo, you can roll a six-sided die, then this card's Level becomes equal to the die's result until the End Phase. Return the remaining excavated cards to the Deck. You can only activate this effect of "Champion of the Sun" once per Duel.

 

But the effect can only activate if it is the only monster you control, therefore my correction would be more correct, also excavate isn't exactly the right term to use here.

 

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"Excavate" and "reveal" are not always the same thing. Some cards will "reveal" cards but not "excavate" them. Unless a card specifically refers to "excavating", then it doesn’t excavate.

 

Source: https://yugiohblog.konami.com/articles/?p=5771

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i would reword as follows:

If this card would be destroyed by battle or card effects, if this is the only monster you control: You can discard 1 card from your hand and excavate the top 3 cards of your Deck; this card is not destroyed this time and Special Summon any excavated level 3 or lower LIGHT monsters in face-up Attack Position, and if youdo, you can roll a six-sided die, then this card's Level becomes equal to the die's result until the End Phase. Return the remaining excavated cards to the Deck. You can only activate this effect of "Champion of the Sun" once per Duel.

But the effect can only activate if it is the only monster you control, therefore my correction would be more correct, also excavate isn't exactly the right term to use here.

 

300px-PotofDuality-BP02-EN-R-1E.png

 

"Excavate" and "reveal" are not always the same thing. Some cards will "reveal" cards but not "excavate" them. Unless a card specifically refers to "excavating", then it doesn’t excavate.

 

Source: https://yugiohblog.konami.com/articles/?p=5771

 

Now I'm confused, But I still think that the current card's effect is okay ;)

Any new suggestions ?? 

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Out of curiosity, TC....
Why did you make a card that supports a luck-based Archetype(Assuming you intended this to be Sworn support), with a luck-based effect, that then proceeds to do even MORE luck-based actions?
Seems a bit inconsistent, really.
Add to it, it's also pretty damn absurd because it can potentially Summon a bunch of monsters out of nowhere. The fact this happens in the Battle Phase, with an effect you can force upon yourself, makes it a little lackluster.
I mean, your idea is amusing and all, just seems like a lot of it clashes with itself.

this is should be In Pop Culture cards.This is Kayle from League of Legends.

Except that only applies if the card itself is of said character, OR you feel like posting it in that section.
I mean, people can make cards of Pokemon, but still make them realistic and post them in the appropraite section. Pop Culture is more or less a weird joke card section.
So yes, this card is allowed to be here.
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Out of curiosity, TC....
Why did you make a card that supports a luck-based Archetype(Assuming you intended this to be Sworn support), with a luck-based effect, that then proceeds to do even MORE luck-based actions?
Seems a bit inconsistent, really.
Add to it, it's also pretty damn absurd because it can potentially Summon a bunch of monsters out of nowhere. The fact this happens in the Battle Phase, with an effect you can force upon yourself, makes it a little lackluster.
I mean, your idea is amusing and all, just seems like a lot of it clashes with itself.
 

 

Then what do you suggest ??  ;)

 

but also its good Overall :)

 

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Thanks :D

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If you do, you can roll a six-sided die, this card's Level becomes equal to the result until the End Phase.

 

I think you mean YOUR end phase, or else the dice roll would be useless in terms of trying to Xyz or Synchro summon. Unless you try and destroy it yourself on your own turn, but that'd be a waste of a card.

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I think you mean YOUR end phase, or else the dice roll would be useless in terms of trying to Xyz or Synchro summon. Unless you try and destroy it yourself on your own turn, but that'd be a waste of a card.

"until the End Phase" means until either yours or your opponent's. Depending on the turn you activate this effect

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I know, so activating it during your opponents would make the dice roll effect basically useless, unless you have a card that lets your synchro summon during their turn.

yeah of course... that will make the player make more than 1 strategy

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