ichigo420 Posted April 2, 2014 Report Share Posted April 2, 2014 This is the ultimate 1 i want your opinion on its attack like if its to much, not enough etc... [spoiler=Demon HERO Death][/spoiler] his effect:This card can only be summoned by the effect of "Death's Seal Broken" and cannot be summoned any other way. This card can only attack while "Demon HERO Keeper Of The Seal" and "Demon HERO Keeper Of The Gate" are in the banished pile. This monster cannot be destroyed by card effect. [spoiler=Demon HERO Death, Burst Mode][/spoiler] This card cannot be normal summoned or set this card must first be special summoned(from hand) by removing from play 1 "Demon HERO Death" and 3 or more other Demon HERO monsters from your graveyard. This monster gains attack and defense equal to the combined attack of all Demon HERO monsters used to special summon this card(max 4000) . here are some other Demon HERO's [spoiler=Death's Seal Broken][/spoiler] By banishing 1 "Demon HERO Keeper Of The Seal" and 1 "Demon HERO Keeper Of The Gate" and special summon 1 "Demon HERO Death" from your deck or hand. [spoiler=Demon HERO Keeper Of The Seal][/spoiler] This monster cannot be destroyed by battle. When this monster is sent from the field to the graveyard you can special summon 1 "Demon HERO Keeper Of The Gate" in face-up attack mode and special summon this card to your side of the field. [spoiler=Demon HERO Keeper Of The Gate][/spoiler] This monster can only be summoned by the effect of "Demon HERO Keeper Of The Seal" when this monster is summoned by this effect target one card on your opponents side of the field and destroy that target. [spoiler=Demon HERO Keeper Of Burst] i use this card to get these in my hand [spoiler=Demon HERO Shina, Daughter Of Death ][/spoiler]This card cannot be normal summoned or set must first be special summoned(from your hand) only while there is a face-up "Demon HERO Death" or "Demon HERO Death, Burst Mode" on your side of the field. this monster cannot attack your opponent directly[spoiler=Death Burst][/spoiler]While "Demon HERO Death, Burst Mode" is face-up on the field all effect monsters in your opponents graveyard, banished pile, and on the field's effects are negated.(you must have 1000 life points or less to activate and resolve this effect.)[/spoiler] Once per turn, you can discard 1 "Demon HERO" monster from your hand to add to your hand 1 level 4 or lower "Demon HERO" monster and 1 spell card from your deck. [spoiler=HellGate][/spoiler] all fiend-type monsters on your side of the field gain 300 ATK and DEF, each time your opponent draws a card add 1 'DEMON" counter,when there are 4 counters you can special summon 1 "DEMON HERO Mother Of Darkness" from hand or deck in face-up defense mode. here is the family of darkness [spoiler=Demon HERO Mother Of Darkness][/spoiler] depending on this cards battle position you gain 1 of these effects. *Attack Mode:your opponent cannot target any other "Demon HERO" monster(s) on the field except this one. *Defense Mode:Once per turn, you can special summon 1 level 4 or lower "Demon HERO" monster from your deck in face-up attack position. [spoiler=Demon HERO Son Of Darkness][/spoiler] this monster can only be summoned by the effect of "Demon HERO Mother Of Darkness".this monster is unaffected by trap effects. This monster cannot attack your opponent directly. [spoiler=Demon HERO Daughter Of Darkness][/spoiler] this monster can only be summoned by the effect of "Demon HERO Mother Of Darkness".this monster is unaffected by trap effects. Once per turn, you can target 1 monster your opponent controls equip that monster to this card. This monster can attack directly during the turn this effect was activated, also banish this monster and the monster equipped to this card at the end phase. [spoiler=Demon HERO Father Of Darkness][/spoiler] depending on this cards battle position you gain 1 of these effects. *Attack Mode:your opponent cannot target any other "Demon HERO" monster(s) on the field except this one. *Defense Mode: you can special summon"Demon HERO Mother Of Darkness" from your deck in face-up attack position. [spoiler=Demon HERO Demon Reaper][/spoiler] When this card is special summoned by a "Demon HERO" monsters effect this card becomes a level 4 and gains 1000 ATK until the end phase.Once per turn,this monster can attack directly. [spoiler=Demon HERO Dark Assailant][/spoiler] When this card is special summoned to your side of the field due to the effect of a "Demon HERO" monster special summon from you deck 1 level 4 or lower "Demon HERO" monster to your side of the field. [spoiler=Demon HERO Destiny Destroyer][/spoiler] 2 level 8 "Demon HERO" monsters when this card is xyz summoned you can add 1 "Demon HERO" monster from your graveyard to your hand.Once per turn, by detaching 1 xyz material from this card all effect monsters effects, other than FIEND-type monsters on your side of the field, are negated until your next stand-by phase. [spoiler=Demon HERO Demonic Priestess] [/spoiler] "2 level 4 "Demon HERO" monsters This monster gains attack equal to the number of "Demon HERO" monsters in your graveyard.Once per turn, detach 1 xyz and discard 1 "Demon HERO" monster from your hand to the graveyard and draw 2 card. [spoiler=Demon HERO Demonic Mistress][/spoiler] 2 level 4 "Demon HERO" monsters Once per turn, you can detach 1 xyz material and discard 1 "Demon HERO" monster from your hand to draw 2 cards. [spoiler=Demon HERO Demonic Champion][/spoiler] this card can only attack by removing 1 "DEMON HERO" monster in your graveyard from play. if you guys have a better idea for an effect for this card please don't hesitate to tell me. [spoiler=Demon HERO Dark Master][/spoiler] while this card is face-up on the field any cards that are sent to the graveyard are banished instead. [spoiler=Demon HERO Lady Of Darkness][/spoiler] if this card is in the graveyard you can summon "DEMON HERO" monsters for 1 less tribute, if this card is in the banished pile, all"DEMON HERO" monsters ATK increase by 200. Now I need some help i don't know what a good effect is for this card, help [spoiler=Demon HERO Dark Buster][/spoiler] If you control no monsters you can special summon this card from your hand. Once per turn, if this card attacks your opponents monster neither are destroyed and both players draw a card if its a monster special summon that monster in face-up defense position and it becomes the same level as this card. If its a spell card it goes to the graveyard, if its a trap both players send it back to the deck and shuffle. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Megamaw Posted April 2, 2014 Report Share Posted April 2, 2014 It honestly depends on the other cards in the set. It seems like a very tough summoning condition, so it's fine, I think. Usually the highest ATK points printed on a card is 5000. Maybe you could instead add an effect that gradually ramps up it's ATK? It's also customary on this forum to post the text on the card below the picture, so we can correct it easier. Would you mind editing that in? I have a few card grammar corrections to make. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
G.B. Sparticus Posted April 2, 2014 Report Share Posted April 2, 2014 intresting, but lower the atk by 1000 plz. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ichigo420 Posted April 2, 2014 Author Report Share Posted April 2, 2014 there you all go i have fixed the problems (i think) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trebuchet MS Posted April 3, 2014 Report Share Posted April 3, 2014 If your card interacts with other custom cards, please post those up too so we can fully evaluate how easy it is to use. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
liavcol Posted April 3, 2014 Report Share Posted April 3, 2014 Look, I'm the biggest fan of the HERO archtype and I honestly have to say that it seems pretty interesting. However, please post the other Demon HEROes and please tell me a little about them, like what is their backstory and what are their purpose. Because as I see it (by this card only), all them are Fiend type monsters right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ichigo420 Posted April 3, 2014 Author Report Share Posted April 3, 2014 yes they are all fiend types Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
liavcol Posted April 3, 2014 Report Share Posted April 3, 2014 yes they are all fiend types In that case I suggest that they will be a part of the Evil HEROes, because the Evil HEROes need more support + I have some other changes I would like to make in the types of the cards. If you want PM me the pics you used for the cards and I will remake them for you :D (Don't worry, I won't post them, just in my deviantART page but also with credit for you). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
liavcol Posted April 22, 2014 Report Share Posted April 22, 2014 Well they are good but still there some changes I think that need to be made... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ichigo420 Posted April 23, 2014 Author Report Share Posted April 23, 2014 please dont hesitate to tell me what changes you think should be made cuse im going to be using these in a fan series for youtube. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
liavcol Posted May 7, 2014 Report Share Posted May 7, 2014 please dont hesitate to tell me what changes you think should be made cuse im going to be using these in a fan series for youtube. Next time, when you want me to answer fast, quote me, it is sending me a notification. However, we've been talking about it through pms and I said that I want the art for the cards so I can make the changes and show you + now that you want it to be used on youtube it is even a better choice that I'll make the cards, my template is much larger then the one you are using now, so I think it will fit better for youtube + it is kinda of HD... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ichigo420 Posted May 8, 2014 Author Report Share Posted May 8, 2014 Next time, when you want me to answer fast, quote me, it is sending me a notification. However, we've been talking about it through pms and I said that I want the art for the cards so I can make the changes and show you + now that you want it to be used on youtube it is even a better choice that I'll make the cards, my template is much larger then the one you are using now, so I think it will fit better for youtube + it is kinda of HD... nice i do appreciate your help are you by any chance using Photoshop? if not than can you tell me what your using? and thank you for saying that it is becomeing a good set because my friend And_Then_There_Were_None has been rageing on them he keeps saying their too op but all his IRL decks and the deck he has created are much more op because of the he has build/created them they are much more op than my Demon HERO's. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
liavcol Posted May 8, 2014 Report Share Posted May 8, 2014 Well yeah, I do use photoshop. However, everyone else using photoshop, you have to know how to make the cards not just use photoshop. And you're welcome.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ichigo420 Posted May 8, 2014 Author Report Share Posted May 8, 2014 Well yeah, I do use photoshop. However, everyone else using photoshop, you have to know how to make the cards not just use photoshop. And you're welcome.. by the way do you know what devpro is? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
liavcol Posted May 9, 2014 Report Share Posted May 9, 2014 by the way do you know what devpro is? Yeah why? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ichigo420 Posted May 9, 2014 Author Report Share Posted May 9, 2014 Yeah why? do you have said devpro?and if so how do you get it to show the games available and would you like to play sometime? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
liavcol Posted May 9, 2014 Report Share Posted May 9, 2014 No I don't have that... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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