The_Last_One Posted March 20, 2008 Report Share Posted March 20, 2008 This is my second try so please don't be too harsh Main Characters Name:Chris SanchezHairstyle:black short Mohawk in the frontOutfit:Mexico unzipped sweater with black pants and shirt and white shoesDeck:Neon Hero DeckSignature card:Neon Pet - Paint Edit:Story So Far-There is a kid named Chris and his best friend Seth.One day they heard about Monster Zone a new trading card game. But one day the Mayor was making a new duel system. Then a new never before seen card for monster Zone.The next day it was stolen. Some place else-There is a Dark ruler wanting to take over Monster Zone thats why he has 30 Shadow Riders willing to destroy all duelist and take over by defeating everyone.If this happens all the universe is in trouble. Name:SethHairstyle: Spiky blondOutfit: black sweater with white shoes and shirt and blue pantsDeck: Space Hero DeckSignature card: Space Pet - Starlight Name: DannyHairstyle: black spikesOutfit: Blue pants with white shoes brown sweaterDeck: Eternal Hero DeckSignature card: Eternal Hero - Flare Chapter One New Duel System======================================================= Seth:Hey Chris wait upSeth was running with his brand new deck then tripped.Chris: Are You ok? Seth:Yeah at least i have my deckChris: Yeah i will never lose mine.Seth:Well lets go downtown to see the Vitural Dome(V-Dome) Chris:Yeah lets go!Then both started to run in the front of the lineMayor:I now declare the V-Dome open Then the Mayor took out huge scizors and cut the line.Random Guy:Yeahhhh!Then the doors slided open and every one ran in. Seth:Lets check out the V-Dome and battle my new Space Hero'sChris: SureThen Chris bumped in to someone. ???:Watch Punk you know what im going to defeat you in a doubl duel with this twerp of yoursSeth:Hey I'm not a twerp ???:You sure are anyway my names DannyChris: No i will duel you solo.Danny:Sure why not They both headed toward the V-Dome.Then the door open Chris and Danny went inside and the door then closedThen there were two deck boxes Chris put his in one and Danny in the other Then a window appeared and there were his 5 cards to start and they showed what they do when they clicked on it so did on Danny's sideDanny:I start *Draws* Then a extra card appeared on his sideDanny:I summon Eternal Hero - Dainkria in attack modeand put one face-down and end my turn CIH(Cards in hand)4MOF(Monsters on field)1SOT(Spells or traps)1LP 5000 Eternal Hero - DainkriaType/Dark Level/3ATK/1200 DEF/1000Eternal Hero/Effect:Gains 300 ATK and DEF each timeyou summon a "Eternal Hero" Chris:What am I going to do I don't know how to summon these cards like this To Be Continued ...........Please Comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Zeppeli Gyro Supreme Posted March 21, 2008 Report Share Posted March 21, 2008 It really confused me.. You didn't explain things that happened too well, but I guess for one of your first Fan Fics it's pretty good. Great writing is hard to do. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wolfguy26 Posted March 21, 2008 Report Share Posted March 21, 2008 Wow dont triple post. It is confusing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Last_One Posted March 21, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 21, 2008 sorry i forgot i edit it check above.Feel Free to join the game on the RP as soon i make it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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