Alanna the Lady Paladin & 1 support card

[I Hate Snatch Steal]

 

If this card is summoned, except if special summoned by its own effect: you can banish it; draw 2 cards and you can conduct an additional Normal Summon/Set this turn. You can only use this effect of "Alanna the Lady Paladin" once per turn. During your Standby Phase, if this card was banished this way: you can discard 1 card; special summon this banished card. Once per turn, you can discard 1 card, then target 1 card your opponent controls; destroy that target.

 

 

You can tribute this card; special summon 1 level 8 LIGHT Warrior-Type monster from your hand. During either player's turn: you can discard this card, then target 1 Warrior-Type monsters that was sent from the field to the graveyard by an effect this turn or that was banished from the field by an effect this turn; special summon that target. You can only use 1 "Keladry the Lady Squire" effect per turn, and only once that turn.

[iC RiskQ]

I'd think the lore would go a little somthing like this.

 

[spoiler='Alanna the Lady Paladin']If this card is Summoned, except by its own effect, you can banish this card; Draw 2 cards. This turn, you can Normal Summon/Set in  additional to your Normal Summon/Set. You can only use this effect of "Alanna the Lady Paladin" once per turn. During your Standby Phase, if this card was banished this way, you can discard 1 card; Special Summon this banished card. Once per turn, you can discard 1 card, then target 1 card your opponent controls; Destroy that target.[/spoiler]

 

Seems like it has a lot of effects all packed in one card. I mean not only do you draw 2 cards, but you get another Normal Summon/Set. Nonetheless it's alright.

 

[spoiler='Keladry the Lady Squire']You can tribute this card; Special Summon 1 Level 8 LIGHT Warrior-type monster from your hand. During either player's turn: You can discard this card; Target 1 Warrior-type monster that was sent from the field to the Graveyard by an effect this turn or that was banished from the field by an effect this turn; Special Summon that target. You can only use 1 "Keladry the Lady Squire" effect per turn, and only once that turn.[/spoiler]

 

Seems a bit weird, I mean, you can literally get this card back. Being as it was tributed/sent to the Graveyard by an effect. Of course, unless you made intentionally to be that way, then hey, go crazy right?

 

8/10. Not bad, dude. :J

[tayfga15]

Drawing 2 cards is strong enough as it is; what's the point of the additional Normal Summon/Set?

Core concept is good btw.