Cyberus Archetype *Reps for Reviews*

[Aix]

Decided I might want to try recording some Duel Portal Duels, so I made a new Archetype.

[spoiler='CYBER-EN001 Cyberus Prototype']

During the End Phase, if this card was Normal Summoned this turn OR destroyed a monster by battle this turn: You can add 1 "Cyberus" monster from your Deck to your hand. The effect of "Cyberus Prototype" can only be activated once per turn.[/spoiler]

[spoiler='CYBER-EN002 Cyberus Scientist']

Once per turn, if this card is in Defense Position: You can add 1 "Cyberus" card from your Deck to your hand. If this card is destroyed or banished by your opponent's card effect: Special Summon 1 "Cyberus" Xyz Monster from your Extra Deck and attach up to 2 monsters in your Graveyard to it as Xyz Material.[/spoiler]

[spoiler='CYBER-EN003 Cyberus Elite]

This monster cannot be destroyed by battle. When this card is flipped face-up: You can reveal 1 "Cyberus" monster in your hand; until your next End Phase, this card gains 2000 ATK and DEF and is unaffected by your opponent's card effects.[/spoiler]

[spoiler='CYBER-EN004 Cyberus Regulator]

When this card you control is destroyed by battle or banished: Negate the effects of all Attack Position or all Defense Position monsters your opponent currently controls. You can discard 1 "Cyberus" card to declare 1 card name; this card and cards with that name cannot be used until your next Standby Phase.[/spoiler]

[spoiler='CYBER-EN005 Cyberus Soldier]

When this card is destroyed by battle after it was flipped face-up: You can add up to 2 "Cyberus" cards from your Deck to your hand. You can banish this card from your Graveyard; this turn, you can Set 1 "Cyberus" monster in addition to your Normal Summon/Set.[/spoiler]

[spoiler='CYBER-EN006 Cyberus Assassin]

When this card is destroyed or banished by your opponent's card effect: You can reveal 1 "Cyberus" monster in your hand to target 1 card your opponent controls; destroy it. If you control a face-up "Cyberus" monster: You can banish this card from your Graveyard to target 1 card on the field; destroy it.[/spoiler]

[spoiler='CYBER-EN007 Cyberus Valkyrie]

You can Special Summon this card (from your hand) by banishing 1 "Cyberus" monster in your hand or Graveyard or returning 1 "Cyberus" monster you control to your hand. Banish this card when it leaves the field.[/spoiler]

[spoiler='CYBER-EN008 Cyberus Storm]

Banish 1 card in your hand and 1 "Cyberus" card in your hand or Graveyard; banish 1 card on the field or 1 random card in your opponent's hand.[/spoiler]

[spoiler='CYBER-EN009 Cyberus Commando]

2 Level 4 "Cyberus" monsters

This monster gains 500 ATK for each Xyz Material attached to it. Once per turn, if a "Cyberus" monster you control would be destroyed or banished, you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card instead.[/spoiler]

[spoiler='CYBER-EN010 Cyberus Spacetime Destroyer]

2 Level 4 "Cyberus" monsters

When this card is Summoned: You can detach all Xyz Material from this card and return up to 2 cards you control to the hand; shuffle up to 3 cards on the field into the Deck. When this card leaves the field: You can Special Summon 1 of your banished "Cyberus" monsters. Each effect of "Cyberus Spacetime Destroyer" can only be activated once per Duel.[/spoiler]

[Toffee.]

Prototype is fine.
Scientist is a little on the stupid side, even if it DOES trigger off card effect. But this is mostly because of Destroyer. I'll get to that, though.
Elite is rather absurd, but in a gimmicky way; It's iffy, but in a bad way.
Regulator is fine.
Soldier is fine.
Assassin is silly; It's fine.
Valk is a generic "Use me as Xyz Fodder"-type of card; It's fine.
Storm; Can't tell if it's missing a symbol of some kind(Assuming it's a Quick-Play; It's fine regardless.
Commando is more or less a weird Lead Yoke; It's fine.
Spacetime's drawback is a bit of a cop-out, on the grounds that it's the same as stuff like Glow-Up Bulb/Spore/etc. That aside... It's basically Tiaramasu, and we all know how well that turned out... Regardless, the fact it's matched up with a semi-gimmicky Archetype holds it back somewhat, but the fact it's still a Tiara is iffy.

All in all, I only really saw a few things that were a little wrong. The rest of it is fine.

[Aix]

I wanted to make it so that it could only be used once in a Duel so that you couldn't just go and waste it, but I suppose I should tone it down a little.

[Toffee.]

I wanted to make it so that it could only be used once in a Duel so that you couldn't just go and waste it, but I suppose I should tone it down a little.

Nothing wrong with the "Once per duel" clause, really. Just, again, it's just stupid on the grounds that cards with it can be all: "LEL IM BROKE BUT U ONLY GET 1 USE". Since if you think about it, it wouldn't matter if it's wasted or not, since you can still make plays with it.

[Aix]

since you can still make plays with it.

What do you mean?

[Toffee.]

What do you mean?

If a card says "Once per duel", then you, theoretically, never waste it. Because as long as it still does what it's meant to do, then you can still make a play off it.

[ToaCody]

Ah, so this is the "Cyberus" archetype I managed to glimpse while trying to spectate. I'm still not card-savvy enough to give a real review, but if your intent was to create a Borg-esque feel through calling in reinforcements and tech in response to your opponent, I think you hit the nail on the head.