Sunn O))) Posted February 27, 2014 Report Share Posted February 27, 2014 When this card is Normal Summoned: You can add up to 2 "Sniper Squirrel" from your deck to your hand. You can banish this card from your hand or Graveyard; destroy 1 face-up card on the field. You can only use 1 "Sniper Squrrel" effect per turn, and only once that turn. [spoiler=Version 2] When this card is Normal Summoned: You can add up to 2 "Sniper Squirrel" from your deck or Graveyard to your hand. You can banish this card from your hand or Graveyard; destroy 1 face-up card on the field. You can only use this effect of "Sniper Squirrel" once per turn. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Version 1] When this card is Summoned: You can send 1 EARTH monster from your deck to your Graveyard; add up to 2 "Sniper Squirrel" from your deck or Graveyard to your hand. Once per turn, during either player's turn: You can banish this card from your hand or Graveyard; destroy 1 face-up card on the field. [/spoiler] Help me make it less Broken Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted February 27, 2014 Report Share Posted February 27, 2014 For starters, Make it "When Normal Summoned", which would allow for more than just a One For One play to set it off. Then make it so that you need to control that third copy to blow stuff up, otherwise the third copy will just give you an extra bomb from the Graveyard. OR Give it a specific timing. During the Standby Phase, during the Battle Phase, Main Phase 2, etc. That'd justify it a little more. I don't think we would need much more than that. It's not THAT outrageous of an idea. EDIT: Oh, and the Foolish effect directly outclasses the Armageddon Knight for EARTHs. I am not sure you should keep that one.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sunn O))) Posted February 27, 2014 Author Report Share Posted February 27, 2014 Better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Delibirb Posted February 27, 2014 Report Share Posted February 27, 2014 Cards made with the full knowledge and intent of being broken belong in "Any Other Cards" section. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sunn O))) Posted February 27, 2014 Author Report Share Posted February 27, 2014 Cards made with the full knowledge and intent of being broken belong in "Any Other Cards" section. Then you realize that it's not broken.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted February 28, 2014 Report Share Posted February 28, 2014 Cards made with the full knowledge and intent of being broken belong in "Any Other Cards" section. If it's posted in this section by a not-so-new member, odds are that that member knows that, and that the reason of it being here is the purpose of this very section: To give feedback or at the very least comment on the card's qualities if it's balance is alright. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Delibirb Posted February 28, 2014 Report Share Posted February 28, 2014 If it's posted in this section by a not-so-new member, odds are that that member knows that, and that the reason of it being here is the purpose of this very section: To give feedback or at the very least comment on the card's qualities if it's balance is alright. But he said it was intentionally made broken. Regardless of what he wanted to do afterward, cards that are made as such belong in AOC. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sunn O))) Posted February 28, 2014 Author Report Share Posted February 28, 2014 But he said it was intentionally made broken. Regardless of what he wanted to do afterward, cards that are made as such belong in AOC. Did you read the card? It wasn't broken, just a bit OP. Plus, I balanced it a bit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted February 28, 2014 Report Share Posted February 28, 2014 But he said it was intentionally made broken. Regardless of what he wanted to do afterward, cards that are made as such belong in AOC. I know what you are saying, but the way I see it: There is a technique some use in game design, were you start off making your pieces overpowered and tone it down from there, rather than the other way around. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akiyuri Posted March 1, 2014 Report Share Posted March 1, 2014 Gonna add this card to my deck. MST for spell, Squirel for monster. Back to topic, it is so so so so so powerful. I am not exaggerating at all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sunn O))) Posted March 1, 2014 Author Report Share Posted March 1, 2014 Updated once again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted March 2, 2014 Report Share Posted March 2, 2014 I guess it's more fair now, though it's not like graving them from the Grave was "recycling" them either, but I do suppose you can't go Burial from the D.D. into getting them back. I personally think the card is fine. It's like 1/3 of blaster's effect but as a +0 when you don't Normal Summon it, and the Normal Summon effect holds them back. Not to mention only hits face-ups. Completely fine IMO. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sunn O))) Posted March 2, 2014 Author Report Share Posted March 2, 2014 So it's balanced now? Anyway to make it better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sleepy Posted March 2, 2014 Report Share Posted March 2, 2014 I don't think it needs anything. There's no real way to abuse it. Maybe you can search and destroy in the same turn with the effect of Pyro Clock of Destiny, but not in a million years will that be considered "broken" at all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sunn O))) Posted March 2, 2014 Author Report Share Posted March 2, 2014 I don't think it needs anything. There's no real way to abuse it. Maybe you can search and destroy in the same turn with the effect of Pyro Clock of Destiny, but not in a million years will that be considered "broken" at all. In that case, I'm done with this. Moving on to another card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junkwarriordude Posted March 2, 2014 Report Share Posted March 2, 2014 A really good card. Very well balanced and great artwork ;) keep up the good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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